And I, I Don't want to let you know I, I Drown in your memory, I, I Don't want to let this go, I, I Don't...
If I could fall into the sky, do you think time would pass me by...
'Cause everything's so wrong and I don't belong, living in your precious memories.
Cos you know I'd walk a thousand miles, if I could just see you tonight.
Alize laughed, "Oh yeah, come on, let's go save the world." She said as she bounded over to the door, a huge grin spread across her face. The planet may not be where she was from originally but she'd been hiding there a long time and had come to love it. She'd hate to see it destroyed and if it did she had no where to go. She felt a moments sadness wash over her as she felt a little...homesick? Her grin returned almost immediatly as she reached the door. Earth might be good but it was a tad boring for someone like her, nothing was a challenge anymore, and this was some much needed fun. She opened the door to reveal they were in a backalley, out of the way, but all around them were the sights and sounds of Los Vegas. "This will be fun" She said, giving the Master a smile that unbeknownst to her could even be described as flirtatious.
D'aww thankyou whoever you are, that means a lot and I'll try ^,^
Oh yeah, of course, good times, good times.
Where/how did you find those? And no, they're not murder. They're just me playing around and I bet you do taste all yummy. ^,^
Spoiler FIRST [ ]You think you’re better than other species [ ]You’ve run away from home [x]You have been bullied [ ]You are frequently sarcastic [ ]You have brown eyes [ ]You occasionally wear a cape [ ]You wear reading glasses [x]People say you’re very wise Total: 2 SECOND [x]Justice and righteousness are important to you [ ]You are ruthless [ ]You like playing the recorder [ ]You consider yourself a genius [ ]Your pockets hold EVERYTHING [ ]You like hats [ ]Your eyes change color [x]You can be a bit childish Total: 2 THIRD [x]You love science [x]You want peace between everyone [ ]You are a master of aikido [x]You love playing with gadgets [x]You tend to be optimistic [ ]You occasionally perform magic tricks [ ]You also love vintage cars [ ]You can be somewhat bitter Total: 4 FOURTH [ ]You wear long scarves. Very long scarves [x]Yo-yo’s are fun to play with [ ]You occasionally wear floppy hats [ ]Would you like a jelly baby? [ ]Your personality is very different from others [ ]Your pockets are dimensionally transcendental [ ]People say you’re charming [ ]You can tell if you can trust someone or not right away Total: 1 FIFTH [ ]You wear “brainy specs” to look clever, when need be [ ]You can be a bit vunerable [x]You prefer thinking and problem solving over physical activity [x]You hate violence [ ]You like celery [ ]You tend to panic when under pressure [ ]Rosemary makes you sneeze [x]You will openly express your hopes and fears to your companions(friends) Total: 3 SIXTH [ ]You can be compassionate, but hardly anybody but your friends see this side [ ]You also can be very arrogant [ ]And melodramatic [ ]You decided to become a vegetarian, but have abandoned that practice [ ]You love poetry [ ]You are very fond of cats [x]You have problems with directions [x]You are very determined to do what is right Total: 2 SEVENTH [ ]People don’t really trust you [ ]You tend to act like a fool to hide your intellect [ ]You have a very dark side, though [ ]You like chess [x]You would rather use words to resolve problems instead of violence [ ]You use umbrellas to accomplish tasks other than keeping the rain off of you [x]You are very eccentric [ ]You like manipulating people Total: 2 EIGHTH [x]You love and respect all life [ ]You are very romantic [ ]You often have panic attacks [ ]You don’t understand the idea of gloating [ ]You have a habit of repeating someones name when trying to make a point [ ]Or when excited [ ]You have smoked [ ]You are very afraid of heights Total: 1 SHALKA!Doctor [ ]You can be a bit bitter and *****y [ ]You change your moods easily [x]You have a love for showtunes [x]You have someone very dear to you [x]You are a bit reckless at times [ ]You can be patronizing to others [ ]You have a dark sense of humor [x]You tend to be ignored Total: 4 NINTH [ ]You like wearing leather jackets [x]You can be very emotional [ ]Although, you can hide your sorrow with manic behavior and wit [ ]You can be ruthless [ ]You cuss frequently [ ]You tend to say “fantastic” a lot [x]You like bananas [ ]You can be violent Total: 2 TENTH [x]You are a happy person [x]You are also enthusiastic, especially at inappropriate times [ ]You feel very lonely [x]You are a fan of Harry Potter [x]You are a very forgiving person [x]You prefer rock music [x]You think that life is beautiful [ ]Allons-y! Total: 6 ELEVENTH [x]You don’t care if people think you’re eccentric [x]You can be very childlike [x]Fezzes are cool [ ]You have a very good memory [x]You talk with your hands [x]You tend to ramble a lot [ ]You would rather face situations alone, rather than put your friends at risk [ ]You have green eyes Total: 5 Looks like I'm 10 ^,^
Oh okay then. I don't/didn't, I mean I sometimes want to slap you but I'll apologise and call you awesome straight after because that's what I do. Never want to kill you, that's a bit extreme for my tastes.
Why? Just wondering.
Hmm? I'm afraid I'm a little late to the party but I never could resist a request by a gentleman such as yourself, so I'm posting albeit late.
My hair is dark blonde, slowly turning brown, though it pretty much changes colour depending what the light is. It's very short for me currently as it's barely reaching my shoulders and at the moment it is also very messy as I need to brush it.
My eyes are blue/grey and at the moment all I want to do is shut them and go back to bed.
You're never alone, silly.
Oh, I was ninja'd, can I please have 17 insead then?
Yay ^,^ Thankyou Oh me too ^,^ They are really quite awesome things. Though they are annoying when you run.
Here goes nothing... Spoiler: Nights You presentation was reasonably good, you can clearly see who is speaking and when, however it did get a little messy at the start when each character had one line per go. To me it felt like I was reading a one liner rp all merged together into one post. Your post mainly concentrated on the speech, which is fair enough but in future challenges I would like to see a bit more detail aside from the speech. Perhaps consider writing about the character’s thoughts and feelings. Also you kept switched from past tense to present tense a few times in your post, try to stay in past tense for the whole post. Other than that, good job on posting first and you clearly put effort into it. Spoiler: Tale I just love the interaction between your characters, I can really visualise it in my head and it made me laugh. I’d like it if you could have described them a bit more other than the dialogue, like describing what they look like. Your presentation is fairly clear and readable. I enjoyed your post but there’s still room for improvement and a bit more detail wouldn’t go amiss. Good Luck. Spoiler: flowergothic You presentation wasn’t bad; it was fairly clear who was speaking at each point. However it wouldn’t harm you to make your paragraphs a bit longer than one or two lines and to expand on them, adding detail. The way you described the street wasn’t bad, I quite like how you got across the feel of the place, though still quite short and I’d of liked you to extend it. Also I still don’t have much of a feel for your characters, I’m still unsure about their personalities and what they look like, which was the point of the challenge. So I’d like it if you could work on that. Spoiler: Miaulement You have quite an unusual style of presentation by putting speech by different people in the same paragraph, which is a little confusing, but you’ve made it obvious with your colours who is speaking. I found the dialogue fairly entertaining and I like the detail you’ve added. I think you’ve made a relatively strong start, just be sure to keep working on it and make sure you make everything clear. Spoiler: Master of Keyblades To me your post seemed very unsubstantial; it felt like I didn’t get a very good feel for your characters and if it didn’t keep my interest very well. It didn’t seem as if anything really happened of interest in your post. You need to add a bit more detail and expand on it, maybe think about your characters thoughts and feelings to add a layer of depth. You post is like a skeleton and you need to flesh it out a bit.
There's are really good, You're really got a sense of atmosphere to them and the setting works really well. I particularly like the 2 (in the first lot) as that looks really realistic and it's quite effective. Also, being an archer myself (I've actually been shooting all day today xD), I'm naturally curious about your bow. Can you actually use it or is it simply for show? It's quite cool either way.
They are bouncy.
