OOC: sorry about the long post... I just wanted to get the image out there of how my character percives things, if you guys don't want to read through the whole thing then you can skip to the last paragraph, the short one. IC: An awareness settled onto the being, as if waking up from a long sleep; then the being thought for a moment, after its head cleared more, slumber? it thought, wondering at the strange and alien sensation of waking up. The being had never felt this before, though it had seen other creatures do it, and the being understood the process. The being noticed another odd feeling, an agony it had never felt before. What is this? it wondered, impartial to the pain, then the being percieved a sound, a gasping, like that a mortal would make when trying to breathe. A calm filled the being, a coolness in an area of its body. The agony faded. I am... breathing? it thought, as it attempted to make sense of all that it was perceving... a pressure comming from... behind? that couldn't be right, the being didn't have a behind. Then the being felt something strange, the darkness broken by the opening of two slits in front of it, rays of light pouring into the slits. Eyes? it wondered, as the slits opened and closed, the world beyond them snapping into focus. The being lay like that for several minutes, discovering several senses that it had not experienced before, then at last it rose from its pod. Walking it thought to itself, a bit amused at the strangeness of it, though the being quickly became accustomed to it, and then learned to run as well, as it had seen mortals do. About an hour after waking up, the being had begun to notice a strange desire... it was unsure of what it was until it remembered observing mortals doing something they called drinking. The being wandered aimlessly through the black woods, searching for a river or a stream with which it might quench its thirst. Unaware to it, the being was straying close to where Raven was looking at plants.
Mark brought his ship in for a landing, setting it down not too far from Sora's gummi ship. He broke the seal on his cockpit canopy, and hit a button to open it, then he climbed out of the cockpit and shut it behind him. He jumped down off the red wings of his ship, and by the time he hit the ground he was a lithe adolecent cheetah, though his dog tags (cheetah tags?) still hung around his neck. After taking a few minutes to get accustomed to moving around in this form, he padded over to Sora's ship to see that the others too had transformed. "This is... strange," he muttered, batting at a bit of his hair as it hung into his eyes, "how are we going to do things when we don't have hands?"
ROFLMAO That's why you don't find it attractive!
Drags Llave to a hospital, luckly it wasn't a fatal shot.
I'm seeing a few errors in the book so far... and I'm only a couple pages it, it seems great though, if you could fix some of the typos, like 'are' instead of 'a' when it is supposed to be plural, or putting the 's' on the end of some plural words.
Amen, I'll read immediately, anything that would make a twilight fan cringe will make me happy.
O_o what is its name? I must look it up at once!
I am better than all of you because my mom says she's proud of me I'm new here, beat that! (in all reality... I'm probably the biggest noob on the site right now)
I sometimes think I have multiple personalities, but the two voices in my head that bicker all the time might be a result of too much rock n' roll music when I was an infant (or the time I was smacked on the head with a baseball bat).
I'm all ready to go, how are we going to get to the other thread though, will we take a raft? *looks out over the sea of garbled words and ideas*
Have a safe trip... say hello to my ancient ancestors for me, will ya?
A new star appeared in the sky of Radiant Garden, a shooting star, blazing straight down toward the street a few miles away from the plaza where the group had fought the heartless. Mark yanked up on the controls of his borrowed Gummi Ship, causing it to skim just over the rooftops of Radiant Garden. Mark cut back on the throttle, the ship slowing, but still moving far too fast to land. Then he twitched the controls to the left, then almost immediately the right, spinning it around midair, now flying backwards. He pushed the throttle to maximum for a second, then layed off it, having cancelled his forward momentum. The Gummi Ship now slowly floats to the ground, landing neatly less than fifty feet from the group.
Okay, have fun Keyblade, just tell me if you need a fire spell on her or something.
Poor Poor Mike.... someone should teach you a lesson for stalking him like that.
Mark stares at the gleaming white towers of the floating castle, then glances back at the ship, then back to the the white castle in the distance, "we can probably get up there faster if we use my ship," he said, already dashing toward the gummi ship to power it up. The whine of the ship's engines fills the area between the tall buildings.
did you say.... beeeeeeer? DX that stuff can't kill you.... but it can cause you to kill yourself! DX
Mark sped his ship up, flying over Sora's gummi ship, then comming around to fly off the starboard side, "I hope you guys don't mind me tagging along... but I just have a feeling like this is what I'm supposed to do," he said, releasing Sleeping Lion for the moment. The elegant and deadly silver keyblade dissolved into flames, vanishing into thin air. "I've been waiting for a long time to find out why I was born... something tells me that I'll find out soon enough."
Mark nodded to himself as he listened to this conversation, staring through the other Gummi ship's window, trying to get a look at the other keyblade weilders. He stretched his arm out, away from himself and summoned hisSleeping Lion keyblade, careful not to damage any of the equipment in his ship's cockpit as he did so. "I don't know why it came to me, I just know that it did, and that I have to do something with it now."
Use a voice modifier so that you sound like your just inhaling and exhaling deeply and mechanically... like the real Darth Vader. /^\ /*_*\ Fail Vader Face
War-poem-song-chant (tune to "I'll make a man out of you") The Darkness closes in, Our Time, has come. Did we win the Wa-ar? Have we lost, the Day? You're the Bravest men I ever led. Our time, draws near Soon they'll be upon us, Now, we Fight! (music fades away, many men shouting together) We fight, for Honor! We fight, for Valor! We fight, for Victories! We fight, our Enemies! {I really don't know... honest... this just came to me.}
