i kown you. your are Roxas24Sora and the writer of Kingdom Hearts 3-The Encounter and The Misadventures in The Castle That Never Was the story that's funny as hell. and don't worry i don't know anybody only obsessed and that only on the forum
are you going to do the whole serie or yust some parts. btw i'm waching the serie so i know what i can expect. i hope it gonna be a success.
great chapter and i'm sad because it's the last one :cryinganime: and someone had a good time last night. you and kairi_girl_92 writing a story i will be reading that.
chapter 22 and 5 pages that will be the greates end ever that's what i call going out with a bang. so the Caribbean is hot, Ralor. you live there if i come there i will burn alive. cheer up in netherland there is also no snow. or it is gone in 3 sec or it is water snow like.
plz don't cry. i heard in of crying today for my interer live. my sister and my mom wached the titanic. if the film lasted 1 sec longer i would have drown.
the Caribbean that is asome. i have to go on 2 september but before that i have 3 long workdays. i have to film woodstock aan de maas in other words no sleep 3 days long and the next morning to school. good start. :S but don't talk about school any more there is still some vacantion left.
good chapter and Xemnas is officially dead meat in the next chapter.
sorry for the late update thanks yamimg Chapter 5: Hollow Bastion/Radiant Garden “question: do we have food?†Riku asked. “Only fast cook rice†Sora said. “Don’t know†Kairi said: I will look trough our stuff. “This bag looks like a freezer†Kairi said: but it’s a normal bag with clothes. “And how’s bag was it†Sora asked. “Mine†Kairi said: and there is no other food than your fast cook rice. “Good thing that the next world is only one hour flying†Sora said. And so 58 minutes long the three keyblademasters talked about every thing. “Are we there yet†Riku asked for the 99 time. “If you said that one more time†Sora said angry: I will let Kairi hit you. “Oh, now I’m scared†Riku said on a sarcastic way: I’m not afraid of Kairi. “Oh, you aren’t afraid of me†Kairi said. “your so dead Riku†Sora said quietly. “Not a chance†he said. Kairi hit Riku as hard as she could and sent Riku flying from the cockpit to the end. “Are you afraid yet?†Kairi asked as she walked to Riku. “Sora help†Riku yelled: she turned into a devil. “What did you say, Riku†Kairi said angry. “Knock it off you two†Sora said: we’re landing. “But he insulted me†Kairi said. “We’re landing†Sora said: after we land you can throw him out the ship. “Don’t give her ideas†Riku said. And on that Sora landed the gummi and Riku was throw out the ship by Kairi. “So that was Riku†Kairi said. As she walked to her stuff they heard a scream and a big bang. Sora and Kairi walked to the scream and saw Tifa. “Hoi Tifa what was all the screaming about†Sora asked. ‘Hi Sora†Tifa said: will… something came at me at high speed so I hit it and smashed it into that rock there. “And what was it†Kairi asked. “A boy†Tifa said. “Riku†Sora and Kairi said. “Do you let him live?†Sora asked. “Yeah, but I think he need to see Aeris†Tifa said: is he one of your friends? “Yeah†Sora said. “Then lets go†Tifa said. They pulled Riku out the rocks and headed to Merlin's house. “Why are you here?†Tifa asked. “We’re on a little vacation†Sora started: we’re going to all the worlds that I visited. “Now that’s sound like a great idea†Tifa said. “So how are the things going here†Sora said: and before I forget this is Kairi and the boy that you hit is Riku. “Hi I’m Tifa†Tifa said: Kairi were did you bought that clothes they are beautiful. “I made it myself†Kairi said a little shy. “The thing in town are going great except there two little problems†Tifa said: a heartless problem but that is under control and some things in black coats fighting with every one. “black coats†Sora said. “You called†a voice said. With that said flames came up from the ground sending Sora and Tifa one way and Kairi and Riku a other way. “What are you and what do you planning†Sora said as he summoned his keyblade. “I’m a nightmare a beast from nightmare and darkness the name is Ken†Ken said: weren’t planning nothing we only fight and eat when we please. “You’re going down, Ken†Tifa said: as she run towards the nightmare. “What are you gonna do†Ken said like Tifa was noting: are you gonna hit me I’m so scared. “You should be†Tifa said as she hit Ken sending him flying into a rock. As Ken recovered from Tifa’s hit he scanned the battlefield and saw that sora was running to him but he didn’t see Tifa “where is she†he said. “to slow†Tifa yelled as she kick him towards Sora. “Here I go†Sora said as he throw his keyblade into Ken sending him flying to Tifa. “You’re dead meat†she said as she hit him into the ground. Sora summoned oblivion and jump into the air and slain Ken with oblivion. “Now that’s a combo†Tifa said. “I’m not done yet†Ken said. “You are†someone said on that moment two keyblades flow through the air slaining through Ken and where going towards Kairi. In a flash of light a man in a black coat stand for Kairi summoned the keyblades back into his hands and disappeared and the only thing what was left were some white feathers and a burning Ken. “Who was that?†Kairi asked. “Looked like a other nightmare†Tifa said. “No that can’t be it†Sora said: it doesn’t make sends he kills Ken and saves Kairi. “Can somebody get that rock of my foot?†Riku yelled. “White feathers†Kairi said. “what?†Sora asked: if that was from that man he can’t be a nightmare they are made from nightmares and darkness. “Help me with this rock†Riku yelled. “I don’t know it any more†Tifa said: take some feathers and we will ask Cid to analyse them. “Help me please†Riku yelled an on that Sora broke the rock with oblivion: thank you. Riku got up and fell down from the pain. “You are hopeless†Kairi said quickly supported Riku. “Didn’t you notices something, Sora†Riku said with pain: he was using two keyblades. “If that’s true he must be in Ansem’s computer†Tifa said: many keyblade users are in the computer. “Lets go†Sora said. “I’m not going anywhere†Kairi yelled. Tifa and Sora looked at Kairi and asked why not. “Riku is way to heavy†Kairi said when she almost fall from Riku’s weight. “I will carry him†Tifa said lifting Riku over her shoulders. “Well then lets go†Kairi said. On that they run towards Merlin's house. Half way they run into some heartless. “Keep going†Kairi said. “Way to go girl†Tifa said running with Sora to Merlin's house. Kairi summoned her keyblade: Keyblade of Hearts: a pink keyblade with a heart shaped handle and a heart on the top to hit and a heart as keychain. “Ten heartless can’t be a problem†Kairi said to herself. As she started to run to the heartless a heartless soldier let her trip but she quickly rolled over slaining the heartless. “That wasn’t to hard†she said. “Behind you, Kairi†Namine said. Kairi quickly jumped up and yelled: THUNDER. “Magic lessens come in handy now†she said as she parrying the attacks form multiple heartless. “I think it time for my special move†Kairi said: what do you think?. “Let them feel the power of hearts†Namine said. “Here we go, Namine†Kairi said. Kairi raised her keyblade in front of her and a light appear in around her. Two ghost that look like Sora and Riku protected her from incoming attacks. “Heart of the world give me your strength to destroy all the heartless†Kairi said. At that moment a beam of light destroyed the clouds and something that’s looks like Kingdom Hearts appeared and shoot colored beams of light at the heartless and charging Kairi’s power. Kairi had got energy and the heartless were gone. Kairi started running with the two ghost that protected her from damage. As Kairi was near the wall of the town the two ghost disappeared. “You know I don’t know this town†Kairi said: so what do we do?. “I know I will get Roxas†Namine said: he saw the way that Sora took so he could bring us there. “Good thinking†Kairi said: go get him I get the creeps from this place here. A few minutes later and Kairi was at Merlin's house. “So this is it?†Kairi asked. “Yeah this is Merlin's house†Roxas said. “Oke, looks small†Kairi said as she walked in. “Intruder†Yuffie said. Tifa quickly stopped Yuffie and said: she is a friend from Sora. “Oh, in that case, welcome to Radiant Garden†Yuffie said. “aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaauw†Riku yelled as Aeris examined his foot. “What was that†Kairi asked. “Oh, that’s just Aeris torturing you friend†Yuffie said. “That’s curing†Aeris said calm. “Looks like we’re going no were†Sora said shaking his head. “Go look in the town if your not doing anything†Cid said. “Probably the best thing to do†Sora said: I will give Kairi a little tour andAeris cure Riku. And on that Sora took Kairi and gave her a tour around town but they stopped at a bookstore. “Hmm this is a new store here†Sora said. “Let go and look around then†Kairi said. “The same books that you can buy at home†Sora said. “Look a release list†Kairi said. release list: The addiction----ObsessedWithSora----tomorrow Saving Kairi----Kairi_girl_92----next month The Misadventures in The Castle That Never Was----Roxas24Sora----2 months Wedding----DF----next year Switched----DF----next year Untitled----Kairi2011----next year “Sound like good books†Sora said: anyway lets go back to Merlin's house. sorry for the late update but i made it extra long:sweat:.
thanks for helping me out and hope that you will go out with a bang.
lol i that it was a game or someting like that but it's a band sorry for those how like dragonforce
yeah I know. i have a post in Writer's Workshop and it a handy advertise. i saw you post a advertisement there to. it's good to know some people still care about new writes.
to be honest i don't even know what dragonforce is
handy, a place where you can advertise your fan fic. oke, here goes noting. my fan fic is called: kingdom hearts: revisited. and I'm almost at the point where you can see why it's called revisited. hope that someone reads this and come.
TTFAF? what's that?
i don't know how you came up with this but it's great. this is probly the first fan fic that makes me laugh every time. keep this up and you will be a great writer
it's great as ever. keyblade Death’s door why do i get a picture of the keyblade sora used to kill himself in KH1 in my mind i can beliefe that you broke the r how did you do that?
this is great and funny as hell. keep it up Roxas24Sora
oh i didn't know that. sorry Rinoa ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 4: going As Sora when’d to the main land, two unknown people appeared on the big tree on the island. “So you know what to do?” the small one asked. “yeah” the big one said. “One thing” the small one said: if they see you they will attack because you look like someone of The Organization. “Oke” the big one said: but if they attack I will hit the them hard. “Now get to work, Angels” the small one said. “Yes” Angels said. With that said Angels disappeared in a white light and al what’s left was some white feathers and the other summoned a keyblade and opened a door and when’d trough it. In the meanwhile Sora run over the main land in search of Kairi and Riku. As Sora run he looked every where and when he turned at a corner he bumped into Kairi. “Au, Sora look out where you run” Kairi said as she laid on the ground: why did you run any way? “Sorry, Kairi” Sora said and it took three whole sec to understand that he found Kairi: I was looking for you. You found me Kairi said a little angry: so what’s the problem?? “How fast can you pack you stuff” Sora said as he was interrupted by Kairi. “You bumped into me for that” she yelled. “If you let me talk” Sora started: we, you, I and Riku are going on a world trip. Kairi hit Sora on his head. “I like the idea but we don’t have a gummiship” she said. “I have” he said as he rubbed his head: it is after the island and it was the meteor that crashed into the sea it was a heartless ship, we can go to other worlds now Kairi. “What are you waiting for get your stuff, I will tell Riku” Kairi said happy. “Oke, Thanks for telling Riku Kairi” Sora said as he when’d to his house to grabbed his stuff. “Sora, phone for you” his mom said as he walked though the door. “Oke mom” he said as he got the phone in his hands. “Oke, sleepy head when do we go?” Kairi asked a little teasing. “Be at 8 o’clock after the island” Sora said. “Oke, see ya sleepy head” Kairi said: I will tell Riku. “Oke, bye Kairi “ Sora said. “Are you three sleeping on the island again?” Sora mom asked. “Yeah” Sora said. “Be sure that you bring enough clothes and underwear” she said. Sora slammed his head into the wall for the shame: why do mom’s always care about underwear. “Don’t know I don’t have a mom” Roxas said: by the way what is underwear? Sora opened his eyes completely and said: now I’m a shame for my mom and my not knowing what’s underwear nobody. “I better go and sleep now” Roxas said as he when’d in Sora’s body. “I hope that he wash all of his clothes” sora said disappointed. And now for my stuff. A hour later Sora was finally ready with packing. “Where is Roxas” Namine asked “Hi Namine” he is inside me shaming for not knowing what underwear is Sora said. “Underwear, what is that?” Namine asked. “Not you to” Sora said as he let himself fall on his bed. “I’m gonna go see Roxas now” She said nervously: bye Sora. “Yippy, now I got two nobody’s inside me how don’t know what underwear is” he said: somehow I fill dirty now. “Sora diner is ready” Sora mom yelled upstairs. “Oke, mom just a minute” Sora said. “What do you eat Sora” Roxas said: I hope some meat. “Oke” Sora said: I’m gonna eat now and if you two do anything you will be on diner for tomorrow, got it. “You better eat Roxas then or ells you have noting to eat” Namine joked. “Namine” Sora and Roxas yelled. “Sorry” Namine said as she and Roxas when’d into Sora’s body. Sora eat his meal and watched some tv before he went to the island. Sora stepped into his boot and when’d to the island. As he was half way he saw that Kairi came back from the island. “Can’t take it in one time” he said. “No and I can’t find my nobody” Kairi said: do you know where she is? “In side me with Roxas” Sora said. “Namine come and help me” Kairi said. “No way” Namine said: this raining. “So, I need your help” Kairi said to her nobody. “Water and my white dress don’t mix good” Namine said. “What do you mean Namine” Kairi said think about her stuff getting wet. “I mean a shine though dress” Namine said. Sora felt like his blushed and Quickly look to the island. “I’m gonna put all the stuff in the gummi” Sora said as it rained harder. “Oke can you put mine to” Kairi asked. “Oke” Sora said and he went to the island. He put all the stuff in the gummi and went back for Kairi’s stuff. He and Kairi quickly got in the gummi and waited for Riku. As they waited they heard a bang. “What was that” Kairi said. “I will check it” Sora said. As Sora when’d outside the pretended that he was grabbed by someone. “Help Kairi” he yelled as he was ready to give Riku a seine to grab Kairi. Kairi ran outside and Riku grabbed her. Instead of screaming she summoned the keyblade and attack Riku. As soon as Riku was hit on the head Sora yelled: stop Kairi it’s Riku. Sora and Kairi pulled Riku on board and got his stuff. As soon as they where back they check Riku and saw that he woke up. “how are you doing” he said with a nerves smile. “Good and bad at the same time” Riku said: I’m proud on Kairi for using the keyblade and mad for hitting me with it. “Sora you fly and I will take care of Riku” Kairi said: and promise me that you two ‘re newer gonna do that again or I will hit you two with my keyblade. “Yes Kairi” the two boys said as they sounded like they where in the army. “And we are away” Sora said as they flow away from Destiny Islands. “Up to the next world” the three keyblademasters said. “What is the next world?” Riku asked. “You will see as we get there” Sora said. that was chapter 4 hope that you will like it and hope that somebody will join the readers of the story. the only readers now are ObsessedWithSora and guests :dead:
Chapter 3: the gummiship “Hmm… strange†Sora said. “What the matter Sora?†Wakka asked. “This chest isn’t heavy at all†Sora started: I think that’s empty. “Could be†Tidus said: but the lock is still closed. “Lets get that chest on the beach so we can open it†Wakka said impassioned. The three boys put the chest on the beach and tried to open it. “It won’t open†Tidus said: we need the key for this. “Let me try†sora said. “Belief me Sora†Wakka started: if Tidus can’t open it nobody can, I mean he open the school save and that thing is impossible to open with out the key. “Did you find something in there†Sora asked. “Yeah, phone hell and all sort of things†Tidus said. “Phone hell what do you mean†Sora asked as the scratched his head: and what were you doing there anyway? “I needed my MP3 player back†Tidus said calm: and with phone hell I mean that there where to many phones and they all rot away. “Oke†sora said: but let me try to open the chest. “Oke†Tidus said: try and open it. “Easy as pie†sora thought but as he wanted to summon the keyblade. But as he realized that he can’t be case Wakka and Tidus would know that he was the a keyblademaster he quickly grabbed his wooden sword and hit the lock with all he got. Sora heard a sound that the lock opened. “So that will do it†he said. Sora opened the chest and Wakka and Tidus watched. “It it's a… I don’t know what it is†Tidus said with a disappointed face. “Looks like two big piece of rubber†Wakka said with a disappointed voice. “That are a pair of navigate gummies†Sora thought: with this I can go to other worlds. “Lets go home†Wakka said: I don’t feel like diving any more maybe tomorrow. “Yeah†Tidus said: you can have those two dings Sora. “Oke†Sora said: I’m going to dive some more, oke? “Oke, but be sure that you come breath often†Wakka said: were going home and we don’t what to rescue you. “Oke†Sora said with a smile. “Now I can dive for the gummiship†he thought as he put the pair of navigate gummies in his bag. Sora swum over to the gummiship. “Oke, I need to be here†he thought: I hope it still works so I can go to other worlds, what am I saying, I’m going to other worlds with Kari and Riku. Sora dived to the gummi and saw that the cockpit still working. “Wait†Sora thought: I’m forgetting something. Sora searched his mind over gummiship’s and know what’s wrong. “I need to destroy the antenna on the ship or ells the heartless will find me†he thought. Sora swum to the antenna and hit the antenna with his keyblade. “So that’s down now I need to look for a door†Sora thought. He saw a door but it was blocked and locked. “I will use the keyblade for this†he thought: those mini bomb from Wakka are to dangerous. Sora hit the rock with a quick attack and used the keyblade to open the door. “Damn it I still underwater†Sora thought as the door opened. “The water will destroy the cockpit and the ship will be useless†he thought but what he thought was wrong, the water didn’t went into the ship. The ship had a sort shield that hold the water out. As Sora when’d into the ship he thought: I need to be more careful with the ship. As Sora looked though the ship A heartless appeared. It was a heartless solder. Sora quickly defeat it before it could do any damage. “So this is a heartless ship†Sora said: I never saw one from the inside. “I will check the controls†he thought: it looks like the controls I normally use, but the shield misses and it have limited ammo. “So that why heartless do kamikaze attacks, they ‘re out of ammo†he said. The only thing that I muss do is get the gummi of the bottom of the sea and into the air. “But how will I do that†he thought: maybe with the gummi self… oh yeah the gummi is pointing down, so if I do that it will crash on the bottom of the sea. “I need to find a other way†Sora said: maybe with Magnega. “That should work Sora†somebody said. “How’s there?†sora asked a he stands in attack position with the keyblade in his hand. “Me†someone said as he started to appear. “Roxas?†Sora asked as he watched how Roxas appeared: where were you all the time, you disappear 2 months ago with Namine. “We didn’t disappear we went on vacation deep in your body†Namine said. “Wow, wait a sec†Sora said a bit angry: you two went on vacation in my body? “That’s right†Roxas said: with all your fantasy it was the perfect place. “But we need to go to Kairi†Namine said: come on Roxas. “Oke Namine†Roxas said with a voice that sounded like he didn’t got a free will: got luck Sora, I hope it works. And on that Roxas and Namine when’d to Kairi. Oke, now the ship Sora said. He swum on top of the ship and used magnega. He saw that the ship started to move so he made a chain of magnega’s that lifted the ship out of the water. He quickly jumped in the ship and flow to the island. I better park it on the other side of the island. “Only I, Kairi and Riku com there†Sora thought. Sora parked the ship on the other side of the island and used the camouflage mode that was on the ship. “No wonder some heartless ship disappear†Sora said: they got a camouflage mode on the ship. “Anyway I need to tell Kairi and Riku†Sora thought. “We can go to other worlds now†Sora said as he run to his boot. “I can see all of my friends again†Sora thought as he jumped in his boot. “But first I need to find Kairi and Riku and telhem my idea†Sora thought. “We will go on a trip to see all the worlds and see all of old my friends†Sora yelled. He quickly realist what he yelled and look around him to see if any one heard him. “But first to the main land and look for Kairi and Riku†he thought. so chapter 3 is online up to chapter 4 but in the mean time read this or listen to this: :rockband: its Linkin Park
as they found it they would go to other worlds and there still heartless out there so they would be attacked and Sora need to save them with the keyblade and that will blow his cover. that and it would make my story a little harder to write.