Jafar senses a disturbance nearby and poofs away before Xaldin can answer. Arriving at the spot where he sensed the disturbance, he saw Axel.......what the...? Jafar looks down at what Axel doing, highly disturbed and almost twinging from the pure surprise of what his eyes were beholding. "That's...er..." Jafar notes, making himself known.
Awesome! I remember Rinn from the last Fanfic bearing your name! Way to reintroduce her! I also like the phil content! Almost had a touch of humor to it, with a touch of mystery about the whole "Lost son" idea. I like the concept your going with, and I just can't wait until you finish it so we know how it all ends!
I'm about to go read the last few chapters after I'm done here, Destined, but first I want to inform everyone about my own Fanfic having another new chapter up. Sora's Fortune is now going to be my first real major Fanfic, so I'm really looking forward to going through with it. Another thing, I know we aren't the RPG family or anything, but I'm looking for people who can breathe life into characters for my new cross-over, Sora and Gang in Haven City (Jak and Daxter cross-over). You don't have to write really long paragraphs for each character, but breathing life into them is what writing is about right? There's alot of roles still open right now, so hurry while you can!
Jafar floats by Xaldin in Genie form and looks down at him. "What am I supposed to do again..?" Jafar asks plainly, and slightly annoyed from being the store's mascot.
The name basically says it. If you've ever played "Jak II" for the Ps2, you'll know all about the dystopia, Haven City, ruled by the evil Baron Praxis. The role-play will start off from the first moments of the second game, where Jak has just been imbued with Dark Eco, for a sick government experiment. He's then released from the prison by his old friend, a orange fuzzy half-weasel, half-otter, Daxter. Sora, Donald, and Goofy suddenly jump in when they land on planet and find the two heroes fighting Krimzon guards. I'll write an intro to start the RP as soon as I have a full cast. Because all the characters are introduced pretty early in the game, like Torn, Tess, Krew, Sig, and others. Also, this will be rated PG-13 because you will be allowed to use breif mild language, mild innuedo, and a character's name is sorta suggestive. XD I may contiue this onto the next game if it's succesful Log: If it says (T) by my name, that only means I took those roles on temporarily until somebody picks them. The Rp needs to start soon, and I need a complete cast first. Rules: 1.) Keep role play fair 2.) Only use mild language briefly and only in dialouge, not in any descriptions. 3.) Suggestive themes are allowed, but not really er...suggested. 4.) No killing character that don't die, and if that character does die, they die like they are supposed to. 5.) This will follow the basic plot of the game, but spice things up a little bit with Sora, Donald, and Goofy being there. 6.)You are allowed up to any two characters. All Krimzon guard and metal head actions will be taken by myself. 7.) Only mild flirting between characters. 8.) No yoai, yiff, or yurie 9.) Must either have played the game first, or at least studied the concept a bit on a different website to join. Cast: Main Heroes: (3/5) Jak- Unsaintly Saint Daxter-BamaSebastian Sora- OblivionRoxas Donald- MajorSeargent Goofy- The Underground: (1/2) Torn-OblivionRoxas Tess- Krew's mob: (2/2) Krew- BamaSebastian(T) Sig- RandomAngel Side characters: (5/8) Brutter- BamaSebastian(T) Vin- BamaSebastian Onin- Pecker- BamaSebastian(T) Kairi- MajorSeargent Keira- Samos the sage- The_King Young Samos (The shadow)- Krmizon Guard: (1/3) Ashelin- Baron Praxis- Errol- BamaSebastian(T) Jak and Daxter OCs: Template: Name: Whether they are "Contacts" of Krew or not: You're role and title if you're not a "Contact" of Krew: (If you are a contact of Krew, meaning you work for the crime lord, I would rather have your job hidden until Krew sends Sora, Donald, Goofy, and Jak on a mission, so PM me your characters job, role, and whether or not they can be trusted if they work for Krew.) (It took me forever to realize I hadn't included an OC template, thanks to Randomangel for the reminder.) The light Sage-RandomAngel Bama Dill- BamaSebastian Base- BamaSebastian (Image below) View attachment 1617
Stands outside the cave with a 39" in a half-foot pole. He pokes the monster from the outside then runs away.
Whadya mean smell hollister..hmm? You really like star wars, don'tya? Ditto! Hollister doesn't smell bad...it smells good. I wear "jake" colgne all the time. I'd wear it today, but I'm not going nowhere, so, why waste a good ounce of cologne. XD As for me! *Calmly walks in wearing a patterned Hollister open-button jacket with the sleeves rolled up, a white "Hollister" shirt with the words written in Navvy Blue, then dark red. and a denim pair of Hollister Jeans.* Oooh! A hamburger vendor dressed as a Pikachu...in a blue tuxedo...? Oh well! *runs over to Pika_power and exchanges pushing the heavy trolley he has for one hamburger.* FINALLY!*eats the hamburger* *When he's done, heads into Hollister*
Username:BamaSebastian Characters: Sora and Riku (Or just Sora), Jak with Daxter on his shoulder (Jak and Daxter game series from Naughty Dog), prefferably with them on opposite sides of a pile of Gold with the Gold "El Derado" Statue from the Uncharted: Drake's fortune game standing on the short pile of gold. Renders (if any): Sora(left-right), Riku(right-right), Jak with Daxter on shoulder(left), The "El Derado" statue(middle) Size: slightly taller and and wider than the "Mind over matter" sig. (courtesy of you Sing! :D ) Text: "The trail we blaze" (In deep gold letters) Update: (What does this mean?) Hey Sing, I liked the Mind over matter sig so much that you made me awhile ago, I was wondering if you could make another. I just really like the way you style sigs and it would blend with the other. Other: If the "El Derado" statue is too hard to find, just put any gold coin between the characters. Prefferably a pirate dubloon to keep in style with the fanfic I'm writing.
OOC: Ok, no problem. I was confused sort of, so I wasn't sure what was going on.
A Navvy blue coffee maker in the corner on the kitchen counter near Riku and Kairi looks a little mysterious, because it almost looks as if it has eyes are jammed shut with thick eyebrows above them. And the coffee pot holder almost looks like a mouth, with a small black handle at the bottom at what looks like a chin. But hey, it's probably just a coffee maker, right? And in the window frame of the door out of the kitchen to outside, is that a person standing there?! The person is hiding too much behind the frame to see who he is!
Doin' good! Got another chapter up in my new fanfic(Both actually), how about yours, Destined? (The Disney World one, I haven't been able to read "Sacrificed lately.) And great article on MMORPG's DS, but it sorta makes staying on the forum late at night sorta bad now... I spend quite a bit of the night on the forums when I can becuase of late-night Fanfic additions and new responses to RPs I'm in. Now I can't do that?? 0_____0 But seriously, sorry about your online friend just the same. I do mean that seriously. My mood is always changing from "Jokeing" to "serious". It happens almost in a split-second, but yet nobody takes me seriously when I am serious... :(
OOC: I thought anwita was talking about me when she said "Bas-Idiot". XD When I read Axel's response to being called a Bas-idiot, however, I got the real joke. I noticed there's been some confusion about how Larxene died right? She got wet by the dumbest trinity limit ever: "trinity sprinkler". Then since she's all electricity, she got crusty like a staute and blew up. Am I correct there? BIC: Luxord looks around and sighs, Thank God, nobody noticed me coming in...
Hey, did anyone ever take the roles I left behind by chance? :D I miss being the Genie and Leon, so I'd really need is a quick re-breifer of the current event that either Genie, Leon, or jafar would be in by now. And maybe what's going right now too, that's it, I can work back from there. That is if you guys will have me back of course.
I guess I could do that...with the permission of the Writers Family Don (Italian Head of the family) Seriously, I wouldn't want to upload with that sort of consent because the image is kinda big. By the way, totally off topic but I just wanted to inform everybody: I've got yet another Fanfic brewing that will really keep on the front page for a while! A Square-Soft/Naughty Dog crossover. Drake's Fortune, Kingdom hearts, and yet another game many know, all mixed into one very good and inventive Story. It's called "Sora's fortune" and is in creativty corner. It's way better written and much more serious, with comic relief just so that it won't be too serious, than the other one that I mentioned I was doing earlier. I'm going to continue both so that others can enjoy my writing while I'm working on the Sebax series on WordPad. Give it a read and post to tell me what you think. I'm about to go and do chapter two when I'm done writing here, just so you know.
(Author Introlude:I thought since I haven't been writing lately where everybody can see the writing frequently, I thought I'd do two Fanfics at the same time on here, just to satisfy everyone who thought I stopped writing. Just when you were about to start celebrating, right? Just kidding. The title explains it all, a mixture of Drake's Fortune and Kingdom hearts. Expect one person who died in the game to not die (You guess which game), but also expect that the crossover won't stop with Drake's fortune. That's right! I'll be bringing in two very familiar Naughty Dog characters into the mix. Warning, this will follow the basic plot line of "Drake's Fortune" for the PS3. Expect spoilers. Also, if you're thinking by now about my credibility, where I've always started a fanfic, then stopped so I could write it all and then post the entire novel, this one will be completely done on this very site. Along with my other Fanfic now running, "Not a Sebax series story in Amber's cookie castle" and no, that's not a stupid way of putting the title, that is the title. This one will be slightly more serious with comic relief. So read and enjoy, Sora's Fortune and feel free to post to tell me what you think. Some CnC Please!) Chapter 1 A slight ocean breeze wiped across Riku's face, just another sunset evening on Destiny Islands. The Auburn sky was alight with seagulls going about their own way. The smell of salt-water lingering in the air. Just then, Riku heard a voice behind him. It was Sora, no doubt in more trouble than the younger teen could handle. Riku allowed a small chuckle, with Sora coming closer, but his meager grin was meant with fear and uncertaintity out of Sora's eyes. Immediately, Riku changed his mood to serious. "What's wrong?" More a command than a question. Sora wheezed and bent over a little onto his knees a little bit but straightened up moments later. "Pirates..took Kairi..." He managed, half worried, half exhausted. With this, Riku and Sora heard from their perch on the bridge, a motor running and a armed boat racing off into the sunset. Riku looked from the disappearing motor boat to Sora, almost confused. "Like Captain Hook?" Riku asks Sora, reffering to his own commanding the Pirate captain for a short while. "No different ones, with guns and modern clothes." Sora explained. "Well come on, no time to lose." Riku exclaimed while running off onto the wooden boards back to the close land. Sora immediatley caught up, but looked at Riku with confusion. "But we'll never catch them!" Sora noted, bringing them both to a sudden halt. "Then how are we going to ctach them-" Riku starts off, but his words are cut off by a strange noise and rustling in a nearby bush. Riku and Sora, slowly encircled the small bush, which was alive with movement. "Think some pirates hid away so they could ambush us?" Sora asks almost silently, looking around the bush. "Too thick to tell..." Riku answers. Just then, a blur of orange flew by them, something small and possibly fuzzy had just flew inbetween Sora and Riku! Weirdest of all, the blur screamed in a annoying voice almost sounding like he was saying "JAACK!" Shocked and surprised, Sora and Riku whirl around to see the same furry object, with its tail upside and the rest of the small otter like body buried in the sand. Riku plucked the small creature by its tail out of the sand by it's tail. Two large eyes, with a set of Air-pilot google rested above them on the top of its head, rested between two long bunny-ears, swirled around dizzily, showing the thing was still alive. The creature, shaking its head off with the remaining sand, suddenly noticed Riku and Sora looking at him curisosly, still by his tail. With one long scream of shock from the both parties, the fuzzy creature was dropped head first back onto the sand, this time only landing on his stomach instead of back head-first. When the creature looked up, it's eyes grew with shock from two keyblades being pointed down at him. All the creature could do was gulp and look up and back into the bushes. When Sora looked back, the bush stilled moved, but as if something else had just parted it a moment before. "Umm...Riku..?" Sora asks worriedly, looking over to his friend, although they still kept locked on the orange creature. Instead of Riku's voice, two gun-clicks and whirs were heard from the back of Sora's and Riku's heads. Too afraid to look back, they put away their weapons and just stood still, facing the sea. The creature ran from the front to the back of them and the sound of scurrying against leather was all they could hear next. That was, until a gruff and older sounding voice came from behind them. "You guys giving my friend Daxter here any trouble?" (*) Chapter 2 "Put your hands up on your head." Commands the gruff voice from behind Riku and Sora just moments after he had spoken for the first time. Riku and Sora did as they were told, after all, they didn't know what this guy looked like, what he was capable of, or if he was with the pirates or not. "Now get down on your stomachs..." Commanded the voice further, a tightening of a grip on the handle of his weaponary being heard from behind. Insinuating need for Self-control. "Riku.." Sora says over to his friend in an almost sing-song voice, noticing how close they were to the shore line. Riku nodded without turning to Sora at his side. If they got onto their stomachs this close the ocean, they might even be carried off by the current or be drowned with the incoming tide. But when itchy tirgger-fingers were heard tapping on the fire mechanism of whatever was pointed at them, both Riku and Sora leapt onto their stomachs, hands still on their heads. "Now.." Commanded the voice even gruffer than anytime before. "Do the Worm, Baby!" Comes a sarcastic follow-up to the first persons next command. But instead of the gruff voice, it was instead like the one Sora and Riku had heard in the scream earlier. Bursting laughter from both of the voices told Riku and Sora immediatley, they had been tricked. They both leapt up onto their feet and summoned back their keyblades. "What's the big idea?!" Sora asks commandingly to the two sentients now straight in his view. One was a guy in a leather jacket and ripped slacks, holding two oddly shaped guns. The real distinguishing features of his were yellow hair cut super-short with a small goatee under his chin, and long pointed elf-ears. The other was the fuzzy, orange creature Sora and Riku had detained for a short while, rested on the other's right shoulder. Worst of all, they were still laughing hysterically, and pointing and mumbling through laughs at Sora and Riku. Sort of insulting if you just got a mouth full of salt-water seconds before. Riku and Sora got into attack postion, but it was pretty obvious the two others would not fight back when the two guns the tall one was holding, dropped into the sand from a lost grip from laughing so much. "You should have seen how quick you followed those orders!" The small one utters through laughs, eventually falling from his perch on the mysterious man's shoulders backwards and out of view. "Yeah, yeah we get it..." Sora groans, disappointed he didn't have a lead where those pirates took Kairi. Then his eyes light up. Kairi! "We gotta go now and save her!" Sora suddenly alerts Riku, who only shakes his head. "First let me point something out." Riku commands. "What's that?" "What was on the sides of the armoured boat, what was in the front, and what was in the back?" Riku asks all in one. Sora ponders for a moment, then he relaizes what he saw and what Riku was talking about. "Wings on the sides, a sealed cockpit in the front, and engines in the back!" Then it dawns on him. "Which makes..?" Riku asks, waiting for Sora to answer. "A gummi ship!" They both say in unison, looking off further not at the sea, but the sky. Sora groans in disbelief. "But Donald and Goofy have all the Gummi ships at Disney Castle!" He points out disappointingly. "That's right..by the time they could even get here.." Riku mentions with pain, not expecting every detail for once. "No trace..gone.." Sora mumbles, and kicks the sand underfoot into the water with ferocity. The mysterious man suddenly realizes the two guys he and Daxter had just pulled a joke on were staring at the sky, and could make out half of what they said. Jak wasn't completely heartless, he knew what it was like to lose a loved one, like Damos, the man who never knew Jak was his son...just thinking about it made him boil with rage and sadness. Jak looked down at his right shoulder, where a still giggling Daxter was finally starting to climb back over his shoulder. "Get the device Dax." Jak says with an authority, as if he wanted it done immediately. Looking up confusedly, Daxter leapt down from his grip from jak's shoulder and landed for once on his feet in the sand. Moments later, coming back with a small golden device with a blue stone in the middle. "Here ya go.." Daxter says confusedly, leeting Jak take the item out of his two arms, even though Jak only needs his palm to hold it himself. "Don't know what you're planning, but I'm right beside ya!" Daxter says happily, bending one of his thin, fuzzy arms into a crowbar shape and pushing the arm towards the other in a "Go-get-'em" gesture. While Sora and Riku just stood on the fringe of the water and sand, the tide starting to roll against their shoes, Jak suddenly calls out from behind them. "Hey guys! Need some help?" Jak calls out to Sora and Riku, holding up the small device in the palm of his hand and waving it through the air. "Sora, this is your call." Riku offers, turning around along with Sora to face the new person. Sora looks from Riku to Jak, and grins back at Riku. "I'm game!" Chapter 3 "Whatcha got there?" Sora asks, walking closer to examine what Jak had in the palm of his gloved hand. "It's a transforming device that allows me and Daxter here, to travel on different enviroments." Jak replies, giving Sora a better look. Daxter, once again perched on Jak's shoulder looks over at Riku, who's still standing on the shore from afar. "Hey! Oldie! Come over here and look at the whatcha-ma-call-it, thingy..." Daxter starts off yelling but gets quiter and uncertain when he can't remember the name of the device. "The Enviro!" Jak corrects Daxter, slightly annoyed. But before Daxter can correct himself, his thin neck is clutched in the grasp of Riku's opposite hand. "Call me old again, and you'll never even get to see what color your fur turns when you get old." Riku replies angrilly to being called old because of his odd hair color. Gasping for air, Daxter chokes out, "Sure...no problem..." Riku releases his grip and Daxter breathes in air like a jet engine. "Jak! Why didn't you stop him!?" Daxter asks angrilly at his own friend for not keeping Daxter safe from strangulation. "Hey, you deserved it." Jak replies humerously, and Daxter tries to put in an objection but can't find one. "You know Riku, with silver hair and all you do look kinda-" Sora starts off humerously, but freezes when Riku gives him a cold stare. "Shutting up." Sora finishes, then goes back to looking at the new device. "Daxter, another thing, his hair is silver, just like Vin had, remember?" Jak defends Riku's case. "Wait, Vin wasn't old?" Daxter asks confusedly, as if he had just found out. "Wasn't? Had? If this Vin guy wasn't so old, how come you're talking about him in past tense?" Riku asks curiously but straight-forward. "Did he..?" Sora starts to ask, but is a little afraid to hear the answer. "Sort of...you'll see." Jak quickly puts in, and lays the small device face up on level ground and bending over on one knee to push in the blue gem button. With a click, a hologram image blurred to life, first a little fuzzy, but then getting crisper as the sun set just as the button was pressed. "Hello?" Asks a nervous male voice from a head floating as a hologram. His eyes were hidden by a pair of goggles and his transparent hair was set back by a head cap that covered his forehead and half of the front of his scalp. "Who's there?!" He asks nervously again. "Vin, we need a space ship model, can you do that?" Jak asks with slight authority, the hologram head looking up at him curiously. "Oh it's you.." Vin replies with a sigh of relief., his image fading a little bit but becoming crisp again seconds later. "I'll have to check my database for any space models though, first." Vin continues, still sounding a little nervous, not even noticing Sora and Riku watching him with curisoty from behind before he buzzs-out. "Who was that?" Sora asks half-confused, half-interested. "That was Vin." Jak says plainly. "He used to be a mining foreman when we first met him, and he helped us out alot until.." Jak explains. "Metal heads attacked him!" Daxter finishes off with a flourish of his eyes and arms. "I would have been there to defend our pal, but with his dying breath, he entrusted me to stay with Jak, so he could complete his mission." Daxter says epically, and without a hint of any modesty. Jak looks queerly up at Daxter, raising one eyebrow and crossing his arms, shaking his head. "He's got it half right, at least." Jak notes sarcastically. He then faces Riku and Sora again. "You see, when these man-eating creatures called the metal heads attacked Haven city, where we live, they attacked Vin." Jak admits to the truth in Daxter's story. "And he really did tell us the last thing we needed to do before he dumped his brain into the city security grid." Jak explains. "Then a year later, we found him after we thought he died, and he helped us some more." "So to thank him, we made him a port-a-potty." Daxter jokes, with a elbow nudge to Jak, who doesn't laugh at all. "We made him Portable by making him the conductor of the system he made himself." Jak says with emphasis and glaring at Daxter for a short while. "So that's why you talked about him in 3rd sense about his hair." Sora adds in, thinking a bit. "That's because of him being a hologrma now, his hair isn't any color right?" "Score-1! Captain Obvious!" Daxter blurts out saracastically at Sora, crossing his thin arms and facing the other way. Jak sighs. "Don't mind him, he's just mad because he had to leave his girlfriend behind." Jak jokes to the others. "She is not my girlfriend! We are just dating while I am perusing my options!" Daxter defends himself, coloring up his words a bit. "What options?" Jak asks curiously and sarcastically. "Tess is the only Ottsel you know." Jak points out, showing how much Daxter lies. "I can name at least three other ottsels I know." Daxter says nervously, still trying to sound believable. "Who are the precursors, who are all guys." Jak points out again. "OK SO SHE'S MY GIRLFRIEND!" Daxter blurts out, yelling and trying to make himself heard. Sora can't help but choke back a chuckle of laughter from the look on the ottsel's face. "Hey Jak, I found a space ship model but- Whuzzat?!" Vin comes back saying, but in the middle of his sentence turns around to see Sora and Riku staring down at him. "Who the Precursors are they!?" Vin asks more nervous then ever. "Sorry, never caught your names there, guys..." Jak says nonchantly, rubbing the back of his head with one hand. "I'm Sora and the serious one is Riku." Sora introduces himself and Riku at the same time. "Jak Mar, Daxter, and Vin." Jak quick-intros, pointing to himself, a rolling-eyed Daxter, and Vin, the hologram on the ground. "So they don't want to destroy me?" Vin asks shakingly. "Nope." Sora answers friendly with wave. Vin sighs a breath of relief and looks back up at Riku and Sora. "Sorry, I've always been a bundle of nerves." "Yeah, and you guys are lucky he didn't just have a gun...or arms." Jak half-jokes, reffering to the first time he and Daxter met the mining foreman. "Anyway, I found a ship, but it doesn't have so good a defense system. You'll really have to be careful!" Vin describes what he found with emphasis. "Ok, he found a ship, how do we get it?" Riku asks doubtingly, not seeing how the tiny little device could get them to the ship. "Just wait, and back up." Jak says, backing up himself a safe distance away from the device on the ground. Sora just shrugs and does the same, leaving a still doubting Riku standing over the device, waiting. When the earth beneath the device began to rumble, shaking Riku off his feet, only then did everyone realizes what the device could do. It first sprouted a small box from beneath it that grew larger and larger until it pushed Riku all the way into shallow waters, finally stopping when it had reached at maximum height and width. The end result took up a good area of land of the beach and made Riku have to walk around it. When Riku leaned against one side of the box, Jak called out to him. "I wouldn't do that, if I were you!" Jak says warningly "Oh yeah? Why's that?" Riku asks saracastically. "Because the box-" Jak starts off again, but the sides of the box falling outwardly from the sides, catching Riku under one of them, stopped him half-sentence. "That!" Daxter completes, laughing hysterically. "Yeah! Real funny!" Riku yells back, climbing out from under a heavy metal side, spitting out a mouth full of sand. Helping Riku out, they both look at the ship once Riku is safely out from under. The ship was a large, blocky build, with a few out-dated canons on each side. It was rusted, but flyable... "Get in." Jak commands, opening the door panel on the side of the forefront cockpit with a wide view panel, letting the others slide in first and find their seats. "Strap in your seat belts-" jak says with confidence, getting into the pilot's chair. "-It's going to be one rusted, leaky, shell of a ride." Daxter comically notes, a tad bit more nervous and less confident. (*) Chapter 4 Everyone buckled in, the shuttle still grounded, Sora's mind began to drift off. What'll happen if we fin out something's happened to Kairi, and we're too late? Riku looked over to the seat opposite him, understandingly fully, why Sora was gazing out the front window. A hand on the shoulder and a calming "Seh'll be ok." from Riku, brought Sora back to reality. "Say, I want to be moved if you guys are all-" Daxter starts off in an insultingly curious way, looking over at Riku's hand on Sora's shoulder. Immediately, Riku retrieved his hand to get it ready to punch the Ottsel until Jak spoke out. "Dax!" Jak cuts in sharply, going over the console to see why the shuttle wasn't lifting off yet. "What?! I don't want them goin' all sissy on me!" Daxter retorts, as if he did nothing wrong. "Says the rat in the children's booster seat!" Jak states, and Daxter doesn't respond back and just crosses his arms and looks down to the side angrilly in his booster seat. "Something must be wrong with the engine.." Jak notes thoughtfully, unbuckling himself, and getting ready to leap out and check the engine. "Umm, don't know much about high technology buddy, but ya ain't tried that one yet." Daxter perks up before Jak has the chance to get out, pointing one fuzzy finger toward a red-button marked "start engine" in bold black letters. "Ok.., but first, one slight adjustment." Jak grumbles, ticked off a bit by being shown up by Daxter after he had just shown him up. "Hey, buddy, why ya lookin' at me like that." Daxter asks meekly as Jak comes closer and closer with a roll of duct tape. ** "That's going to hurt when he can take it off, but at least we're guranteened a quite ride." Jak admits, looking back to Daxter's seat, where the ottsel's mouth, hands, and legs, are all bound to the seat with duct tape. The only comments he can silently make are glaring eyes and a rather rude hand gesture, unable to even lift his hand however. "Now who's the sissy?" Sora jokes at Daxter, giving him a stink eye. "You see anyother ships?" Riku asks Jak, sitting now in the co-pilot seat. "Nope, but I know someone who can." Jak notes positively. "Good" "Vin! You up?" Jak calls out, keeping his eyes still fixed out on space while keeping a small holopad screen in sight. The holopad whirrs to life, lifting an image up from the screen below with Vin's floating head. "Oh yeah I'm up, after only half a milli-cycle of sleep!" Vin complains in a nerdy and computic way. "Search the surrounding area for any ships that might have departed an hour ago." Jak says, uncaring of Vin's complaint. "Yeah sure, whatever. GET US ALL BLOWN UP!" Vin starts off meekly but booms, though still in a nervous tone, mid-sentence. "Just do it!" Jak commands, not much time to kill. "One ship: left the sector forty-four minutes ago, due east of your direction." Vin computes, without hesitation. "You found it that quickly?" Riku asks impressed. "It's easy when you're digital." Vin admits sheepishly. "Yeah, before he only used to be able to crash an entire system in just six seconds. Now he can do it in half the time." Jak jokes around a bit about Vin's former and curent computer abilities. "Think it was the pirate ship?" Riku asks seriously. "Dunno, but it's a good as shot as any." Jak admits, not sure himself. (*) (Author note: Thanks to Unsaintly Saint for keeping this Fanfic up for awhile longer! And typos? I se no typos. Right now, I'm going through Writer's block, for the first time evah, to think of how everybody meets Nathan Drake and how everything happens. The next chapter will probably be up today(04-29) but I'm not sure yet)
Thank you! There's at least two jokes in there. I've been focusing on Comedy-writing while taking a break from writing the Sebax series.
*Accidentally bumps into Amber while running and falls to the ground from impact.* What the-Oh hi! OOH! ARE THOSE PIZZA ROLLS! MINE! *Makes a leap for the plate of pizza roles like a maddened animal with toungue drooling out and everything.*
Luxord wriggles out from where he had been trapped for a moment's time and went under Xelax's desk and went back into his human form, slipping the cards away into his breast pocket. Crouching low to the floor, Luxord slowly slips up from the floor, into the next available seat silently and almost comically from the way he's rising up.
The night air grew cold, unforgiving at the late hour of 5:58PM. A silent assasin slowly crept up behind the remaining Online Writer's Family members, wearing a black trenchcoat with the hood up. The assasin drew his signature weapon, "The Rotary Ballad", and before he would make the kill he uttered into their ears omniously... "HEY GUYS WHAT'S UP!"
Blast it all, I can't see anything under this thing... Luxord complains to himself, reffering to him being face down on a Nobody Card. He moves forward a little bit, but windes up under neath Demyx's Feet/behind(?)(Depends on whether Demyx is standing or sitting...I hope to god the latter for Luxord's sake..0____0) *KOF!* "Where the bloody-" Luxord exclaims when he realizes he can't breath where he's at.