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  1. dancecat120
    yeah. it worked well with it crushing and all

    why do I have the feeling that they wern't really fighting over a cookie
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  2. dancecat120
    Awesome!

    Great job.

    fighting over a cookie :)
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  3. dancecat120
    Yes she was caught

    thanks

    we shall see what they do in the next chapter
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  4. dancecat120
    thanks...by the way good job wanting Sora and Riku to kill Roxas

    (public poll :) )
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  5. dancecat120
    never saw what coming... the kiss or sora and riku walking in on them

    thanks :)
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  6. dancecat120
    Chapter nine is up. Roxas and Kairi are alone on the beach... I wonder what will happen. Only reading the next chapter will tell.

    ~~~

    Chapter Nine



    Kairi’s Room


    Kairi was woken up around seven by a light taping on her door. She was slightly annoyed. She got out of bed and saw Roxas standing out side of her door. “Can you wait a few minutes?” She was less annoyed when she saw him. She brushed her hair and put on her pink dress. After tidying up her room a bit she opened her door.

    “Hey Kairi!” He said excitedly. He was way too excited for this early in the morning. He hugged her. “Do you want to go down to the beach?”

    “Sure!” She started out the door. Roxas lightly griped her hand. Kairi felt a little uneasy, she did like Roxas so she didn’t pull away. She looked up at Roxas, he was blushing. Kairi felt her cheeks heat up a little.

    The Beach

    “I got you up early so that we could enjoy the sunrise.” Kairi looked up at the sky. It was beautiful. The sky was mostly a light pink. The orange sun was only slightly visible and hardly up yet. The clouds in the sky were a slightly darker pink. They looked amazingly fluffy and soft.

    Roxas smiled at her. They sat down on beach. “So Kairi, did you have a good sleep?” Roxas was caring. He was cute. Kairi decided that she definitely liked him better than Sora and Riku.

    “Yeah, I slept well, that was until you woke me up.” She was smiling not mad.

    He laughed. “Yeah, sorry about that. I just wanted to watch the sun rise with you. It is so beautiful, just like you are.” He smiled and put his arm around her.

    “Thanks, that was really sweet.” Yeah, he was sweet.

    “Kairi, you’re blushing.” He laughed. Her cheeks did feel warm.

    “And you’re not blushing?”

    He laughed and looked up at her. “The sun is almost up. It is just so great. But then again, next to you it’s nothing.” He smiled.

    Kairi was looking at him smiling. Wow, that was really cheesy. But it was sweet. Consumed in her thoughts, she didn’t even realize that Roxas was inching closer to her. She looked up.

    Oh.
    My.
    Gosh.
    He is about to kiss me. Suddenly she was worried and confused.

    What should I do?

    Should I turn away?

    Should I kiss him?

    Should I get up and leave?

    Well I do like him.

    He is nice.

    He is cute.

    He seems much more mature that Sora or Riku.

    She was still looking at him. She really did like him. She had come to her decision, she would kiss him. She inched closer to him as well. Ever so slowly, they got closer and closer to each other. There was no more room left between them.

    It was too late.

    She could no longer turn back.

    Their lips touched lightly against each others. Suddenly, Kairi heard a gasp. She looked up, Sora and Riku were standing right there.

    ~~~

    Hope you liked it! Okay when I just checked the poll people wanted her to pull away. Sadly when I wrote the chapter people wanted her to kiss him. Because I didn't want to redo the chapter, I just kept it as was...sorry

    please comment and vote on the poll :D
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007, 13 replies, in forum: Archives
  7. dancecat120

    I don't really want to kill him. Kairi would never in my story. I just always put up that kind of choice for fun :)
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  8. dancecat120
    :)

    I can't decide either... there for I made a poll


    Some one said she should kill him

    :D
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  9. dancecat120
    :D

    I am taking a break before starting the next chapter
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  10. dancecat120
    Yeah this chapter was quite weird...

    I was bored and wanted to make it different

    the next chapter will be back from Kairi's view again :)
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  11. dancecat120
    yeah that was just to throw a twist at the reader...

    thanks
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  12. dancecat120
    Yay, chapter eight is up. In this chapter we get to see things from Roxas's point of view. What will he see? What will the rest of the organization think? Only reading the next chapter will tell:

    ~~~~



    Chapter Eight



    The Castle that Never Was


    Axel stepped out of the corridor first. “Roxas, stay here. I’ll go tell everyone that you are back.†Axel ran off in search of other organization members.

    Roxas sighed. He knew that the organization did things that he couldn’t know about. Any time he asked anyone they would just laugh and say ‘oh I’ll tell you when you’re older’. They acted like he was just a little kid.

    He was bored. He looked down for a second. Oh, I’m not wearing my organization coat. I guess I should go change. What is the worst thing that could happen?

    Just to be safe he avoided going through any rooms. He was so close to his room and then he saw what obviously Axel didn’t want his eyes to see. He understood why he was to stay in his place.

    ---

    Axel was in his room talking to Demyx. “Demyx, I just don’t get it. I like him but he likes Kairi. He just doesn’t get it!â€

    Demyx hugged him. “It’s okay Axel. I still like you.†He smiled.

    Axel was smiling too suddenly, a lot. Roxas gasped and ran away.

    ---

    Roxas’s Room


    Roxas changed into his organization coat. He decided to stay in his room until he was told to come out. He didn’t want to see anything else like that again. He was just trying to think.

    After sitting there for what seemed like for ever, he heard and announcement over the intercom:

    Everyone, Roxas has returned. Please report to the basement for a meeting.

    ---


    The Basement


    Roxas left his room and headed for the basement. On his way down he saw Demyx. “Roxas, sorry you had to see that earlier.†Demyx said.

    “Whatever, it’s cool. And keep me liking Kairi on the low down, please.†Demyx smiled and nodded.

    “Every one may I please have your attention?†Xemnas started. “Roxas has come up with a plan to bring down Sora. He is making Kairi fall in love with him, then kidnapping her and making Sora give something up to get her back. Roxas what happened while you were talking with her?â€

    Roxas stood up. “Well I talked to her for a while and made it clear that I really did like her and this wasn’t part of some plot.†Every one in the room smiled and started to laugh. “Then she wanted to go to sleep so I hugged her and left.â€

    Every one laughed. Larxene wanted to make fun of him more. “You guys keep forgetting that Roxas is only 15. A hug means a lot for kids at that age.†Every one continued laughing. Roxas was mad. He hated being treated like a little kid!

    Xemnas decided to continue on the meeting. “Okay you guys, it’s time to stop making fun of Roxas. Roxas, next time you have to do more. Just a hug doesn’t mean anything. You have to kiss her!â€

    Roxas stopped breathing and looked at Axel. He liked her but he was way too embarrassed around her to kiss her! Maybe if he didn’t like her it would be easier. It really didn’t matter because he did like her. “I have to what?â€

    Saix talked now, he was a bit annoyed. “Kiss her; you know your lips touch hers. It’s really no big deal.â€

    Xemnas started to talk again. “Okay meeting over. Every one leave, except for Roxas and Axel.†Every one got up and left. “Axel, I want you to talk to Roxas about this.†He got up and left as well.

    “So, Roxas are you okay.†Axel asked.

    “Yeah, I guess. It’s just that I actually do like her and would be terrified to kiss her. What if she rejects me?â€

    “Roxas, stop worrying so much. She won’t reject you! Just make it romantic for her. You will be just fine.â€

    “Yeah I gues.†Axel got up to leave and patted Roxas on the back. Roxas sat there with his head in his hands and sighed.


    ~~~

    Hoped you liked the chapter! Please comment and vote on the poll!
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007, 13 replies, in forum: Archives
  13. dancecat120
    that was an idea but I don't think that Axel would do that....
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  14. dancecat120
    Thanks, I'll try....

    chapter 8 is in the works:D


    Oh and here is a question for any reader to answer....

    If Roxas were to see something that he should not see (in the castle that never was) what should it be and who should be doing it?

    please stay appriate....
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  15. dancecat120
    AWESOME!!!!!

    cool

    your story is awesome!

    great job!
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  16. dancecat120
    Thanks, expect the next chapter in a few hours.
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  17. dancecat120
    The next chapter is out. What will happen when Roxas and Kairi meet? and isn't it convient how there are always bushes never every thing? Only reading the next chapter will tell :)

    ~~~


    Chapter Seven


    Outside of Kairi’s Room

    Some how, Sora got to Kairi’s Room before Roxas did. Gasping for breath, Sora started talking to Riku. “Riku, they have a plan! Kairi falls in love with Roxas, Roxas ties up Kairi, they hold her hostage, they demand something from me.†Sora was still panting.

    Riku looked worried. “Sora, you have to leave. If what you say is true they can’t know you know. I have a plan.â€

    Sora looked utterly confused. “What?â€

    “You just have to trust me okay? I am going to do nothing. I will let him try to make her fall in love with him. If I know Kairi, which I think I do, then she won’t fall for him.â€

    “But what makes you so sure?†Sora asked worried.

    “Like I said, you have to trust me! Now go!†Sora ran off. Riku looked up and saw Roxas coming. Riku hid behind a bush.

    ---


    Kairi’s Room


    Kairi heard a tap on her door. “Sora, Riku, go away!â€

    “Huh, it’s me, Roxas. Please open up.â€

    Kairi got up and opened the door. She closed it behind her and sat back down on her bed. Roxas sat next to her. “Roxas, what are you doing here? What do you want?â€

    Roxas smiled sweetly. When he didn’t say anything Kairi continued. “I’m confused, what’s going on?â€

    Roxas was quiet for a bit, still smiling. “I, I like you Kairi.â€

    Kairi was a bit freaked out. “Wow. I don’t get it; I thought you can’t like me. No offense or anything but don’t you not feel emotions? Don’t you not have a heart?â€

    “Yeah, I don’t have a heart. But that doesn’t mean that I can’t like you Kairi.†Roxas said sounding a bit sad.

    “I’m sorry but do you really like me? Or is this just some plan?â€

    “I really do like you Kairi; I would never want to hurt you.†Roxas said stroking her hair.

    “I still don’t know. I just can’t find myself believing that you really like me. I thought you and Namine were†Roxas cut her off.

    “No, Namine and I are nothing.†Kairi continued to look up at him.

    She really didn’t want to believe that he liked her, but it was hard.

    She needed to think about this. “Roxas, I have to go to sleep. I’ll see you in the morning.â€

    Roxas smiled and got up. He hugged her and walked out the door.

    Woah. Kairi thought. What just happened here? She knew exactly what had happened. She had complicated her decision. There was now another guy to choose between. She still had no idea.

    She lay in bed for a while thinking until she slowly fell to sleep.

    ---

    On the Beach


    Axel sat there waiting for Roxas to return. He was sitting letting the waves just touch his feet. Roxas sat down next to him. “I’m back.†He smiled.

    “So, um how did it go?†Axel asked. He sounded a bit sad.

    “Well, the plan is working so far. We talked some and, uh well, and I hugged her.†Roxas was blushing.

    “Roxas, do you actuallyâ€

    Before he could finish his statement Roxas cut in. “Yes, I think I do.†They just sat there on the beach in silence. Both thinking over what had really happened.

    After a while, Axel decided to talk again. “Come on, let’s go back. They are probably wondering what happened.â€

    Roxas got up so that he could follow. “Axel, can you, um, try to not let them know that I actually like her.†He was embarrassed but he had to say it.

    “Sure, no one will know.†They stepped through the corridor of darkness.


    ~~~~

    Hope you liked it! Please comment and vote on the poll.


    Also a little note (axels#1fangirl had this first)

    I go back to school on monday and that means home work. I am going to try to finish up the story tonight or tommorrow but I might not be able to. That means there might not be new chapters for a long time :(


    but enjoy the story for now :D
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007, 9 replies, in forum: Archives
  18. dancecat120
    Awww so sad

    great job!


    FIRST POST!!!!
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  19. dancecat120
    I am just starting to write the next chapter now. This chapter will be much longer and I have other things I have to do before I can finish it so it might not be up for a while :)
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives
  20. dancecat120
    Thanks

    I really just write and hope that it shall work out. I really don't know where the story is going or what the end will but so I am just as confused as the readers :D
    Post by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007 in forum: Archives