Axel's good Deed's. Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Place: World That Never Was-Alleyway Time: 9:00pm Demyx was walking down the alleyway waiting for Axel. Him, Roxas, and Axel were gonna hang out all night. He heard footsteps and two figures. “Is that you Roxas? Axel?” Demyx said spooked. The two people got closer and closer……… Xaldin and Saix showed up. “Oh damn!” Demyx yelled. He started to run to the end of the alley-way but it was a dead end. Demyx tried to form a portal but was too scared to. He sat down in the corner behind a trash can. “We can see you, you know” Xaldin said while picking him up by the shirt. “Please stop Xaldin!” Demyx begged. “Did you hear that Xaldin, he said please,” Saix mocked. “Oh please! Please!” Saix said making fun of Demyx. Xaldin shoved him into the wall. Meanwhile, Axel and Roxas were waiting for Demyx where he was but couldn’t find him. “Where do you think he is?” Roxas asked. “I don’t know,” he replied. “Wait, listen!” Roxas said. He heard punching noises, screams, groans, and moaning. “Let’s go check it out,” Axel stated. They both ran down the alley-way and saw the two figures beating up on Demyx. “Hey! Get away from him!” yelled Axel, but before he make out who the two where, they disappeared into their portals. They both looked and saw Demyx lying on his chest with a bruise on his cheek. “Demyx you okay? Roxas asked, but Demyx didn’t answer. “He’s out,” Axel said. He grabbed one of his arms, and threw it over his shoulder. “Roxas, will you make a portal to his room,” Axel asked. He nodded and stuck his hand out in front of him to create one. “Thanks buddy,” Axel said thanking him. They walked throught and ended up in Demyx's room. Axel placed Demyx on his bed and watched him until he woke up. -------------------------------Morning------------------------------ Demyx woke up with a big sigh. “Hey there Demyx,” Axel greeted. Demyx shot up scared to death. “Where are they?” Demyx screamed! “Who are you talking about?” Roxas asked out of nowhere. “Xaldin and Saix,” Demyx answered. “Was that who beat you up yesterday?” Axel asked. Demyx nodded. “I’ll be right back,” Axel said while getting up. “Don’t leave me!” yelled Demyx. “Don’t worry, Roxas is right here. He won’t let anything happen to you,” Axel stated. Axel walked out of the room and into the living room where Saix and Xaldin were watching the television Axel turned it off. “What the hell did you do that for?” Saix asked. “You think you’re big and tough? Why do you have to be so cruel to Demyx? You know what a hard life he’s had! Knock it off!” Axel yelled. “Okay, for one thing, you should’ve seen the look on his face, and secondly, you don’t tell us what to do,” Xaldin reacted. Axel made a fire ring around him and Saix. “Lay off Demyx. The poor kid can’t even eat a cookie without making it soggy!” Axel demanded. “Whatever man, we’ll lay off,” Xaldin said. Axel vanquished the fire and walked up to Demyx’s room. “They said they will lay off,” Axel told Demyx of the cheerful new. “I still don’t trust them.” “Do you trust me?” Axel asked. “Yeah,” Demyx answered, “You Roxas and Xigbar are the only ones who aren’t mean to me.” “Well, trust me that if they ever harm you in any way, I’ll have your back, okay?” Axel asked. “Sure thing!” Demyx said proudly while high fiving Axel. Okay, that;s the end of chapter 2! Sorry if it looks like I rushed. I wrote that in about 10 minutes. Any more ideas? For ANY Organization member
I'mposting the 2nd one now! WHOO HOO!
omg! today I had this guy that replied to me... and this if funny.. I said. "I'm obbsessed with Kingdom Hearts Stupid Files 11." and this guy off my myspace said "Wow, you have no life. j/k" and I said. "Well, I would've agreed with you but you were just kidding," lol It's 12 midnight here. ALmost 12:20
Thanks!!! I'll keep that in mind! I'll probabbly do him in the 6th or 7th chapter.. The next one about him gettin bullied. THe poll has spoken! lol
There are 12 or 13 chapters. He does 1 good deed for all organization members. Including himself…. Chapter 1 World: The world that never was Time: Morning…. Hearing the annoying sound of his alarm clock, he smashed it and burned it at the same time…… “Good morning sleepy-head!” said Demyx as he came in the door. “Not a good morning for me,” Axel said while plumping his face onto his soft pillow “Well, you better get up; Xemnas wants us to meet him in the lounge,” Demyx said cheerfully. Axel peeked one of his eyes out of the pillow and saw Demyx grinning at him. “Alright, alright, just get out so I can dress,” Axel muttered. Demyx ran off. Axel got out of bed, combed his hair, put on his hood and walked out. As he was walking down the hallway, he met up with Larxene. “You better hurry on to the lounge. Xemnas said if anyone is late, he will severely punish them,” “What about you?” Axel asked. “Xemnas said, all boys report to the lounge. That leaves me out,” Larxene said. “Well, you ARE the only girl,” Axel stated. “Yeah, well, at least when he asks where I am, I have a good reason,” Larxene said. Axel took off towards the lounge. Xemnas was getting reading to stand up and speak. All seats were taken except for one. “Alright *ahem*,” Xemnas started. He looked at the empty chair. ‘Who isn’t present at the time?” Xemnas asked. All the organization members looked at each other. “I will not repeat myself, who isn’t here?” Xemnas asked. He looked around. “Axel?” he announced. “Present,” Axel answered. “Demyx,” Xemnas answered. "Right here," demyx answered “Larxene,” Xemnas called out. No response. He looked for her but couldn’t see her. “Where is Larxene?” Xemnas asked. “She is in the hallway,” Axel answered. “Bring her to me,” Xemnas demanded. Axel got up from his seat and went outside to the hallway. He saw Larxene at the end of the hallway. “Larxene!” he yelled, “Xemnas wants to see you!” Axel yelled. Larxene ran down the hallway and walked into the lounge. She walked up to Xemnas. “Why didn’t you come when asked?” Xemnas asked Larxene. “You said for all boys to-” but she was cut off…… WHAM! A big smack right in the face. Larxene put her hand over where Xemnas had slapped her. She started to have a teardrop go down the left side of her face. “I didn’t ask for excuses,” Xemnas said, “Why didn’t you come when asked?” he asked her again. “You said for all boys-” she said but was interrupted once again with another smack in the face. “That’s enough Xemnas!” Axel called out. “Sit down right now or you will share the punishment,” Xemnas stated. “I’ll take it all,” he yelled. Xemnas grabbed Larxene’s arm and pushed her to the ground. “You will do no such thing. This girl disobeyed an order, and must be taught a lesson!” Xemnas stated. Xemnas got out one of his laser blades and was getting ready to hit Larxene. “Stop it right now Xemnas!” Axel cried out. But Xemnas went ahead and struck her on her right hip. “Ahh!” she screamed. Her body lied there semi-unconscious. Xemnas was getting ready for another blow but axel shot his blade out of his hand. “I said that’s enough!” Axel yelled. He walked up and picked up Larxene in his arms and was getting ready to walk out the door. “If you leave, you’ll pay the ultimate price!” Xemnas yelled. Axel turned around to look at Xemnas. “What more harm could you cause me?” he asked. Xemnas stared at Axel for a few moments until Axel left the room. “Okay, back on with our meeting,” Xemnas said faintly as Axel was walking down the hallway into his bedroom. He set Larxene on his bed and put his hand on her bruised cheek. “You didn’t have to do that for me,” Larxene said weakly. “Yeah, but if I didn’t, you could’ve been hurt much worse,” Axel stated. “Thanks,” Larxene said gratefully. “No need to. Just helping someone makes me happy,” Axel said. I need ideas so Message me for ideas. He has to help ALL members.... srry about the typos The first option to reach 5 votes will automatically be the next deed
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haha!!! that was funny!!! haha.... When I read that and fell to the floor laughing my sister thought I went crazy until she read it.. then we were BOTH in the floor laughing! lol
true, true
Ahhhhhhhhhhh! It'z Sooo Awesome!!! Whoo Hooo!!!!! Ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! :)
lol..... I think that she has enough pressure already.....lol
these stories are da bomb! I'm gonna start making my own!! AWESOME!!! but not right now. maybe in a few hours I might
wait.... Did you already have spring break?? Cause this is the friday that ends MY Spring break. Awwwww man! I gtg back to school monday -.- boo hoo for me!!
After you finsh this story, will you make another? PLEASE??????
WHOO HOO! THAT WAS AWESOME!.. yeah, the stampeed thing confused me alil bit until I re red it.. This is sooo cool. You should make a book!!!!!! lol That was awesome!
OMg.. this is gettin intense! I love this one!! It's awesome! When are you gonna make chapter 5? THIS IS SOO COOL! I love this story! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! *srry. I had to do it cause YOU ROCK!!!1*
MY first one was shut down b/c some guy said that whoever made this was a a** I think.... but I used different grades this time... YAY
wtf?? I don't understand ANY of this.. who is the bald guy that forze the roxas look-alike???
10 questions... 2 rhetorical, 2 math, 2 science 2 literary, and 2 artz and humanity. No cheating or you are immediantly WRONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! rhetorical questions-(don't matter if you get them wrong or right...These are not really meant to be answered coretly) 1) can a blind man see his dreams? 2)can a deaf man hear his thoughts? math 3) 3a + 2b= 12 solve for a 4) Train a leaves the station at 4:00 and speeds at 50 miles an hour. Train b leaves the station at 6:00 and speeds at 100 miles an hour. both trains are headed for the same station on seperate tracks. the station they are reaching is 200 miles away..which train gets to the station first? Science Multiple choice 5)What structure in Mitosis pulls the chromotida apart? a)centromere b)chromosome c)spindle fiber 6)what does organic mean? a)living b)dead c)differences Literary 7)how many paragraphs does a buisness letter have to contain? a)3 b)4 c)5 8) which of the following allows you to express your opinions? a)buisness letters b) friendly letters c) editorial artz and humanity 9)What does Rythm mean? 10)what are the 4 space notes on a music staff? Know what your answers are 1.yes 2.yes 3.a=(12-b)/3 4.at the same time 5.c 6.a 7.c 8.c 9.beat of music 10.either one of these answers answer: 1)a,c,g,e 2)e,f,a,c missed 0-100-THIS IS GREAT not many ppl get this missed 1-90-Great! missed 2-80-Awesome! missed 3-70-Doing great for getting this far missed 4- 60-Average-(like me!) missed 5 through 10- don't worry, this is what i got first time I took the test!
hey there. If you wanna stay out of trouble... follow the rules and NO SPAMMING! Message me if you need any help.... buh byez! p.s: love your name.. is it pronounced like Kairi's is on kingdom hearts?
AHHHH! ME TOO!!!!!! Did you notice that Larxene is the only girl in organization 13? (unless your count Marly... j/k)
