Mish, post more pics, you know we gotta see more than just one...*rolls eyes* Element, I LOVE THOSE DOGS, so adorable. Nice pics, too. BHK, I knew you were a guy. xD
I think it's pretty good. Straight forward, and I have no clue where it is. xDD 9.5/10
I need the render, General. I can't do it without one. =P Pick any render, but make sure it's not already in a graphic. Planet Render's is a place to look.
A fingers snapped and a light came on, with a large desk and a man looking in deep thought at the end of the room. it was a regular sized room, many books, and a little sofa by the left wall. "everyone...this is Arah..." Raiden said annoyed. "Welcome...young ones." Arah said. (I'm gonna wait for everyone in the RP to say something)
It's lower quality than the initial piece...? It seems like the filters don't work much at all. Try diff. colors, and don't mess with the quality. The text is okay, but a little out of place, imo. It's okay, but definetly not one of your best pieces.
"Fine..." They walked and walked until finally they came to a large red door. The door did not completely opened, instead, Raiden opened a small door at the bottom. He stepped back holding the door open and let everyone walk through. Raiden walked into the dark room and kneeled.
"No, that wouldn't work. Since you've never been there, you would get lost in the transfer." Raiden assumed.
"...that's exactly what he tries to everyone. I'm sick of his tricks, it's always "do this" and "do that" for him...For f-ing 46 years. All I ever got was a sword to use. Though I prefer it, It can get boring." he said losing more and more focus. After that the hallway expanded farther and everyone in it went back farther than before. "Huh??? Oh crap!" Raiden yelled grabbing onto a wall. "I knew this would happen."
"What? You knew Him???" Raidon stopped walking in amazment, not knowing he lost focus. "What the hell? Why didn't you say something earlier?"
"It goes on endlessly, if you don't know what you are doing. This is a little passage down to Arah's wing of this castle. Don't lose focus, you might get left behind, one of the tricky things about this hall."
Raiden pointed down into the dark abyss with a stern look. he started walking forward... "Arah is at the end of this..Arah sleeps, follow me, I'll show you where."
As Axel's firey power touched the orb, tourches lit all around the room by the dozens. "We're here..." Raiden said.
(DR!! What are you doing???) ooc- Please, don't do that. We still have a little bit to go, edit that post, please. Raiden opened the door letting the others walk through to the other side. No light enters in here. As they all pass through, a faint glimmer appears. "Everyone, go and lay hands on that light.."
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Alright...ZetoCloud wins. ROAR!!1 I didn't expect that.. Good job voters and praticipants. -CLOSED-
Awww. D= D.C.'s are my favorite right now. After wearing the classic black and white vans for 5 years, I had to change. xD
Anyone Else Here Got D.C.'s?! =D
I am a skater. TT_____TT And people think I'm emo because of the way I dress. TTT_____TTT
Nah, I'm only Emo on Thursdays. ;D
I kinda...am emo, guys. o_o
