No real problems I suppose. You could seriously do to flesh out your character a bit more, I understand the coldness and self deprecating acceptance of the above as well as the enigmatic presence, but it's a bit overdone pull it back a bit and let subtlety be your friend. Also, sentences should be structured properly whenever possible, don't put together words that don't want to be. "We both sat down at the wooden table in the Elder’s house, a combination of brick and hard work was made to build the place." The highlighted portion is incorrect in some way, how? You can't make hard work, that doesn't fit. Recheck for grammar and sentence structure before posting, wrong grammar can be forgiven by some but not others. The chapter or section, whatever it is ends too abruptly and gives not sense of a pause, consider where you stop a section, it really makes a difference. I don't think there's anything else I have to say, keep improving yourself.
Take on me?
I actually laughed out loud at your agitation and anger.
Regarding the topic... I've gotten used to everything I know becoming a fad at one point or another.
Yeah, I'd say the same as this guy.
If I was a man I'd be in jail for multiple accounts of rape among other things.
In the world according to you, what is my real name? Again in the world according to you, what is your age?
The only way to know is the relative tightness of pants before, during and after riding.
Aw, your just too silly sometimes.
Kitty has nice thoughts, I wish I were in her head sometimes. <3 Also, I'm any kind of sexual you need. ^.^
Any one foreigner in particular? Come now, spare me no details here.
One side of me is saying, "No they're just pictures!" the other is saying something not fit for human consumption, have fun guessing what it is.
To address your first point people's emotions don't as you said "pour out". Mannerisms and expressions accepted to convey a certain mood translate this information to us, you may think you feel something off of them by the way someone carries themselves or how they seem to be but that is all taken in by conscious and unconscious observations the same as a first impression. Auras don't portray that your ability to see, hear, smell, touch and so on are to blame whether you can recognize it or not. You seem to realize that it's possible but put too much stock in superstition and the like. Psychics who advocate such things don't use anything substantial to back themselves up so I don't feel they have the right to proclaim themselves as correct. Think what you want, but physical laws are nigh immutable without any proof at all.
Why if I may ask without being attacked by that rabid attack dog I see?
Wut u gaiz sink fo meat? Also, take your pants off.
It was fun, in a depraved way.
Not in those specific words.
Nothing primary school didn't do.
So you admit there still is some?
You're always welcome. If you need anything, you know the drill.
