Meh, pretty good. You?
I'm going with Valor form, with Final form in second. I love the design and colors on the two.
Wow...that's a very unique style you've got there. I like the way you've assembled the details. The proportions are good. The only thing I would add is probably a little more detail to the hair and eyes, a little more variety in the colors. That aside, Sasuke looks very impressive!
What's new, folks?
Yeah, Zack seemed like a nice guy from what I've read about him. Next chapter: Cloud landed outside the narrow corridor that led to the Dark Depths. He walked all the way along the corridor, and stopped just short of the exit out. He took a deep breath, and exhaled it...with all the time he's been alone, whether it was by himself or surrounded by everyone else, it felt like at the rate he was going, he probably would never get used to this. He walked outside the corridor, into the Dark Depths. The farther he walked into the Dark Depths, the more Tifa became visible to him. She was sitting on a blanket, a picnic lunch set out. She was facing the castle, restored thanks to the program the others took part in a month or so back. She appeared to not notice Cloud. Cloud sighed a little in relief, while still maintaining his 'serious' face. He walked a few steps forward, and then he heard it: "I was beginning to think you weren't going to show," said Tifa, still staring at the castle. Cloud froze, his heart beginning to pick up a bit. She sounded a little annoyed that he was late, but she also seemed kind, like it really didn't matter...since Cloud still wasn't used to Tifa being around him so much, he couldn't tell if she was being sincere or if he was in big trouble and that he'd pay for it later. He mentally flipped a coin, chose 'sincere', and walked forward until he was next to Tifa. "Sorry," Cloud said, taking a seat next to Tifa, one leg straight out, the other's knee bent and going up to Cloud's chin, "We got a little delayed. There was more trouble going on with Sora than we anticipated." Cloud told Tifa everything they found out when he and Squall went to the Destiny Islands. Tifa didn't look at him at all, making Cloud seriously doubt his choice about thinking she was 'sincere'. It wasn't until he mentioned Hiashi that Tifa actually looked at him. "You found Hiahsi?!" Tifa exclaimed. She looked like she somebody told her the greatest news in the world, "Is she all right?! Why was she gone all this time?!" Cloud recoiled a little at the sudden change in emotion from Tifa. "She's...I'm not sure," Cloud looked at the castle, "She's not the same as I remember. She should be older than us, but it looks like the reverse. She doesn't appear any older than Riku." Tifa stared at him, "Maybe she just ages gracefully. You're certainly one of those cases, Cloud. You look like you're 21," She leaned towards him and hugged his arm, resting her head on his shoulder, "I'm glad you all found her, though. I haven't seen her since she babysat us." Cloud, head still faced towards the castle, turned his eyes toward Tifa. He felt like his heart was going to burst at this rate. He really wasn't used to this. He gulped a little bit, and then started again, "She also doesn't act like she did back then." Tifa lifted her head and looked at Cloud. He quickly turned his eyes towards the castle. "She's much colder than I remember. She doesn't laugh, hardly smiled, and looked like she was going to pick a fight with anyone at a moments notice," Cloud shook his head, "She looked like she was going to attack us at one point in time, until we told her who we were. That really didn't make her feel any better, though." Tifa watched Cloud as he tried hard to keep his gaze at the distance. Despite his blushing, he was doing a decent job at trying to look like the 'cool/tough' guy. It still looked like he was having a tough time trying to open up to her. At least he's trying, she thought. Tifa smiled a little, Besides...he looks cute when he's trying to cover it up. "Well, we can't really blame her for not being trusting," said Tifa. Cloud turned his head towards her, "Why's that?" Tifa looked up at him, a little confused, then she realized and nodded, "That's right, you don't know," she straightened up and let go of his arm, "We took a look at some of the Ansem reports, and found out that Hiashi's boyfriend was involved with the experiments with darkness." Cloud raised his eyebrows, "Who was her boyfriend?" Tifa sighed, "It was..." A little short, but that should keep you all going for a while. Cnc?
Man, I'm starting to get into this story a little too much...I actually want to go to the tournament and superglue Chaylie's sword to the ground or something, anything so Kairi can win... Good chapter, and keep up the good work.
*sees the three votes*...I'm touched. I've got it tied between DestinyStar, Demitryx, and Destiny's Force. In terms of 'd', they are the only people I talk to.
All and all, it's not so bad. Like Destiny said, try to make the words flow better. I'd also check the spelling; some of these words don't fit correctly (replace 'threw' with 'through', etc.). Ah, the life of a teen. I know that story all too well...I can tell you it gets easier after high school, if that helps.
Very mysterious so far. Souleaters...Riku's first weapon as an enemy name...makes me ponder...please don't make us wait long...
Lol, it'd be funny if the rumor turned out to be true...another joke set up by Nomura.
Can somebody send you a copy of the song to use?
"I pulled the ol' switcheroo...just like Indiana Jones would'a done." Sarge from Red vs. Blue "Turtle turtle!" Master of Disguise "Help me, Tom Cruise!" Ricky Bobby "Oh, snap." Chicken Little. "Helloooooooooo, nurse!" Animaniacs. "Andy...you've turned into a real boy!" Caboose from Red vs. Blue
For me, a toss up between Garfield or Ctrl+Alt+Delete.
Lol, that's funny. Fool! The beavers can use automated weapons as well as have superpowers!
Very well. *Points* Attack, my army of genetically-altered super beavers! *the beavers attack*
Great, more competition...
*falls over from the tackles*Oomph! Hey, how is everyone?
*getting excited* Again! Slap him again! Harder, harder! Again! Slap him again! Make him suffer!...Sorry, got carried away for a second.
Only thing I can think of is that boogers get on it also...>_<
I've got two volumes of that cartoon!
