I think Kairi should be put in a party with Sora and Riku and have a special combo and stuff. Why: It would show the unity of their friendship even more and allow her to play more of a part in the story.
Well, it's great that you like Kingdom Hearts since this is a Kingdom Hearts website. I hope to see more of your post. Read the rules. Stay active. Make friends. Have fun.
Lexaeus. Why: His element was strong and so was his weapon. That is my opinion for the moment. I actually found some of the members were very close to each other in power so this was a hard decision sort of.
I think Sora sort of isa jerk in a way. I mean, after finding Riku and Kairi he could have started looking for his Mom or atleast after finding Kairi and/or Riku then waiting to find the other and using the one he found to help him find his friends and parent(s). He doesn't even mention his Mom once through Kingdom Hearts 1 so I believe he wasn't really nice about it... Maybe not really a jerk, but you know, he could have atleast wasted some time to think about his Mom instead of Kairi and Riku. I mean, who gave birth to him, Kairi and Riku or his mom and dad?
I never really noticed this. What could it do with the story? I mean, could it be like the one above The World That Never Was? Could it appear again in future Kingdom Hearts games? It'd be fun to see if that actually had a point in the story. Ah, well. Great job on noticing that.
Kingdom Hearts II. Why: Some mysteries were cleared up there but some more were opend and it gave me some suspense for the next games in the series.
Well, you certainly did a nice job introducing yourself and telling about yourself. You seem like a nice person, I'm pretty sure you'll easilly make friends here. Ask questions if you need help, and I'm pretty sure you'll recieve help sooner or later. Just read the rules, post a lot, stay active, you know. Though, while you're doing all that: Have fun.
This seems like a nice and origional story. You certainly have a good length to it and it makes a good read. Can I make a suggestion? Work on capitalization, just slightly. I enjoyed reading it, though. You're giving the chapters titles, which I think makes the chapters more distinguishable from one another, so good job on that also.
I'd give Xemnas Two Across. Since I think it'd fit him. But if it can' be a Final Mix Keyblade, I would give him a Oathkeeper/Oblivion. Maybe he could use both because he uses those two sabres so, two Keyblades in exchange for two sabres. Though if I followed this logic Xaldin could have a Keyblade to replace every single one of his lances maybe. That would look cool in my opinion.
I'm a fan of Linkin Park. I always enjoy listening to their music, and I enjoy listening to this. I'll give it a rating of 8.5/10 in my opinion. The song is good, they might could have been able to do more with it, but I still think it's good.
Vexen. Why: I didn't really hate him that much, and his ending scene was a good one in my oppinion, but the freezing attack sometimes slightly irritated me. I idn't really hate any of the Organization members. Vexen just sort of came to mind first at the moment.
I feel sorry for Repliku. I mean, he wanted friends and a Heart. He tried his hardest to do this. I think his ending was unfair. It gets sad if you really think about it in my oppinion.
Metal Chocobo. Why: It was a nice and useful Keyblade and all, but they might could have improved upon the design. It looks good, but somehow they might could have done better.
Billy Zane. Why: I usually prefer origional voices and whenever I heard his voice it always seemed a great voice that fitted his character. I looked forward to hearing the scenes when he was in the game. Richard Epcar was great and really suited the role also, but for this case I'm going with Billy Zane for now.
The fight itself was not that hard in my oppinion. The biggest thing that got in my way in the fight in my oppinion was falling off the platform. I sometimes almost got him beat, and then fell off the platform. The fight itself was fun, though in my oppinion.
Axel. Why: I like his fire attacks, and since I liked the battle against him with Roxas, it'd be cool to get to see some stuff from his point of view in my oppinion.
First: Riku Replica: Had trouble getting the right card. Second: Zexion: It just stuck out as a hard battle to me. Third: Vexen: I got froze sometimes and the battle took a while, so... Those are my opinions.
Well, I didn't really laugh at ether of the introductions, but I'll say the Kingdom Hearts II one with Pete. It just sticks out as a slightly more humorous one.
Riku Replica: Last Battle Why: I didn't really have trouble with the game or any of the bosses really, but I remember this battle whenever I try to think of what I had the most trouble on. I sometimes had trouble during this battle getting the right cards, and that made it more challinging. Though after the battle the difficulty of the fight made it all the more rewarding for me so I guess it evened out for me.
Remedy - Seether
