Looking good so far. My only criticism at the moment is that of the court system. While clearly Stardust has to die, it leaves a bad taste in the readers' mouths to have a completely valid objection swept under the rug, without Misty confronted about it. I think the court needs to be improved upon, to make the rest of the staff seem competent. Ideally, there should be a 3:1 ratio of court scenes to non-court, but I'll settle for a little less. :lolface: As a guess, the KHV-Core thing is going in an Evangelion Instrumentality direction. If it can grant godhood, then at the end of the story, everything will be ideally reset by someone good getting the Core instead of Misty. Also, Misty's motivation is similar to the Instrumentality thing, where the initiator wishes to see departed friends or family again.
KH2man lived as a hermit in the mountains. Did Kira's reign succeed, or did some detective expose him? It doesn't matter, because it has nothing to do with KH2man, who was isolated from society. Happy? All three of those rules will go into effect next round. I will update it shortly. Who wants list making/round naming duties?
Bumping, because we're all alone in there.
Bump for more people.
