Stop looking xD HA! I don't have one here.. Oh sh- I do xD why are you being random? :B
She stepped back a step. "uhhh," she tried to say.. She really did like him, but.. it wasn't in her mind that she did. "I guess, you could say something like that," she said. "Wait a second. How do you know about vampires?" she asked. Her thoughts clouded and she knew he was either a vampire, knew one, or was the werewolf. She took a few more steps back.
Awww ^^ Don't look! xD
Kimikia stumbled upon him. He looked different that what she expected, through his voice. "Umm, hi.. I'm Kimikia," she said smiling. She looked around. "I know this is going to sound, different but.. I'm looking for, a werewolf," she said. She looked around again. "He attacked a friend of mine...that i really like earlier," she said.
Then stop looking? xD I love you =D
Not climb up my leg? xD
Kimikia ran around the forest. "Hello!?" she shouted. she kept running and fell in a ditch. "Shoot," she muttered, standing up and dusting herself off. She jumped up and grabbed a tree branch, pulling herself out. "Hello!?!" she shouted again, she flashed her flash light around.
2/10 :B
pffft xD I'd rather have two kids, my kittens are fighting and climbing up my legs xD
stop copying me xD Made someone look again :B
Oh noes xD I'l trade you two kids for two kittens :B
Kimikia waited for him to leave before she ran back out. She ran towards the forest in front of her house, instead of the trail. She wanted to go search for the werewolf. Maybe she could talk to him and see what his deal was. She grabbed a flashlight before heading out.
I've got a few requests for your story. You make them seem all talk and no action. Let them do this.. I'm not changing yours, I'll just let you have a sample. The morning seemed bright and early... The ocean looked clear as the sky and the water rocked the boat gently. Kairi sat on the boat, and looked over at Sora slightly. She poked him once, realizing he was asleep. She chuckled to herself, letting her feet dangle into the ocean. "Sora! Wake up, there's a dolphin!" she screamed excitedly. She watched the adorable dolphin and looked back at Sora. "Sora? Wake up!" she said, shaking him slightly. After shaking him, he had still not submerged from his slumber. Kairi thought of the quickest way to get him awake. "Sora a heartless!" she shouted. Sora's eyes opened immediantly and he jumped up. "What!? Where! Where!?!" Sora shouted, summoning his keyblade looking around.. Kairi let out a chuckle again at his reaction That's only a sample of how better you can be.. I like your story plot a lot, but it was a little confusing for me, because at the beginning i didn't know their surroundings, and it was a little hard for me to get who was saying what. Your Grammer is great, and i like that i saw no mistakes. You can use a little bit more punctuation.
apparently, you don't know what phail is xD that's good it means you don't :B
I w.a.n.t t.o w.a.t.c.h t.h.a.t m.o.v.i.e n.o.w T.h.a.n.k.s x.D
Awww shi- i didn't want a twin Dx
She opened her eyes and hopped off softly. She smiled. "Be safe for me," she said walking into her house.
I'ma fail at imitating a dragon.. ROAR :I
Dude, take a chill pill, I'm using sarcasm xD
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