OOC: suck it xD jking :P I like romance xD BIC: Jessica smiled and intertwined her fingers through his.
She laughed and slowed down. "Well, i don't even know hoe to get out of here... So you can lead the way," she said.
You need to make the head more rounder instead of oval shapped. The shoulders are a little misshapped and different lengths. The arms are a little too skinny, and the hands look like claws... The Legs are too skinny for the body. I really like the figure of the the body though, that's one thing that i like about it. The hips need to be a little more wider though.
As Cin pointed out, most of your mistakes are towards the upper body. Her neck also looks a little skinny to match with the head and body. Her arms also are a little to skinny.
Jessica was going fast, almost like it were a race.
"no....choking!" she gasped out then slapped him in the face, getting away.
She chuckled and tapped him with her wand. "Let's fly it's faster!" she said taking off.
OOC: o_o my cousin actually did that to his best friend here... It was pretty scary to even watch BIC: Jessica wouldn't give up her consciousness. Not now. She couldn't breath. She elbowed him again, trying to get out of his hold. She even bit his arm.
Carebears attack!!!!! *destroys thread*
"Or I could just hide them with, human clothes," she said. [/SIZE]
OOC: Me and another RPer ended up doing that through PM instead xD BIC: She shook her head. "No.. but i'd love to. I'm only afraid where my wings are showing. Maybe i could hide them" she said.
She threw the flashlight to the side, breaking it and jumped out of the way. She ran out of the back doors and started running again outside.
She flashed it to the side once. "Get away from me!" she said, crying.
OOC: o-o xD I'd laugh if we did it through here BIC: She smiled. "I have no clue what that is but it sounds fun," she said.
"Well, went through with our wedding, i can go along with your 'honeymoon'... What does one do on a honeymoon?" she asked.
She kicked him off her and grabbed the light She pointed it at him thinking. "If you don't get away from me you creep! I'll turn it on..." she said.
and with ever kick 10 kittens lives are spared *kicks*
She screamed and tied to get away form him. She didn't believe him at the moment. They were saying so much stuff, she couldn't really trust them. She struggled.
She frowned and looked down. "If you don't want to be married then that' fine," she said a little disappointed at herself.
"You don't want to be married right now?" she asked OOC: Meh xD Nothing really, they've been wandering around the forest mostly... They each gave the other a gold flower from the large tree in the middle of the forest, which means they're married.