no, people just see Xion differently. likely the only reason he COULD see Xion as Ven was because Ven went into Sora's heart, but Saix always saw Xion with her hood up, as a puppet. he never saw her as a person. Axel also saw Xion with her hood up up until they had ice cream together. Xion's appearance is entirely based upon the observers perception of her. Axel and Roxas saw her as a friend, so they saw HER. Saix saw her as a tool to be used, so she always had her hood up around him. i dont know what Xigbar thought of Xion, so i dont know how he came up with Ven's image for her. ideas?
YES!!! I guess... Spoiler VEN!!!!! hes the only one who looks similar enough to Roxas for Xion to confuse them. plus, hes currently living in Castle Oblivion. why is he awake? now to edits. down here: double spacing paragraphs goes more like this: See the ease of reading? yes. also, this ones just a question but... whats a waddle? i realize that it is a word, but it doesnt seem to fit into this context. beyond that, great chapter. extra detail would be nice, such as actions or description of surroundings, not so much that it destroys your writing style (ah the horror!!!) but a bit. i really want to know whats going to happen next, so keep going!!! isnt that what Kairi said to him in KH1? oh the speculation....
you know you play Kingdom Hearts too much when: - youve actually tried to invent a recipe for seasalt ice cream - youre talking to your younger cousin and keep saying "King Mickey" instead of just plain "Mickey" - you can relate the plot of each game, in full detail, to someone whos never played it before and have them walk away understanding everything about the games - your non-gaming friends look at you funny cause you included a KH allusion in normal conversation without realizing it - you can draw each Keyblade in perfect detail
you know you play KH too much when you see your small black dog out of the corner of your eye and start freaking that its a Shadow. ive actually done that.
true, but the sites never have the complete series. KH1 was finished, but not 2. actually, i dont think that 2 ever got translated into english. oh well, maybe it will now.
very interesting. can i guess who "The Body" is? as Saxima said, double space the paragraphs, but youve done a really good job so far. hurry with Chapter 1 please!
Xehanort says when the Lingering Spirit is created "Your body submits, your heart succumbs, so why does your mind resist" thus stating that his mind/soul (lots of trouble over which word to use, huh?) is in Lingering Sentiment. cutscene here. its right at the end Spoiler [video]http://www.kh-vids.net/newplayer.php?id=F_lI_mm7-9o&fmt=18[/video]
oh thankyou! that makes sense.
yes, i can view my other conversations. just the 1 doesnt work.
hey, i was trying to view a converssation id had with a friend on my visitor messgae thing, but this came up. http://www.kh-vids.net/converse.php?u=50591&u2=35606 View attachment 26611 im pretty sure i didnt do anything wrong. can you tell me whats up?
ok, i have a few things to point out and since im too lazy to try to describe their location, ill just be doing this, k? if anyone said any of this stuff previously, sorry for reiterating you. it was unintentional. lets get started! Spoiler there, done. you have a problem with any of it, let me know.
went to a theme park. super fun! came home. now i cant eat the delicious supper that mom made cause my stomach is still freaking out about the rollercoasters. drop of doom gave me a stupidly big head ache. and a&w's terrible gravy is still making me sick. so, starving, headachy and nauseous. great job theme park. ......ah screw it, it was worth it. when do i get to go again?
she could put on a pair of Aqua-esque spandex shorts under her skirt. thats what the girls in my school do when they want to wear a skirt thats too short for dress code standards. or, Nomura could give the characters new clothing. thatd be awesome.
technically, Xemnas is strongest, cause hes the main boss, but i think Roxas is. if you think about it, Roxas basically IS Sora, and Sora beat Xemnas. thus, Roxas is strongest. btw, why is this in creativity corner?
maybe hes deflecting his anger at Terra (for scarring his face and poking out his eye and stuff) onto Ven.
definitely. i was trying to collect the volumes, just before Tokyopop cancelled it. so ive got 2&4 of KH1 and both of CoM but thats it. i would love to finally finish reading KH2 and start Days tho'
Question: do Xigbar and Ven EVER meet? i cant quite remember, but i dont think they do. EDIT: they do meet, in the Keyblade Graveyard, but Xigbar doesnt see Ven's normal clothes, only his armor.
not bad. i like the idea of Sora finally meeting Xion. hey, i like the idea of Xion coming back period. i do suggest starting a new paragraph in between speakers, example at bottom. also, in case you dont know, double space your paragraphs. this makes it easier to read. your grammer isnt bad, but you should check your sentence structure. try typing chapters in a word processer like Microsoft Word or something before posting it. it will definitely help.
ok, there was alot here that could be worked with. i cant point out every little detail, so im just going to edit this right here. Spoiler all my edits are in red. try making the chapters longer, and use a word processor when you're typing doing rough drafts. they really help with sentence structure. use quotation marks ("...") when people are talking. or, if youre french, use french quotes (<<...>>). dont forget to double space paragraphs, spellcheck, etc.
very good. you could have kept to the a b a b rhyming scheme better, but it works well as a free verse too. just a question though: is this supposed to be in this section, or in the Poetry and Lyrics subforum?
