it would be the most awesome flour. im just not sure how well the cookies will bake
banned for blaming me for eating the last piece f pie. i ate the ENTIRE pie. it was delicious
do... do you want some?
banned for putting the bacon in the soap
banned for skipping me
banned for unicorns
banned for hugging me. and for banning me for living under a rock. and for sitting on your window sill
i can honestly say i laughed out loud.
banned for thinking teletubbies look normal. O_o
very obviously.
banned for thinking Pikmin look weird. Teletubbies look weird. Pikmins are cute.
this. is. ADORABLE!!! but on to edits: i did notice problems in the areas you mentioned, but since you know about those already, ill leave them alone. you seem to have a tendancy to put the speaker and the speech in different paragraphs. example: there isnt really anything wrong with this. im simply pointing it out because it might cause some confusion for the reader. beyond this, i didnt really see anything wrong. this is a great story. i like the premise of Timmys mom becoming his guardian angel, and him seeing and speaking to her after she saves him. and the first two paragraphs made be laugh.
banned for not having an army of Pikmin. theyre so darn cute!
Option 1 is best. i probably should be here, since you said KHV guys, but im here anyways my reasoning: as previously mentioned, movie theatres are freezing, especially in summer when they have the AC at full blast the jeans will keep you from shivering from head to toe (unless that what youre aiming for, idk). but, (again, as previously mentioned) you should dress according to where youre eating. if its a fairly common place, casual is best. if its not, formal. what i would really suggest would be black jeans (if you have them) and a nice top. this way, its casual, but can pass for formal.
is fine is fine. but seriously, never do it again. i dont think Droid can handle any more trauma.
banned for i need no help!!! i have an army of Pikmin!!!!!
Aquas a guy. that makes him a wizard. or, a man-witch ........ BURN THE MAN-WITCH
the Labs? Labs arent small!
banned for defending my rock. its my rock, and i will defend it myself
thats the point