i has no pics and the thread that was the worst was deleted xD *coughs*SorasDarkness*coughs* ack, so sorry i'm sick *coughs* xD
sure.. <3 i'm making a new RP sometime today...
Dante ran through the rooftops, making each landing as gentle as he could. His legs were tired, but he smelled more blood. The same kid he attacked the other day. He growled and ran towards it. Jordyn read his mind, knowing he smelled more blood. Her stomach lurched. "No! Stop!" she shouted. But she felt another bite. One on her hip.... apparently, that was the closest he could bite, whereas she was over his shoulder. She let out another crying scream. She wished he wouldn't bite her anymore. She cried out louder and tried to kick and move, but she was still paralyzed
it's the first rule. i've seen rp's with sex, and rules rules don't stop em xDDD;
Just you wait and see As school life is a It is a woken dream Aren’t you feeling alone?
Hmm, been a little while since i last posted :33
OOC: I'm gonna just keep my characters colors the same brownish color, it's easier to use both of them in the same plot, I'll make sure they won't separate, but if they do, i'll break it down in paragraphs or bold whoever is speaking or something. BIC: Jordyn felt the intense pressure after she had hit her head on the concrete. She felt the blood moisten around her head at the fractured part of her head. She felt shattered pieces, but they soon grew back together within a few seconds. She groaned and opened her eyes, seeing the vampire boy in front of her. He apparently seemed frightened. Fear was in his eyes and yet he stood over her growling at her. "What do you want?" Jordyn asked, staying as calm as she could. His eyes seemed more frightened at her spoken words. "I want....blood," Dante shuddered. His spoken words seemed shaken, and yet courageous at the same time. IN his mind, the burning was so bad. Since his encounter with Roxas, blood is all he lusts for. He growled and bit her shoulder. Jordyn let out a loud pulsating scream. It hurt so bad now. She felt so horrible for any human that was bit by him .Her cries muffled as she felt him pick her up and slung over his shoulder. The bit had somehow paralyzed her. He must have used the poison in his fangs. Her legs felt weakened and her heart thudded faster. The poison was taking effect. She groaned and was able to move her hand slowly. She tried to push herself away but she was already too weak. "Hmph, don't even bother," he said. He jumped up and onto the buildings, already making his way across Twilight Town. He headed to the Gummy Hanger, ready for his departure to the World That Never Was.
The thickets brushed along Jordyn's shoulder, as she lay still in the deep thicket of the forest below the mansion in Twilight town. Her throat ached and burned. She wanted something to stop it, but she couldn't do that to any humans here. That's why she decided to live in the forest. The animals around her didn't seem as appealing, but in her mind, she thought it would be so much better to get them instead of the mostly appealing humans. To her, men seems more appealing, but this new scent of the vampire has her confused. Now, most of the humans smell like vampires to her. Her thoughts roamed around the thicket and her thoughts echoed through her mind. Her eyes closed, hoping to release the hot burning in the back of her throat. She turned over to her senses. Her eyes pulsated in a reddish brown color, and her teeth suddenly felt tight on her mouth. She sprang upwards and heard a whispering hiss in her mind. Attack... attack.... attack.... So she did. Her emotions made her spring forward. The scent of the new vampire filled the air, and she ended up tackling him. Her teeth bared at his neck as she had him pinned to the ground. She hissed. "What is your purpose here!?" she growled. He growled back at her. Her beauty seemed to give him a toxic feeling, as if he was just drugged. She seemed to be enclosed in a black circle to him, and his senses fell over to his vampire ones. He pushed her off and attacked her. He held her down, but felt her jerk below him. She seemed to struggle alot. In his mind, he could see a little girl struggling, but through his eyes, it seemed like danger. He growled and tossed her into the wall that separated Twilight Town and the forest. He looked at her and saw that she broke through and jumped straight up. He attempted to tackle her again but saw she ran up the hill away from the area they were in. He saw she turned to the sandlot. He followed her, but right as she got through, he tackled her, knocking her unconscious. He hissed and bared his teeth at her, wanting to bite her so bad.
Here's the OC FOr the Vampire Boy Username: Cupcake Character Name: Dante Gender: Male Appearence: Race: Vampire Bio: N/A He can't remember anything Personality: Very lethal, and will attack if he thinks he's in any danger. Weapon: None Organiaztion Member? If so, what number?: N/A Anything Else?*cough*: 18 years old.
I'll be the vampire boy if we're allowed two characters Good side: you'll have a vampire boy Bad side: My posts will be longer xD;
Okay... CnC Time :] I really like this idea that you came up with, it is a great story, and you're doing so much better than i did when i first started. Your description is good, and the fast reaction scenes are also placed greatly. A good way to make your story seem more basic to the 5 senses, is place yourself in that situation, imagine what you would hear, see taste, touch and hear... Usually, it's raining in TWTNW Here's an example. That's only something from the top of my head.. Also, your doing your story from a Second person point of view, which is most common in fanfiction... I'm just suggesting that if you tried first person, you'd be able to get more information from the leading character. Such as more thinking, what they're feeling, and etc.. I quoted your story and bold the spelling errors and bold and italicized the grammar mistakes.. Great Job on the fan-fiction though. I wished someone gave me as much CnC as I'm giving you <3 I can't wait to read the next part ;]
^_^ Awesome! This roleplay has my attention, i can't wait to start =] I'll read your story too, and reply to it sweetie <333
Hope you don't mind but i would like to join, and sorry if i have really long posts xD <333 Username: Cupcake Character Name: Jordyn Gender: Female Appearance: Race: Vampire Bio: She was born into a dark world, lonely, and scared. Growing up wasn't easy, but wasn't as tough as she expected. Her parents took great care of her for the first few years of her life, but sent her away when she was 7, to live in another world. She grew up in Twilight Town, unnoticeable. She knew mostly everyone there, but none of them knew her. She stayed in the shadows most of the time, and lived in the thicket outside the mansion, through the tall trees. She heard about a vampire attack on someone named Roxas, and her heart thudded at the time. She knew she wasn't the only one there anymore, so she set out to find Roxas, and the attacking vampire. After that incident, she had a few encounters with dusks... She thought they were another form of vampire, but in her mind, she didn't believe it. She was apprehended and took to the organization, but escaped easily... Now, she is in hiding, and searching... Personality: She is a calm girl, who often finds herself in more trouble than she should. Weapon: Sais Blades (Like Electra's or Raphael on TMNT) Organization Member? If so, what number?: N/A Anything Else?*cough*: She is 17 and carries a hover-board from her home planet. Chitty-Chitty-Bang-Bang :3
lol oops xD I guess i'll change the title.... thanks shiki <3
oh my gawsh, Sara!!! I think kh-v misses you =D <333 lol whats been up? :3
lol, i love this video lol bump? xD
Rhaxas ran in between them. "May i just ask who the hell are you?" she asked, in an annoyed tone Kagome saw them. "Two demons?" she asked herself. She pulled out her bow and arrow, aiming at Rhaxas.
sorry, i'm just at work... i'll be back on when i'm done, okay? It'll be a few hours...
