Think don't so I. The post read at first I all can't....
You definitely implied.
Understanding lack I to seem...
I have a mallet like that, but it's got a wood head and I made it in wood shop. It's good for bashing things.
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That was a good movie.
I'm glad you can forgive Daxa for plotting your death and just flat out confess your feelings.
I remember him. Where the hell did he go?!? I'm still waiting on the end of those fanfics....
Good job matey, but because you got caught, you get four minutes in the brig after the battle which may or may not still be going on.
Thanks. Now, back to play. C:<
Seriously? Intergalactic Ninja Vampire Space Pirates. You didn't notice?
Oooh!!!! ..... >.> <.< *downloads*
Yay, I'm right there!!!! *points vaguely* Great story Marushi!! However, you may be my captain, but I still need to edit this. There's no spelling errors that I can see, but you need to make more paragraphs. So far, you're just making new paragraphs when time passes, but you also need them in between speakers. Example: Axel said, "Hey, I'm Axel." Then he did stuff. Zexion walked in and noticed Axel doing stuff. "What're you doing?" "Stuff." Axel replied. See? Also, for paragraphs with no dialogue, you separate them with each new idea. Example: Axel walked into a room and started doing stuff. Later, Axel got bored doing stuff and went to go talk to Roxas. The first idea, Axel doing stuff, is separated from the second idea, getting bored and going to talk to Roxas, with a new paragraph.
Depends. What is it?
The ocean? We're in space!!! There is no ocean!
Oh no! Since you said ships, plural, your ship exploded too. Our ship has combo shields. It's fine. >: D
Why do you look exactly like Daxa?
12. A little? Try a lot. It was almost as bad as the Eragon movie. *shudder*
Sort of. It's probably kind of like France-French compared to Quebec-French. Some words are different.
Drat. I was hoping for more than two sentences.
