You've done waaaay better. The render is horrible quality, that black line is just out of place and the text is horrible. 6/10
Rate please.
Oh me oh my. xD
Are you postive, maybe they want to be more than friends? xD Smacks? I want smacks. xD
Oh, my? Why oh, my? D: Or maybe they ARE lovers? xD (just messin' with you)
You didn't see her. Lovers? Where? xD
Yay! xD It's all a complicated math problem. xD
I dun hate you! I dun hate you!
Your first is like four times better. >_>;
Okay, fine.
Say it a hundrend more times slave! >=D xD
Yush, yush, yush. xD
Apparently so is right mah slave. xDD
I always win. xD
Of course you did, and I stole it, I own you. >=D
Of course you don't, I stole it. :P
Uh-uhyou can't die, I stole your life too. :P
That's mine too now.
My shoe now. >=D
*Grabs grammar bat* Mine now. xD