That's not true!!!!! I can't help it if I have limited amount of time on the computer, and I have a life other than the Ultimate Organization! But I will get the next three chapters done quickly. What page did you leave off on?
"Just watch," Tyre said, pointing at Kingdom Hearts. Everyone gaped because he'd appeared out of nowhere. Kingdom Hearts began to break apart. "Look closely..." Tyre said. In the middle of the collapsing Kingdom Hearts was a figure of flame and fire. "The leader of the Brotherhood..."
Nulix! Stop Posting The Chapters Without Letting Me Review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's It! I'm Writing The Next Ones! The Next Three Are Mine! Mwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!
OOC: Hey, I have kind of a power system for the Ultimate Organization. It starts at Creeper and ends at Sorcerer. It doesn't depend on post numbers but on rank in the thread, such as Administrator or Ultimate Organization Leader. The Administrators are all Samurais, the Superior is a Sorcerer, and the rest are Dragoons, or Snipers. What do you think? This could be useful for the Information Thread. Example - Name: Xardius Title: The Thirsty Blade Rank: Samurai
The leader of the Brotherhood sat in contemplation. "Xardius...my old friend...Soon we will meet again..."
OOC: I know what stoichiometry is! Yay! EDIT: I agree with Jaxed...in a way. I think we have plenty of good ideas, just too many of them going on at once.
Here's Brine and Sadoc: Sadoc - Brine -
OOC: Two things...One - I gotta go in 5 minutes. BIC: TWO - Or so they thought. Xardius in truth, did something more like this: Like a liquid dance, Xardius flowed from the first punch, then the kick. With almost a casual brush, Xardius caught the ankle of the Maxilo robot, and bashed its brains out on the walls. As the demolished robot fell to the floor, dented and parts leaking out of its head, Xardius looked around, and saw Tyre...holding a dress. "AAAAACK!" Xardius yelped and dove for the sewers. "GET BACK HERE SO WE CAN DRESS YOU IN DRAG!" Tyre yelled, running after him. OOC: Bye bye, Xardius...Oh, 2 minutes...Um, last post, see ya.
"You leave me no choice," Xardius said after a moment. He turned to the stupid robot. "Let's go shiny...."
Xardius considered for a moment, head down. Then he said, "Nulix..." He raised his head and he was smirking extravagantly. "That's the most PATHETIC reason I've ever heard of! Listen, punk! What happened to loyalty, to friendship, to FLAMING BROTHERHOOD? I thought of you as a brother...And I hoped you'd thought of me as the same...I won't accept peace because the times won't allow me to!" He snapped Chomper out. "You don't seem to understand...With great power comes great responsibility...Stupid Spiderman, hate his guts, but it's true! The worlds can't afford for you to lay down and cower like a dog!" He gritted his teeth. "Now...I don't want to fight you or your little machine...You're forcing me down the wrong path buddy...the path of no return...I entreat you one last time...Come back with me to the Ultimate Organization and end this so you CAN live in peace!"
"Before you slaughter me," Xardius said dryly, "answer one question first... What made you give up on us?"
"Now, is that anyway to describe an old friend?" Xardius said, dropping out of nowhere. "Nulixaje, I am here to inscribe your justice!"
OOC: Well, I don't know about rushed dialogue (I was trying to hurry so it wouldn't log me off), but I wrote it in two parts. I started off with him telling a story, then I cut the end part off I wrote a while ago, didn't bother editing the first part, and then pasted in the new end part that I'd wrote without bothering to match the two. So yeah, it's choppy. But, hey, I'm going to implement it into the UO, so keep it in mind. And you realize that 3.25 is like the best rating you've ever given me...
OOC: Here's a little something to warm your brains... *** “There has been a tale passed down for generations about a mysterious young man who wielded an even more mysterious weapon... “It is said, though generally not believed, that this boy saved the worlds from destruction almost single-handedly... “It is also said that he destroyed the worlds... “Many do not believe either tale, as the worlds are still standing as they have been for quite some time, and many believe it will continue to go on as it were... “However, there are some points to which I’d like to disclose to you. If you would care to sit down and listen to the tale, I will spin it with all the skill I possess, like a weaver and her carpet... “To start off, I’d like to go over some rather large flaws in the story that many use as undeniable proof that the tale is false. First, two tales that merge almost perfectly, spinning off in different directions, yet holding to the truth within both. One tale says that the boy saved the worlds by locking their keyholes with a mysterious weapon known as the keyblade. The other tale suggests rather firmly that the boy attempted to destroy the worlds with the same weapon. To clear this up, you must go to the second flaw: the tale of two boys. Both seem to be one and the same, but in fact, the tale of two boys is of deep concern. One boy was the chosen wielder, while the other, a trickster, a lost child that stole the keyblade from the first and used it to bring himself glory. I would like to suggest that all four of these tales are true. Quite simply, both boys had a keyblade, and both lived on the same island chain. Both were destined to have a keyblade, but not one and the same. Even the lightest philosopher knows of the dark side of the worlds, hidden away from us so as to prevent damage in the fabric of existence. The time-space continuum must be preserved. It is highly likely, and evidenced many times by several rather obscure tales of the keyblade itself, that there are two, if not more, sides to a keyblade. One of light, and one of darkness. Keep that in mind while I spin the tale. The third and final flaw is again about more than one boy. This one leaves no doubt that the two were one and the same. However, they were different in vital ways. The tale spins that one of the boys was false, non-existent, while the other was only half of what he was. Both boys wielded a keyblade, but only one had the light within him. The other was darkness. Both boys were one and the same...How is this possible? Perhaps you will come to learn when I spin the tale... “Recently, I have uncovered a new tale, brought from within Kingdom Hearts itself. For you see, Kingdom Hearts remembers all...And it remembers this tale most of all.†The man paused to sip a glass of water before leaning back in his chair. His audience consisted of mainly older men, though a few only a few years older than himself were sprinkled through the audience. Sadoc smiled. As the youngest there, many believed he was stupid and rash. But they could no longer deny the truth of this tale... “You claim you garnished this tale from within Kingdom Hearts?†an older man asked. Sadoc’s mouth twisted into a grimace. Old Doc Brine was always getting in his way. The man peered at him around his large, hawk-like nose. “Would you care to shed some light on how you actually got in?†“I did not go in,†Sadoc said irritably. “To do so is to call death upon yourself. But I know this tale came from Kingdom Hearts itself.†“How?†Brine said, leaning forward, his eyes sharp. “Leave nothing out.†Sadoc sighed. This was going to take longer than perhaps they thought. “To do so, I must spin another tale, perhaps after the first, or perhaps it is the first. It isn’t that important in the timing, as it is in the telling. If you will permit, I will tell the first first, and the second second.†“But you will tell it,†Brine said, and it was not a question. Sadoc nodded hesitantly. “But do not expect to like it.†Brine laughed reedily. “When have we ever liked your addictions boy?†Sadoc matched his laugh. “When have you ever not listened?†Brine’s eyes bulged, but Sadoc didn’t care. He opened the first page, then flipped to the second. "This book is almost bizarre in its writings..." Sadoc whispered. "What do you mean?" Brine jumped in hastily. "I mean that it's almost as if it's a guide, and the tale is an example..." Sadoc said, rubbing his chin. "Huh?" one of the elders grunted. "Take a look." Sadoc twisted the book around so it was facing the elders. "This first page details the beginning of the tale for the keyblade wielder, whose name is Sora. But that's to the side." He pointed at the script crammed into a corner. "The rest of the page is covered in descriptive works on how to bring about this...Awakening." Brine gasped and Sadoc nodded. "It's as if this book were forged by the creators of the world. Here," he said, pointing to the top of the page, "it explains the necessary ingredients...a keyblade, Kingdom Hearts, and several other things, such as a strong-hearted person. Here, it begins listing the ingredients for the ingredients for the Awakening. It details here how to forge a keyblade, and here how to create the paradox of Kingdom Hearts so that the keyblade wielder will be tested. Here it tells how to find a strong-hearted being...Here it shows how to forge the attributes into weapons, the door, and...the Enemies...the Heartless." Brine shuddered. "Dark arts." "At first, that's what I believed, but..." He flipped back a page. "In the introduction, it clearly warns against those who would use this as dark arts. This book is for holy arts..." Brine hesitated, then nodded. "As the gatherers of knowledge, we must fulfill the entire contract in these pages...forge a keyblade, and create a keyblade wielder...This is our cause...to gain knowledge. For this purpose, we will do this. All in favor say aye..." The room instantly reverberated in ayes, but Sadoc didn't say anything. Brine's eyes narrowed. "You would deny yourself your research?" "At least it's research now," Sadoc said dryly. "Read the last sentence." Brine leaned forward, and gasped. "It can't be!" "Yes," Sadoc said. "We cannot continue until we have the other." "The other?" an elder asked. "Remember, forger, that for every action there is a reaction; for every light, there is a darkness; to create a light, one must create a darkness, or chaos will rule supreme, and the void will swallow the worlds," Sadoc recited. "This, of course, rules out any chance of forging a keyblade of light without forging a keyblade of darkness...and of course, we don't know how. The making is different, as it says in the book." Brine pounded a fist into the chair. "We must gain more knowledge! How are we to without fulfilling this contract?" Sadoc leaned forward. "I believe there is another book, one that details the dark side of this light." Brine leaned forward hungrily. "You know where this is?" Sadoc smiled. "I have my suspicions...the dark side of Kingdom Hearts." Brine roared in fury. "We cannot go there!" Sadoc shrugged. "I've already sent someone. Whether or not they die, our knowledge must be fulfilled. I expect they'll be arriving shortly...with the book in tow." "Good, good," Brine said. "I like your style, Master Sadoc." "For the first time, Master Brine."
OOC: Well, how's it going guys? Um, here's a short funny story... *The Reason Tyre is Looking for Xardius* Xardius was eating a donut happily when he heard Tyre yelling his name. Springing up, he grabbed another couple dozen donuts and raced off. "WAIT! XARDIUS! WAIT!" Tyre yelled after him. "COME ON! You know we can't do it!" "NO! I won't do it ever again!" Xardius yelled back. "But...BUT YOU'RE THE ONLY ONE WHO LOOKS LIKE A GIRL IN DRAG!" "I SAID NOOOOOOO!" Xardius jumped down a sewer hole. Tyre slammed his fist into his palm. "I just need him to get rid of that demon again. He's the only one...I just don't look like a girl..." Tyre played kick the can as he walked down the street. So there you have it!
OOC: Though I liked the description and background, the foreground and character conversations were slightly weak in my opinion. And, oh, you misspelled words and made grammatical errors. So 6.012/10.
OOC: Wow, Wing...That was great. So what's going on other than that?
OOC: Me too! That would have been lame...Look how the Law Firm thread turned out... Anyhow, what's going on?
OOC: Cool. I just thought it would be nice for some old ones to be updated because other people are doing it too. BIC: Tyre sighed. "Fine. If you see him, tell him I'm looking for him..." Tyre walked off and disappeared. OOC: Dinner time. See you later.
OOC: I picked orange because of your energy and hair color. How about this one for your "future" form? BIC: Tyre's eyes narrowed. "Do you know where Xardius is?"
