"Yes I would suggest we go now...." Silax said opening a portal, "lets go check on her...."
Congratulations Jordie.....we are all very happy for you and I'm sure your happy as well....I wish you luck as you go along the journey of life growing and learning with each step you take.....and know that we will always be here supporting and cheering you on....
Sasori jumped down from the trees, "it would be less trouble for us if we just walked......." he said walking, "it conserves our energy....."
Good afternoon....how is everyone today?.....
Interesting......sounds like it would have been an interesting conversation on MSN as well.....thought it was thoughtful who you came up with that scenario that took place by yourself......good job.....
Good length.....good free verse.....like how the it shows the inner and outer appearances that could be in anyone.....good job Nymph....
Good length.....good free verse......little confused on atmosphere though lol....its sounds happy at certains parts then a little less so on others.....but overall good poem Nymph....
Little short but still good.....good free verse......good motivational atmosphere......good first poem......
"Unless you have a better idea Fire....then we can do that....." Last smiled, "exploring is just the thing I can think of right now....."
Renji walked with her heading to the park, "its not really that special....its just a usual park...." he smiled, "but still its a better view a lot of times than the city...."
Renji continued to hold her close to him, "although spending time with someone you love is enough fun in my opinion...." he said taking Kairi's hand gently, "what say we go to the park?" he smiled.
Renji thought for a second, "I'm sorry Rikku....I can't really come up with something right now....." he said kissing Kairi again, "that is unless you enjoy training your fighting abilities....." "Excellent...." Captain Zaraki grinned, "so we don't know which way though.....we need to feel out its reaistu....." he said sheathing his sword.
Renji broke the kiss and looked up at Rikku, "ah Rikku....welcome back....just spending some time with the love of my life...." he smiled hugging Kairi, "as for things that are fun around this school.....we could head to the park..." Captain Zaraki stood up at the mention of it, "where is it Yachiru....." he grinned, "how big is it.....how strong is its reaistu....."
Renji gently held her close continuing to kiss her, "what a great girl.....no one else do I want to be with....." he thought, he gently put his hands on her back and held her. "Because they are afraid....they fear death....." Captain Zaraki said sitting down, "why does this world produce such weaklings....I'm really not seeing where Ichigo got his strength out of this world......"
Renji gently kissed Kairi again, "I'm glad we love each other Kairi....." he smiled, "no matter where we are from...or what anyone says.... "Thats it...." Captain Zaraki said unsheathing his zampoktu, "you there.....fight me....." he said pointing it at some random weak human, "attack!" he yelled before the human ran away scared.
Renji smiled, "when I said I was new here as well....I'm not exactly from this world either....." he said hugging her close, "so I don't care where your from your still beautiful to me...." Captain Zaraki stopped, "then I guess Kurosaki will have to prove to be a good fight for now...." he grinned, "where is his reaistu Yachiru......"
Renji looked up a little shocked, "Kairi.....you just said you love me...." he smiled, he reached up and gently pulled her close to him, "I love you too...." he said gently kissing her.
Renji looked her in the eyes, "theres no need to be sorry...and I still like you Kairi....but I guess we can't be together...." he sighed, "ok Rikku....talk to you later......" he said looking back down, "I guess I have some things to tell you as well...." Captain Zaraki continued to look around, "sensing any hollow reaistus yet Yachiru...." he yawned, "I'm starting to think taking a nap would be more interesting than that.....either that or we will find the strongest human we can find....."
Renji looked up hearing Kairi's voice, "hey Kairi...." he said trying to smile, "I hope I didn't cause you any discomfort...." he turned to Rikku, "my names Renji...." Captain Zaraki headed into Karakura Town, "tell me if you notice any hollow reaistu......" he said looking around, "all these humans are so weak....." he sighed.
Renji looked up, "I can't really say.....I haven't be to any of the classes...." he sighed, "I have been late to all of them...." Captain Zaraki stood up, "your right Yachiru....it seems waiting for a fight to come is too long....." he said, "come....we will go search for some hollows to keep us entertained...."
