i meant hurting inside (some practiclly shot u inside ive been emotianally shot in the heart EMOTIANALLY!!!)
how about...*thinx*emotianal pain?(ive gone through alot of it emotionally and physically i would like to here a poem about that plz)
i absolutely LOVE your poems!!!!!!!!:D
you know it!!(plus i get it from my dad,he writes poems too)
thanx,i just hate the fact that its so short!!!!! at myself. i actually forgot about this but this story is devoted to anniexo because she inspired me to write thanx sis!
that was great anniexo!im lucky to have a sis like u!!!
my first story...enjoy!!! kingdom of light chapter one:Riku One day, in a little town called Spira, a brother and sister are getting ready for the day "Sora, get dressed! We need to get to the beach for your training!" Anniexo yelled. "I'm comin', I'm comin'!" Sora said. As they were walking, a lightning bolt went towards Anniexo "watch-out!" Said Sora as he threw a wall of ice in front of Anniexo "Thanks bro, Riku get the heck out of our way!" Anniexo said angrily. "Why should I? I want to kill your fifteen year old brother and you why would I want to back off and let you pass?" Riku Said chuckling. “C'mon Sora, let’s finish your training for today.” As Anniexo and Sora walked pass him, Riku threw a silent bolt of lightning at Sora and Anniexo. "Die!" Riku said evilly. Suddenly, a wall of earth rose up in front of him. “Thanks Toph.” Sora said. "We owe you one." "God Toph!” Riku said angrily. "DIE!" as he threw a fist a vine with roses (thorny vines) caught his punch. “What??" he said in astonishment. “I might have to hang low now, but you do know I train my bro!” Anniexo said proudly. "You want some more?" Toph asked. “If not then I suggest you run!" As Riku ran away, Toph asked, "Who was that guy anyway?" "His name is Riku. He wants to kill Anniexo and me but mostly me because my elemental power is water. He is afraid of you and Anniexo because his lightning doesn’t affect your elemental powers" Sora answered "Thanks Toph, for helping us, Sora, we need to get to the beach…now.” Anniexo said. sorry its short,im in fifth grade...sorry critix...:)
that render is awesome Cin!!!
the one before the #3 chunin exam was funny too!(bulls)
mine is Avatar because it is so awesome!!!
never mind about the last ones renders(keep color,text,andsize same)heres the renders: http://www.planetrenders.net/renders/displayimage.php?pos=-5851 and... http://www.planetrenders.net/renders/displayimage.php?pos=-12998 i found alot more!!!
ooh!I want one! http://www.planetrenders.net/renders/displayimage.php?pos=-1886 and if you can,can u put a kh-2 riku in forme? text:we'll go together with my name whereever it loox cool and th word christian on it too plz. color:light on sora's side and darkness on riku's side and the light and darkness come together size:umm...*thinks*make a horizontal sig with whatever size. plz and thank u!!!!PS: i need the
he kinda closed it...no khvr.
oh,i didnt mean for anyone to cry!i was thinking of them so i decided to write about them(wow,i didnt my FIRST poem would make anyone cry!)
lols,yeah!!:D
dude check ure grammer plz i had to read it 10 times just to understand it!!!:D
yay!!the best poem and story writer thinks i did WELLDONE my teachers are going to LOVE it!!!!!!!!!:D :D :D :D
i edited it and spell checked it how u wanted me to k,anniexo?
my first poem:my clouded memories my clouded memories, I don’t remember much but ill see him again, Again in the afterlife. He's been waiting eight years now And his wife has joined him. I hated to say goodbye because i would forget him. Though he’s in my memories, I can only look at pictures but still it doesn’t restore the life he once had I loved the man very much...my grandfather... in heaven with my grandmother who died just this past summer. They will be with me always, in My clouded memories. so,how does everyone like it?(first poem EVER) and its a true poem.:(
can u make http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5OzB5Fmo-Zc 00:20 to the end plz?oh,i just noticed the thing above my head im sorry!uh,nevermind!!
