That you actually tried to do it disgusts me. Seriously, you just lost a lot of respect.
...wut :v lol @ Kaxej's obvious flirting with Rosey
OH i get it nao its liek tht tiem I fownd a ded hors nd...um nvrmind ):
wud u cut off da bewb n put on cheesy snack? i r confuzd ): i dun liek mutilation
i herd u liek bewb *gigl*
The Time Traveller's Wife. The movie looks extremely cheesy but my sister bought the book two weeks ago and said it was amazing so I'm going to start reading it sometime in the next few weeks. Oh, and I may read my Dad's history book, "Vikings!". Yeah... don't ask, I enjoy that sort of thing. History ftw ;_;
Eh, opinions. Some people probably find gay voices attractive too but my opinion remains the same c:
...You like a guy with an emo haircut and a gay voice? ._.
I watched it up to 3:03, but got bored. The only slightly amusing thing about your video is the song choices (I did chuckle when Shaggy came on). Apart from that....a mediocre attempt. You chose random unrelated clips and spammed the rainbow effect far too much. I'd give you a truck-load of advice but I think for you the best thing would be to go out there and watch some tutorials. You should also watch more amv's and see how they are good- dont worry, we all start out with mediocre videos.
Scratch that, its okay :v ...I think
****, Im really sorry, I merged your threads in the Poetry section and accidently chose the wrong title @_@ You could get a super mod to change...
Good Lord this story makes me feel miserable. Nice personification of the ocean. For future reference though, it's never icy right by the sea ;3 the ocean winds prevent it. (Just thought I'd be technical here) xD For a person commiting suicide, your narrative seemed very calm and just willing to state facts, which I found amusing. Intresting, though. Nice work.
erm...wow. Intresting, though a little insulting :v It should be saw, not seen. Seen doesn't...fit, somehow. Second stanza feels like a rant, the final stanza is my favourite.
It's weird, I randomly found something I had to write for English a while ago. The criteria was "write a short description of a bus-full of passengers when the bus has stopped halfway". Yeah, it was odd. I thought I'd post it here though. You weren't allowed to make the piece a narrative. ~ Once again, the bus had stopped. The passengers onboard shifted anxiously in their seats, craning their necks to see what had caused the stop. Outside, winter's icy claws had enveloped the land in a cold mist, and the breath of small children against the windows of the bus caused the glass to fog. Babies gurgled, too young to understand the situation but old enough to feel the chill. The sound of impatient tapping of fingers on wood filled the air and those with keen noses could smell the distinct aroma of petrol. The engine of the bus chugged on, the vehicles bright coat of red paint making it a secluded beacon in the mist. Elderly men coughed and sneezed in their seats, haunted by a January cold and clutching at their tattered coats. Near the back of the bus, a group of enigmatic teenagers huddled- their faces hidden by hoods. Each person onboard was different, united only by their frustration over the now visible road works. It was fast approaching noon, and a red haired woman coughed to disguise her rumbling stomach. Perhaps her wish for food was granted, as finally the bus crawled on, a red ant in a world of bitter grey. The passengers shared a sigh of relief. Yep, I hardly think it's the most exciting thing you've ever read xD This was working on imagery, mostly.
Let me help you with this one, Xaale :lolface: Obsessed, Advent+, clawtooth35, danny, Decesso*+, HellKitten, Identity Theft, i_like_kh_a_lot, JapanTuninG, John Clay Rice, Kanchi, Legion, NeoCloudstrife, riku angel and devil, RikuOrganization, splitoverload*, the muffin man*, timexhasxgone, Trigger*+, Ultima Queen of Hearts, VI schemer, What?*+, X+, xakota You silly invisible people c:
Honestly, the guy who voiced Axel doesn't sound like Axel at all. Just...slightly constipated. Roxas sounded a bit more like himself, I guess. Whats with the credits that go on forever? :v
Hah, it was amusing to read especially since you threw in random lyrics. Extremely disjointed, I guess you don't enjoy being formal at all. Reading it, it almost feels like you're ranting to somebody.
Beat you to it ;)
I can see you were trying to convey some deep or sorrowful meaning in this, but put together the words didn't make sense and the lines became confusing. You can help yourself in a small way by correcting your spelling etc. Changing easy mistakes such as "beuty" to "beauty" can make all the difference. Remember the reader will not know what you were trying to say so you have to put across your message clearly.
All of those options feel like a trick. >|
