Good thankyou, despite being back in school :3 you?
:=D: ilu2 hence why you're second on my list :lolface:
1. Ioan (AGAIN 8D) 2. Rissy 3. Wolfie 4. Xaale 5. What?
The story is cute, you just need to take more care with presentation. Remember, always proof read your work before posting it anywhere- you've mispelled a few things and even missed out words from sentences. Read through it now and edit, if you wish. Also, take into account that people like to read things in bitesized chunks. Split your work into paragraphs with lines inbetween and generally the story will look more appealing. I notice the title here is "After the end- chapter 1". Remember, all your chapters must be posted in one thread- if you're confused, feel free to PM me <3
Good points- the song was faintly amusing, and the repetition of the relevant clips was funny, especially the laughing bit. Points that could be improved upon- I saw no effects whatsoever, and having the subtitles makes the video look ugly. Next time either use clips with no subtitles or trim them out (you can use pan/crop to do this if you have the correct video editing software).
I downloaded it, but now I... have no idea how to use it :v halp? ;~;
And I'll send all my loving to you :3
And then while I'm away <3
Tomorrow I'll miss you <3
As far as I'm concerned the wedding is just the official "we're legally together" ceremony. I wouldn't have a wedding infront of a store, but I wouldn't spend what most couples do either. I'll settle for a happy average wedding if the time comes. Everyone knows the fun is all in the honeymoon, anyway ;3
D: Aww :glomp: You should have thrown something at him, that fool >| Just noticed something else x3 "more than any other words could" It was the end of the paragraph and sentence, there needed to be a fullstop/period.
Oh God, that was heartbreaking D: The emotion changes were extremely lifelike...people do get angry when they're broken, and reading that she threw something at him made it even sadder. "Site" should be "sight" at the end of the second paragraph <3 apart from that, perfect story... just a little depressing ><
I JUST NOTICED SOMETHING the polkadots are pretty ;_;
You are absolutely gorgeous and amazing <3
I love you too <3 x3
fine deeal onli if u go 1st wah im confised ):
u dnt maek any sens im goin 2 sex sum1 else ):
ur hat 2. liek properly. tht duznt make sens tho coz I shud have UR babys
There is no other reply to such an odd statement.
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