OOC: Well... Since everyone is suddenly working on UO Mangas... and by everyone I mean Pirate and Darknight, I thought I'd give drawing a shot. I just did these quick, I barely ever draw so... give me some credit. Here they are: Darxess and Orb. Nulix. Xane.
OOC: ...As long as Nulix and Vecked do not look remotely close to that, I'm fine.
OOC: No... You really shouldn't be the Leader. Has anyone ever thought that since they really had no guide lines they where at first leaderness? I mean all they would have known was that Organization XIII where a group of nobodies who wanted hearts, right? The where at the beginning just a group who was to follow in the original Organizations footsteps. Of course the UO had the guidelines that Organization XIV had at had at its very end since Darxess was from that group and... I'm just randomly ranting now... Basically what I said is that at the very beginning it doesn't need a leader.
...Still no Jaxed...
OOC: sure... (Coughs) So... Whens the thread going to be up again?
OOC: So true. Yeah I'll make my own character...
OOC: Newness is over rated!
OOC: Okay, I don't want to be leader of anything... My character Nulix wants to be, not me. I have him be like that to show one of his many, many flaws... with him being over controlling and feeling like hes being unheard and such... But my character in the OXIV thread will be completely different.... or I could do some crazy plot connect thing...
OOC: ... ...But yeah, I'm looking forward to the new OXIV thread, at the end I could even have Vecked come along since he and Ex where a team back then. Have a chance to do some classic pure evil Veckedness... Who's gonna make the thread?
OOC: ...(Eyes everyone awkwardly) how bout, "The Organization XIV: Remembrance." Or something...?
OOC: XD means the person had there mouth open in a large smile with there eyes shut tight in an X like form... I think...
Alright, I see what your saying. I just think we should put it out pretty early so people know that there not just reading about a bunch of people who are practically gods but a group that could be broken... (Sighs) Ah well, its all good.
OOC: My character will be so some one random who dies in the end... the type of person Nulix would really hate. And I'll probably pull Captain Skinnar into it, with him trying to gain control of all the nobodies and all...
...I liked what you did to... parts of it, but some parts with Dakrai and the at the end seemed almost... just thrown together. Just an excuse for something epic that will be disposed of in the next chapter. And another thing that I felt was slightly cut up was something I really wanted to stress at the very end. This is probable my one true complaint, About the Ultimate Organization Members not being able to fight an army. So far the UO in the story has been pretty close to unstoppable, they survived every battle and walked out pretty good. This was there first large scale battle against hundreds of warriors and I wanted to stress the fact that the UO aren't gods. I wanted them to feel that they could battle an army but in the end realization came over them and they realized that battling an army with four warriors was truly imposable... and of course I needed to throw Nul in there as an excuse for what hes been doing and why they won. I felt in this version that feeling was really lost. But this is just my opinion, and I'm in a bad mood... so yeah... This was my horrible review.
...Moo...!
OOC: ...I think some people may have misinterpreted what I made a clear point of saying. I don't want us to drop everything and leave. I just want us to stop making new extremely complex plots so that some point in the (very) distant future we can finally lead this thread and the Ultimate Organization into retirement.
OOC: ...Um... Next chapter is up... And the reason this thread is kinda falling is because... well none of us are online at the same time any more. The reason I'm never online is because I just got a PS3... A month before Christmas.... yeah... but that's why I'm not here. Hopefully we can all get online more often at some... point...
Chapter Four: The Battle. Orb stared hard at Darxess. Orb’s eyes glaring into Darxess’, they where shut tight. Orb had no clue what had happened to his friend, he was fine when Orb and the others left for the World that Never Was’ neighboring planet Ceegum to rescue the members who had been sent out. And when Orb returned, he found Darxess laying in his chair, fast asleep. Orb had at first not worried, Darxess was under a lot of stress… a quick… day long nap couldn’t hurt much, right…? But now it had been Three days. The members had all… disappeared except for Darkrai. Orb sighed at the thought of that idiot running around burning all of Darxess’ money. It was actually quite easy for Orb to think of… because Dakrai was doing it right now, throwing money on the ground, setting his shoes aflame, and frolicking in the dollar bills causing them to burn. Orb flew himself into the nearest table at the sight, before giving out a sigh. There where more important things to think of at the moment then how enraged Darxess would be when he wakes… If he wakes that is. Orb sighed before gliding over to Darkrai’s indoor forest fire, with money being the forest. “Dark…†Orb started, Darkrai looking from his flames to Orb. “I’ll be heading out… Keep an eye on the superior for me…†Orb informed, Dakrai gave a quick salute in response. Orb sighed at the moron before slowly floating out of the room and down the hall. Where were the other members?... Only a month in and already had the Ultimate Organization lost track of itself, members being separated or dead, Darxess being in the state he’s in… This group was no successor to Organization XIV… That much Orb knew. *** Vexneah eyes snapped to awareness as the world around her moved slower… ripples of water flew through the air and seconds later crusted into ice. Knight’s went flying left and right as the ice froze them in the air. The battle had become more and more fierce, the Knights had increased and Oxyrts battle strategy had been thrown out the window. With this number of Knights it was either fight or die. And everyone chose fight. Oxyrt’s silhouette could be barely seen running past a group of Knights, there armor being sliced by his form and there bodies falling to the ground. Slightly farther away Wing was seen jumping in the smoky afternoon sky before plunging back down into a few Knights, his voice yelling Aero could be faintly heard. Other then that Vexneah saw no friendly faces in the battle, she hoped that her friend hadn’t fallen yet. In truth one of her friend had fallen, the nearly invincible one. Xardius’ form lay on the ground, a puddle of blood came from his skull. Above him Oxyrt leaped like the wind, flying down upon approaching Knight’s with fists of flames. Oxyrt gritted his teeth as he knelled for an instant, these Knights where easy… But countless numbers of pawns could trump a king. Those words where true to the current situation and worse he needed to protect Xardius as well. Oxyrts eyes opened again and he flew into the air as more and more Knights approached. Xardius’ eyes opened to the light of day. He had been hit by… A Knight…? Knights? No… It was one Knight… Xardius sighed as he grabbed his largest sword, Chomper, from the ground and used it to propel himself up at the approaching Knight and knock them all back. “See your awake!†came Oxyrt’s voice as he fell beside Xardius from the air. Xardius gave a small nod in response, Oxyrt smiled “Great… Go help Wing†Xardius raised an eyebrow “Why?†“He needs the help, wind and flame Xardius, wind and flame†Oxyrt replied before summer-salting forward toward a group of approaching Knights. Xardius glanced at Oxyrt in confusion, Wind and Flame…? Was it like Salt and Pepper or something? Xardius shrugged as more Knights approached him “How bout… Just flame?†He muttered, sending fist of fire at the advancing enemies. Oxyrt spared a glance at Xardius, a strong man that was true… But he was extremely weak in the ways of the flame… but then again few where as strong as himself. Oxyrt then changed focus to the Knights that slashed at him, Oxyrt blocked the Knights before sending a sided kick at there legs. The Knights fell and where met with a jolt of blue flame, Oxyrt let his hand cool for a second before closing his eye’s, opening them for a second and closing them once more. Flame was blind, it was seemingly wild and random. Many masters of the flame where experts, knowing just how the flame would move and moving in that way to manipulate the flame. This is the way a Master should control most elements, but Flame is an exception… So is Wind. Flame and Wind are seemingly random, they blaze if to be controlled and can disappear in a second. A true master of these two elements must learns to be like the Air and the Flame, be able to disappear, gain power, lose power, predict, and change. Only after one learns to do those in battle can they truly be masters of the flame… Oxyrt himself hadn’t mastered the Flame yet… He knew only one person who had… But he was powerful enough to prove his mastery, with the gift and skill to manipulate blue flame. Oxyrt’s eyes kept tightly shut as his senses took over. He heard the Knights coming, his right arm went backward and into the air. He took a large breath, and then at a second notice flung his left arm forward. Heat overwhelmed him as the yells of the Knights came to his ear. He opened his eyes to find what he knew he would find. All the Knight on the ground, burnt badly. The Blue Flame technique had once again worked. Oxyrt grunted before flipping over to Xardius, this battle was not over yet. “Derek!†Bellatrix yelled as she brushed past the swarms of Knights, following the vague form of her brother’s armor. Her chains flew from the side pockets of her organization coat, through the air and around her brothers form. “Your not getting away from me this time…†Bella muttered, as Derek was sent flying in front of her from a whip of the chains. The being in front of her stumbled to get up. His hands instantly flew to his helmet, the head gear was off less then a second later. Bellatrix glared at her brothers face. His head had the same shape as hers, his shoulder length black hair flew through the air, his dark eyes glanced at hers. “Guess I’ll never be able to beat you… huh?†Derek whispered, his voice filled with defeat and realization. Bella’s face stayed cold and still “…I guess not…†She replied slowly, before grabbing her blade tight and ramming it through his chest. His jaw fell open lightly at the shock, his eyes stayed still, moving ever so slightly as small tears rained down his cheeks. The blade was pulled out of his form and he fell to the ground. Bella looked at the form and suddenly all the chaos around her, all the fighting, and the destruction… seemed to melt. “…Why…†She whispered to herself, clutching her chest “Why does it hurt…?†“Your hearts trying to return to you…†Came the smooth voice of Oxyrt, he came falling down from the air, landing beside her. Bellatrix looked down. “That’s… Not possible†*** “…Dopedy, dopedy, doh…†Darkrai muttered glancing at the air… Darxess hadn’t moved for the whole time and Orb was still out. “OH! Why!†Darkrai yelled randomly like the idiot he was, before suddenly falling to the ground. He lay there for a few seconds, just… feeling the vibrations… something was vibrating… harder… and harder… and harder. Dakrai’s eyes shot open, something was coming even he knew that. What should he do? Where was everyone? What would happen? He had little time to think his decision over as the door was kicked open. The armored form of the Knights appeared at the doorway. Dakrai stared at them hard “The Dark… is currently asking what you want here!?†he demanded. The Knight past this off with a cold chuckle “Just making sure our friend, your Superior here… takes a… permanent nap…†one of the knights worded. Darkrai gritted his teeth “You want boss-man? You gotta go through the Dark!†The Knight smiled “I’ll accept that request… and by: I’ll accept that request I mean I’m going to kill you†*** Vexneah flipped to the side and slashed a Knight with a newly created spear of ice, which shattered as it flew threw his form. Vexneah grunted, she had previously had no realization of how important an actual weapon could be in battle… But she only had ice. “Vexneah!†Came Xardius bellowing voice, Vexneah gazed too the sky and saw Xardius’ large form leaping in the air before landing heavily beside her. “You good?†He questioned hurriedly, pulling Chomper out as Knight’s approached. “If by good you mean completely exhausted and out of energy, yes… I’ll safely say yes…†Vexneah replied. Xardius smirked “Here…†He started, his hand appearing from his pockets, a small rusted star shaped object in hand. “…What is it…?†Vexneah whispered at the object. “Keychain… It can really help you out…†Xardius replied as she took it. Vexneah stared at the keychain, a smile forming on her face. She extended a hand and created a small sword like object made out of solid ice. At the ice swords end she placed the keychain neatly, vines of light then came from the keychain and slithered around the ice’s sides until the whole sword was covered with light. Vexneah shielded her eyes as the light intensified and then… it was gone. The light had disappeared and so had her ice sword… In it’s place was a beautiful light blue keyblade with crystal edged vines racing along its side. Shots of dark blue decorated it and at its handle was a dark navy blue meteor symbol. “…Xardius… thanks…†Vexneah muttered as she swung her newest weapon. Xardius smiled, and turned back to the approaching swarm of Knights. He sighed before looked at Vexneah, who was standing with a little more confidence now that an actual Keyblade was in her hands. "Let's finish this," Xardius said, and stretched forth his hand. "Are you ready?" Vexneah glanced up at him “Yeah†“No…†The two glanced at the voice, a tired Wing ran up to them his arms feeling the air behind him. Wing raced up to them and then fell to his knees exhausted. “Your not ready with out me that is.†He whispered, glancing up at them with a smile on his face… his famous smile. Wing slowly pulled himself up and stared at Xardius then at the approaching Knights. “…Yeah…†Xardius muttered patting Wing on the arm, “We'll take them together†“All of us…†Bellatrix ran up to them, limping slightly. Holding her locket close to her heart “I’m ready†“You guys aren’t ending this with out me are you?†Came the voice of Oxyrt. They all spun to see Oxyrt standing behind them by a few feet, his head hung as did his arms. Blood stained coat and all, Oxyrt slowly pushed himself forward. He approached them, panting hard before glancing up… a worn out smile on his face. “Lets do this thing…†He whispered, Xardius nodded, Wing, Bellatrix, and Vexneah as well. They all turned to face the army. The Knights who approached, keyblades high in the sky. “Charge!†Oxyrt yelled, the five of them all charged at the hundreds of approaching Knights. The ran, the two forces towards one another, head to head… With just one goal in mind… Kill each other. And as they ran, Wing’s eyes would glance at his fellow warriors… and friends… at that instant, cold hard realization hit. The numbers… It was imposable what they where trying. They couldn’t win. “Kill them!†A Knight yelled as the swarms rammed themselves onto the Organization members, sending arrows flying through the sky. Xardius cracked the first Knight that came at him in the ribs, before discarding him into a Knight that was approaching Bellatrix. He did the same or slightly deferent for the next… and the next… and the next. Finally a blow was landed by the sixth Knight at Xardius’s arm. Chomper flew up at the air and into the Knight throat. Xardius then felt a blade plunge itself into his back, it was quickly pulled out as Xardius did a back kick at the Knight who stabbed him and from there it got worse. All the Organization members knew it… the truth was dawning on them. They where not gods… they couldn’t fight an army. The burning ripple of an explosion suddenly caused Xardius to fly backward, he glanced at the sky to see a huge Gummi Battle Ship bombard upon the Knights army. The friendly face of Nulix pushed itself out of the ships window “Need a hand?!†He yelled above the noise “I thought I’d come by and see how the Knights play dodge ball with bullets!†And with that, Nulix jumped back into the ships cockpit and rained laser fire upon the Knights. That battle ship was followed by another, and another, and another. The battle ships flew and burnt the Knights, Xardius, Wing, Oxyrt, Vexneah, and Bellatrix watching all the while. The Knights numbers fell, in less then an hour there where only forty or so left… and they had already started running. They had won the battle. Nulix had flown down and explained that he had recruited a group of brave warriors from the Dark City, who apparently had an equal distaste for the Knights, and had gotten the battle ships from one of them. After that they flew to the forest as fast as they could… It was apparently just fast enough. That day was a victory… In the battle field at least, for back at the castle… An Orb would be shock to find the dead body of Darkrai... And worse… the body of Darxess. Authors Notes: Nulix. Um... Well just review, and for Darknight... Sorry about posting it before you edited... I just don't know when you'll get the chance to edit... so... yeah.
OOC: ...Oh man... I think... problems have arising with this thread being almost dead... My point of view is... The Ultimate Organization is really old... And growing closer and closer to death. I think we should retire it sooner rather then later as we attempted to do before with the end of the world a little while ago. I'm not saying we need to just drop everything now I'm just saying that we should push for things to get resolved... No new Organizations that appear out of nowhere, no "There's a crazy god like enemy that you have to defeat now..." type of thing, I think we should just stick to the enemies and problems we have now, expand on our characters really express them and whatever... Ah I dunno, I just think we should just be leaning towards the retirement of the UO...
OOC: ... ... ...Whats going on...? Oh and for the Fanfic, I'm doing it now.
