I C BIBLICAL REFERENCES But seriously, I've always loved Jimmy. I remember you showed it to me a while back, and I still love it. It feels so...personal. Makes it feel like you're actually talking and pleading with him. The rhetoricals are perfectly used, as is the repitition. I swear if this poem was in a different form of media it'd probably make me cry or something xD Okay, I'll stop with the peculiar behaviour now. Anyway, awesome.
The car one is quite lovely xD Your nails are like, perfect >|
Wow, there are loads xD The third one is beautiful x3 the leaves are a gorgeous color and they almost form a frame around the picture. Plus the ducks are in like, an unintended action pose. xD Good job :3
I dunno, I just couldnt sleep at all, it was awful D: ;~; I kept tossing and turning for hours and hours
I really liked Numb Hate but Day of Fantasy baffled me. It was amazing until I got to the line "and watch the stars fall like drops of glue". Glue? Everything else is so sophisticated and beautiful, glue just doesn't fit. It doesn't do the rest of the poem justice. I really liked the penultimate line, though, and overall it was lovely of course :3
I couldnt sleep at all last night, I was so restless D: and it turned out that godamn german I learnt got postponed for Friday B( anyway, so its...
Happy 11 months, sweetheart =3 I love you <3
oh god, get rid of the poll please? :v http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=91479 I hate not being able to remove them >>
I seriously would but Im like, half dead xD
Who the hell mows their lawn at 1am? B(
Unfortunately Styx is unavailable this month, so I am your temporary host Cariad! o: Last month's winner was timexhasxgone with her beautiful poem A Saviour. The imagery created in her piece was amazing and she had a good use of repetition. Very well done :3 This month's theme is, of course, Hallowe'en. Your best attempt to spook us! Good luck, guys!
I seriously think the battery isn't dead in mine, its at the back of the wardrobe and every now and then I swear I hear this deep voice saying "ME HUNGRY" :v
>3 hehe, got you now God, if anyone you knew IRL saw our VMs you'd just instantly lose all your manliness xD
hey you're the one with the tickly belly! >3 OH NOEZ I REVEALED YOUR WEAKNESS ON KHV o:
You always make me giggle :lolface:
um...I found this incredibly confusing. Why did he whisper "neoheartless"? I thought at first you were going to have them appear from the dark sky with his death but nothing happened. It's neat that the character is the grandson of Sora, but you've only mentioned two generations when the title is "three generations". You can't "resemble" a color, if something resembles something else it looks like another object. <3
cheese on my cereal :B
I love you more! x3 *cheesy*
Haha, you've got one tit bigger than the other! <:
Aw that's sweet :B white suits you, and your hair looks nice.
