HEVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVO remember? xD
wait till you see his blowhole lolwut
maybe its the eye or the guys mouth xD
I have eaten a weird combination of hot curry, peppers and an onion in one xD
spaghetti bolognaise? D:
how neutral xD nice talk to you later, my spag bol is waiting.
extreme sadface do you hate Twilight then? =P
I guess I just like the saying "If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it at all" heh, bambi. =P
laughed at me, or with me? xD -glare-
I know it is the more important issue, but these crazy fans' rage originates from people who join sites like these in the first place, right?
Bawwwww ;__;
*Is a Twilight fan* Wow, way to label all of us D: There are extremes to everything, and people react differently when provoked. Of course I do not support this in anyway, it just bugs me when people are like ALL TWILIGHT FANS ARE ****ED UP who on earth is sad enough to join an Anti-Twilight forum anyway? =P You join forums of things you like, generally not to insult other people's intrests xD
I was practically born rolling my r's, its necessary to speak Welsh =P
Adding to what Kay said, you need to realise this could never be an option for you unless you were of age. Remember your teacher would most likely lose her job, even if something as fickle as rumours started spreading round.
Oh, beautiful arachnid temptress Lure me closer, filled with glee Catch my wings in your glossy web Watch me try to struggle free You smile at me in suspense Your octo-eyes red with greed And hunger for my juicy blood Coming closer with more speed I twist and cry, your prey Realizing my fatal mistake I flew right into your alluring web And now my life is at stake
You are poison and Burn in Hell are pretty good. You seem very intent on sticking with similar rhythm and using rhyming couplets in all of your poems- you should try experimenting with different rhyme schemes. It'll make things a lot more intresting, trust me. Shooting Star is a bit childish for somebody of your wit with poetry. Nice work, though.
Moved to main section of Creativity, Im sorry but it can't go in Original Works unless everything is yours :3 You should use a spell and grammar check. Did you type this up in a processor or Word first? I advise you do, there are lots of spelling mistakes such as "felling" and "harrased" that could be easily corrected. A good writer never uses slang, remember that. "Cuz" is not a worthy replacement of "because", Im afraid. Also, avoid using things like "nail him pretty hard"- a lot of people probably won't know what on earth you're talking about. =P Just so you know, it's "Olette". This needs revising, if you wish to neaten it up then I shall give the actual story some critique. :3
It's beautiful, like I said last night. Still made me cry the second time round, damn you ;~; Just noticed one tiny mistake. It should be effect, I believe. Such an amazing idea, to take something as childlike as a daisy chain and make a story so chilling.
I did comment on your story, dear :3 honestly, you're pretty good at writing for someone who seems as nervous as a beginner :3
I didnt think your work was rushed :3
