Why, yes it is- crap, I got my line wrong didn't I!? D:
Have sex with Forsaken for $500? :lolface:
I guess I'm the only person who'd say yes then :/gasp: -*shot*
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"Oh!" cried the children, running outside Three hundred rockets lighting the skies Gunpowder flares, delighted suprise It's Fireworks night, Fawkes' demise The flashes of color are followed by cries of wonder, and ongoing sighs from adults and young with sparkling eyes It's Fireworks night, Fawkes' demise Not until midnight the bonfire dies Not until midnight the last rocket flies Not until midnight the red moon shall rise It's Fireworks night, Fawkes' demise. Experimenting with enjambement and a slightly more difficult rhyme scheme >3
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oh god, I seriously need to x:
GOD .o
I chuckled xD
Its my parents' anniversary, and they just went to bed giggling... The walls in my house are thin ._.
This seriously made my day xD also, I bought an epic hoodie in Pisa. It has a mario mushroom on the front and says "1UP" below it. So nerdy ;_;
When I said "A poem like yours" I meant a poem of opposites, or things that accompany each other, which is the basis of your poem. Poems like that are nearly always tied with love or romance so I just thought it'd be nice if for once it was about friendship or the relationship between parent and child or something xD But you're right, you can't please all ;D
But does he live in Italy? :lolface:
Everyone over 40 looks like Mario. Regardless of gender :/gasp:
Enjoy the wrinkles, old man :lolface:
Penblwydd Hapus, Ioan :3 Enjoy this manly cake B| Spoiler p.s. John shares his birthday with the internet. It's 40 years old today xD
Crystalline Answers gave me chills. To me it seemed that the white voice was somebody struggling with death and the blue voice was their wise yet morbid conscience. I especially liked the line "sanity is too small to mention". Perhaps it was the slight alliteration that drew me in, you seem to have a knack for slipping in techniques where they are really effective. In Character was good, the rhyming very fluid and natural (except maybe with "parade" which seemed like an obvious word to put with serenade. I would have chosen "charade" or something). I liked the poem until I reached the verse about love. It would have been nice to have a poem like yours without it being about two people in love with each other. xD
The answer's sticky, obviously. Its both brown and- wait.
Dude like get home soon B| I demand it, we need some kind of birthday celebration. Haha, you're 17 >3
Sing me a lullaby Lull me to sleep Give me a teddy bear To which I may weep Kiss my cheek gently Tempt me to sleep Tuck me in blankets Out you must creep Turn out the night-light Tell me to sleep No need to struggle Nor count many sheep Cure me of nightmares Just bliss-filled sleep Cosy in my dreams Snoozing so deep
