Thanks for keeping an eye on CC while I was gone <3
omfg, I miss you! xD
I can describe this story in one line- cute but too simple. I have no complaints about spelling or grammar (except a few missing pieces of punctuation within dialogue), but the storyline was sadly too predictable and like hundreds of kingdom hearts stories before it. Let the cogs of your creative mind work and get busy! :3 You could also do with using less speech and writing more description and action. Apart from that, nice start. :3
What delicious eyes you have >:3 Also, that necklace looks edible.
[IMG] WE NEED TO TALKo
@ this thread D'AWWWWWW
^ Even if they were, you can still CnC things like positioning etc omg, these are beautiful. c: I especially love the Inuyasha ones and the Link one. The Inuyasha ones especially compliment the grey skin here c: I'm not a big fan of the Cloud one, however, simply because his outline isn't as obvious.
I actually got a camera for Christmas :3 but these were taken a few days ago. Thanks :lolface:
xD I love this thread. @ Captain Hero- YES.
Merry Christmas Hayabusa :lolface: ^ normal response
Thanks guys c: I have to go back to school on the 4th. We don't get home until 1am ;_;
Do you get double the amount of presents at Christmastime then? o:
Not really, no xD er...not to be rude but who were you before? D:
@ Aura- you are correct and yet this story is written rather informally and I think "me" could be considered acceptable here. This was epic. I actually chuckled for a while, despite the serious undertones this whole story holds. You're doing really well, as usual. I'm curious to know what her father did to her as a child, and who this mysterious texter is. Maybe I'm just a romantic, but I hope it's a guy. xD
Moved to audio projects~ Thanks for being such a nice member, time o:
and I won't be back until the 4th. And since I probably won't make it on after tomorrow... have a nice Christmas guys ::L: Then again, I might make it here Boxing day. This is goodbye, anyway :3
That's what happened here. We can't even get the car up my road, the grit isn't making any difference .__.
Cradle snatching isn't cool, man.
Oh my god, twice!?