Consider yourselves lucky, I don't get games off my parents anymore because "it's a boy thing. You are a young lady Harriet."
There's a calm surrender
aww no problem. (:
Erm... if a teacher is hitting you, that's against the law. Your mom could report her to the authorities or something- her job should have been lost long ago. Is there any way you can switch to another class or even to another subject? Ripping up your work is very unfair. You could always protest by not bothering to work at all.
I'm alright, they sent me home this evening because after doing an ECG all I have left to do is wait for blood results, which could take forever.
Could you close this for me please, it's not really necessary anymore. thx rvr ;D
Generic impression questions go go!
Aw, you have a pleasant voice. My only complaint is that the vocal audio was way too quiet. :/ I had to turn my speakers right up, the instrumental very much overrides the sound. You might be able to fix that with the right editing software, I'm not very sure. You should be aiming for songs that are waaay more difficult though, hun. I think I heard you sing something before, and your voice has more potential than just singing pop most people could manage.
You posted chapter 12 twice, dear. :b Also the paragraph that starts when Rima visits Yuki, you put "Ruka" on accident, I believe. ...Yuki better not be turning evil.
On the contrary, I really enjoy the formal and complicated sentences that your work usually entails. .. wow, this got me thinking. Refreshing and thought provoking as usual. I was getting a sort of.. robotic image in my head. As if the narrative was a robot newly awaked and trying to come to terms with the impact of sudden life. Or maybe my perspective is crazy. xD
I almost couldn't bare to scroll down, I thought this was the end and got really anxious. ._. I have no CnC to give in all honesty, it was practically perfect prose. :l <3
*twitch* .
Um.. that sounds far more serious than a girl cutting herself in class. And now you sound like a prick.
Yeahh khv randomly does this quite a lot ^ Anyway, the story. I was pleasantly suprised that it was written in the second person, it's been a while since I've read anything like it. You certainly succeeded in bringing in some humor, especially when he was psyching himself up. Few mistakes I spotted, overall it was very well written and edited though. Should be "they're" or they are. This was a beautiful simile, but the clauses need seperating so the sentence sounds okay when read. I suggest a comma after "butterfly's". Need to lose the first a. Ugh, the feeling really sucks when you start noticing all the couples around you and you're the single one. :l and haha, I love the Muse version of "Creep". c:
um, it isn't particularly offensive. I'm prone to laughing and actually giggled a bit.
Lovely work as usual. Can you explain to me what exactly Copic markers are? I've seen quite a few good artists who use them on dA, but I've yet to discover exactly what they are and why they're so special. xD I should get some though, since they seem to make quite a lovely effect. <3 My only complaint is that you can't really tell he's wearing a jacket, since there isn't much definition where the sleeve/arm begins. It could be seen as a cloak.
FFF QUICK BOMB STRAPPED TO BACK OF THE TVoo
Exciting chapter 8D Really didn't like the character development though. Kaname wouldn't accept a fight against Yuki so quickly, it was incredibly OOC for him. Apart from that, the fight was written really well and didn't get boring like a lot of fight scenes I read. I wish you had gone back to Yuki and Kaname at the end of the chapter, now I have to wait again. >: And for some reason I always confused Hanabusa and Ichijo xD
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