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    I got into KH because my older sister asked for help when she couldn't get past Destiny Islands (lol). I was like... 9 at the time? It was out when I was 8 though.
    Post by: Juicy, Feb 13, 2010 in forum: The Spam Zone
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    ^ haha, me.

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    Post by: Juicy, Feb 13, 2010 in forum: The Spam Zone
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    4 mah love

    Please don't spam guys, I just had to get rid of those posts. ):

    Cute poems, it would be nice if you ran them through a spell checker, though, dear. Are they all in " " because they're actual quotes?
    Post by: Juicy, Feb 13, 2010 in forum: Archives
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    You got cute. ;3
    Post by: Juicy, Feb 13, 2010 in forum: The Playground
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    9 because its cute as well as messed up <3
    Post by: Juicy, Feb 11, 2010 in forum: The Spam Zone
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    a black circle

    c:
    Post by: Juicy, Feb 11, 2010 in forum: The Spam Zone
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    Your vocabulary was a little disappointing, the only part I really liked was the fourth stanza, where the rhythym became a little more enjoyable to read. Please begin each line with a capital letter if you're going to end the previous one with a period. ;o

    The third stanza had dodgy rhyme, did you give up on finding rhyming words or something? xD

    The final couplet was lovely. <3
    Post by: Juicy, Feb 11, 2010 in forum: Archives
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    Yay, I'm glad to see this is being continued at last! (:

    Flawlessly written as usual, and the second half from Sora's POV was a real gem. My only complaint is that the first half was a little slow paced and my attention went astray a few times.

    You write romantic scenes really well, and the dialogue was perfect. Some delicious words used x3
    Post by: Juicy, Feb 11, 2010 in forum: Archives
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    Sunrise

    Epic epic epic 8D that was awesome, I'm really excited for the next chapter now. xD Perhaps its true that longer chapters really are more effective. :b

    I really liked the descriptions of all the clothes, but maybe that's because I'm going through a phase of being obsessed with dresses. The ballroom scene was executed perfectly, in my opinion. I don't ever remember a Sara before though? Is she an OC?

    ^ this seems slightly contradictory.
    Post by: Juicy, Feb 8, 2010 in forum: Archives
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