You should be careful with sex on the beach, I heard it's common to get crabs.
aw awesome, I'm glad to hear it went well :'D
... I'm so showing this to everyone I know.
I am assuming this is not reflective of your experiences since you appear to love your job. xD The whole piece was a pleasure to read, mainly because I am familiar with all the places named- hell, The Rev and I even went to the Rainforest Café. Even if I didn't know the places mentioned, this was pleasant to read, but that is down to your brilliance as an author and ability to write so smoothly. Despite the whole story having sad undertones, it was still highly enjoyable.
Nah, I've met people far worse :b although they were a tad more subtle.
Am I the only person curious as to what happened? xD
I would totally consider it.. except your creepiness is very offputting :'D
I am glad to see you posting here again, it is always a pleasure to CnC your work. <3 Contrary to your paranoia, I thoroughly enjoyed the detail of the first section. Such positive and delicious vocabulary was lovely to read, as it was such a change from the things I usually read from you. The only thing that struck me as odd was the lack of punctuation; I felt that in the first half some of the sentences could have been broken up with commas to improve the reading flow. Watching the tv show, as Shades said, was a convenient way of learning about Lara. It reminded me of previous stories where you've included flashbacks and I like that about your work. I rather stupidly scrolled down and my eyes flickered to the last sentence >< the ending was ruined for me, but it was perfectly executed all the same (no pun intended xD). I really admired your personification of the sun.
Everywhere I go people are making me jealous ;__; *lacks a ps3 or an xbox*
FFFF I HAVE TEARS IN MY EYES ;_; That was such a perfect ending D: I am so so relieved and happy that it ended that way <3 I am so very glad that she escaped. You are a gorgeous writer and I hope you continue to grace us with your stories. Wonderful.
*glomp'd* hello there again. :3
Really? I disagree. Contrary to what Haley here looks like, I've always pictures Haleys to have freckles and light brown hair xD
No joke, somebody I've known for almost a year called me Haley by mistake yesterday :v
Awesome awesome :'D I'm in grade 8.
...wait, did I read a thread correctly? You do ballet? :3
Hmm, it is beautifully created as usual, my only complaint is the use of red and orange, since they aren't particularly "spring" colors in my opinion. I would have expected less of them and more of fresh tones of green etc. I really like how the close up of the girl is a seperate caption :3
Click and drag your mouse to create Do you feel feminine yet? :3
I chuckle everytime I see this thread's title. xD
With a disappointing lack of entries for last month's contest, I can pronounce no winners! Perhaps it is merely the lack of activity on the forum generally these past few weeks. I hope this month has a better turn out. (: This month's theme is Love. It couldn't possibly get any cheesier, but I want to see variety here. Hell, you can write about love between inanimate objects if you so wish. Good luck guys. Deadline is the end of the month, as usual. :3
Hmm, is this fanfiction? Just curious, not sure whether to move it to Original Works since I didn't recognise any of the personal pronouns. I really enjoyed reading through this :'D It's been a while since my french skills have been properly tested. The only thing that got tiring was the repetition of phrases (you overused peut-etre far too much) but I suppose at a certain level its better not to make sentences too complicated. xD This was really sweet. c: Although I did start to wonder if this actually was incest.. or you were just using it as an expression. "If you wait for me, I'll wait for you" : But they'll both be aging, no? I guess she just has to wait for him to mature and realise. Very cute. <3 Not sure how perfect the french was in terms of whether it was too much literal translation because I'm not a native :b
