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omg, and it was o.o I totally missed that, sorry. xD Don't worry about it then, just from now on stick to Garxena's works. <3

Try and keep your posts substantial, guys. It's a shame to delete spam. D:


It's not bad, considering you're a beginner to writing. There are a few problems (only natural) so I'll try to show you where you slipped. Here's an insight into my thoughts as I began to read.

Also, it would help if you started a new line everytime somebody speaks :3

Your spelling is excellent.
I quite liked the fact somebody was watching her brush her teeth. xD

Keep it up :3

[IMG] Hello there, John. Welcome to London.

This happens to me quite a lot, depending on how memorable the song was :'D It also happens when I can recall really old commercials from tv, the stimulus usually being the catchy song associated with it. My dad says he can recall songs and adverts from when he was a kid.

If you're going to post audio clips of your singing, it'd belong in the Audio Projects subforum :3

Also, this should be in the thread you made "Garxena's works". It would be a shame to merge the two threads (which I probably should) but for future reference can you put your work for this subforum in your main thread?

This is a clever poem, I really like some of the language used and the rhyming doesn't feel forced which is quite common in a lot of poems. The only line I disliked was "No tear or glee in his eye" because the rhymthm doesn't fit the rest of the stanza.

It was a little too short to base any opinions upon, I'm afraid. If you're looking for feedback you should probably try to show us a bit more, rather than just a snapshot of your thoughts. If you really want to get into song writing, you should look into devices, such as rhyme and rhythm count. n_n

Like others have said, each school does it differently. Prom should be a fun event- a chance to party with friends and have a laugh. There shouldn't be a pressure to take a date or get too dressed up. It's up to you, but I'd give it a chance- it could turn out very fun :3

Hello lovely lil woj. c:

Pretty good, in my opinion it is never great to launch into a battle scene right at the beginning of a story but you pulled it off okay. My main complaint is format. Try to start a new line whenever somebody new speaks; your work will become much more readable. Mind your spelling in a few places too- words like "travelling" are easily mispelled.

Keep it up.

HAAHAHA THIS IS GREAT


seriously can't stop laughing at the sixth one. xD

Enjoy yourself, O wise Canadian friend. <3

I hopppppe you get on soon o:

sorry D: should have laptop back by tomorrow :3

I c u 2 sadly I have to go now ;;

I didn't have the patience to read all that. xD

Oh god yeah, everytime I'm on break the days just seem to melt into one. Once I'm done with my exams this summer I have the most amazing holiday which is like three months x3

;-; who else was I supposed to watch torchwood with? Don't worry about it, laptop is currently broken so I have limited time on my dad's...

so like.. I miss you D: