No.567 Kites Transport Pokemon DRAGON ELECTRIC HT 9′00″ WT 210.5 lbs. Legend says that a cave is created when Julia gets mad. When it's in a good mood it will sing in a beautiful voice, but it is very irritating when mad. ....210.5 lbs....why? i need my beach bod ):
Haha aww thank you, I was prem before but I finallyyyy got it back ｡◕‿‿◕｡
I wish you would explain the premise behind this ballad. Were the grammatical mistakes such as "We decided to Ran too much.", etc. intentional? I think if I knew a little more about why you wrote this or why you used incorrect grammar if it was intentional would help me understand this poem more. It has the potential to be very nice if I knew some background info.
I like the idea of combining real life settings with Kingdom Hearts elements. Make sure when you finally decide to type this up you use proper spelling and grammar because otherwise it becomes a pain in the butt for your audience to read and they will focus more on silly mistakes as opposed to your story which you want to be drawing attention to. Type out the entire thing first and then post it here so people can give you more feedback and be more clear in the direction you are headed with this.
For someone who hasn't been doing this for long you seen to have a knack for it based on a good understanding of how you want the sigs to turn out. Look up some tutorials on deviantArt they have plenty there and will teach you blending, lighting, and other useful techniques that everyone learns when they make sigs. Other than that I like the style that you have without the typical sharp rectangular sigs and went for curvier edges, very nice keep up the good work!
Very creative indeed. I remember I used to right fanfics and bring in Axel at every possible opportunity because I loved his character so much, you writing skills are prevalent and that makes the story quite enjoyable. Also, I'm glad you used a lot of quotations for conversation instead of a straight narrative. Good work! Keep on writing, it's very good!
I remember everyone reading these books in middle school. I actually only read Eragon and Eldest since they were popular at the time but maybe one day I'll read Brisingr since Inheritance is coming out.
YES. Pocahontas YES. I mean, visually it would be beautiful, it'd be a toughie to try to work out a story for because honestly it'd probably end up being one of those worlds where you just go and fulfill random missions, but it would be really nice to see. Also I would like to see some expansion of already existing worlds, almost like an upgrade. But I'm really glad that they are FINALLY putting in Notre Dame. I have been waiting for that one forever, it's such a lovely movie.
I'm sure there's going to be some sort of huge plot twist somewhere in the next few games, but from what we know so far Namine could easily manipulate a lot of the memories throughout the game so she's basically a huge aspect. I don't know if they would bring her back though because if they don't it could become this really big emotional journey to try to find another way to free the lost "souls".
I hooked up my PS2 this past weekend and started to play really old games that I hadn't played in a long time and KH was one of them. I know I said Marluxia would be cool to see as a human before, and I still stand by that statement, but after seeing some of the other characters again I think Larxene would be quite interesting to see. She's probably one of the harshest Org. members and I really want to know how she acts as a human being and what her backstory is. Also, I think that a lot of my intrigue for some of these characters that we mostly see in CoM comes from the fact that we rarely ever see them and yet there was a whole game devoted to the Org. I would like some more questions answered.
I see you edited the original version so now you have a different version up. Like Bareri-San said the crescents are in a strange place but I think the banner looks way better now that you took off that huge pink hazy overlay. I like the addition of stars that you added in, very nice overall. Good improvements made.
