I know, I have serious attachment to this place, I'm going to have withdrawal systems soon, when I'm off travelling for almost a month. xD
Hah, its not like any of us can avoid this place. :3
It's nice to see you posting again. c:
Well then, I've had time to ponder over your looks :lolface:
I just never saw one of you before, I think. ;;
Guys, let's refrain from posting the more graphic ones that will undoubtedly come up. Kthx. As for me.. Lmao, I have honestly never heard this in my life.
Maybe you'll get raped by the younger girls. Whilst being slapped, threatened, and driving dangerously which results in an accident where you get arrested. ...You never know. :B|:
@Wolfie- is it weird and stalkerish of me that I remember the girl with the reddish hair from previous pictures? >> @Ashwa-the bored picture is actually really pretty. Btw, love the avatar. [: @Carl Jung- you are actually pretty cute :3 An eye for an eye, khv? Spoiler Hmm, thoughtful. Spoiler
heyyyyy c: I'll be right on x33 lemme just finish writing something up >:3
You've received quite a few comments on "A Pyro's Romance" so I'll talk about your anime sonnet. First impressions- wow, I don't think I've ever seen a sonnet on here before, so this is a pleasant suprise. Upon a deeper glance- I'm undecided on the simplistic style, I've never been too fond of lots of fullstops(periods) within a poem. The rhyming is decent despite your fears but you slipped up when applying a poetic device. You've tried to use enjambment here, aka a running line, where the sentence follows onto the next line. However, because you placed a period at the end of the first line, it has altered the flow. Some parts of the poem are rather impressive, while others seem a little cheesy. Your poem certainly fits an anime stereotype, as Plums stated. :v
I can't get over how cute your avatar is ._.
This barely resembles poetry and therefore I believe I cannot give relative critique. I suppose it could be described as "short and to the point" or as a "snapshot into the mind", but I think the tasteless language used and only the weakest attempt at poetic device (in the form of the repetition of the "you" and the mild rhetorics) make this piece something I cannot appreciate as a poem. On the plus side, I would like to see more from you, since you clearly enjoy creating poems. Sorry if my comments seem harsh, I am always truthful but sometimes lack the tact needed to pass on my advice harmlessly, especially when tired.
Sorry this is late, folks, there was a lack of communication between Styx and I. Without further ado, the winner of last month's contest was Chevalier with his poem One Along. There was some beautiful vocabulary used and the message of the poem subtly hidden within italics (which I haven't replicated because I'm running out of time to post, d'oh). There was also enjambment used in a way that seemed natural; you are led to believe the poet created the poem effortlessly. Good work. This month's theme is Changing Seasons. Closing date is the end of the month, naturally. Good luck, gang. <3
Er yeah, sure.
Mmm yeah, we have some gorgeous beaches :'D
Are you sure your movements aren't slowing down?
Haha, nah, I'd feel like a loser if I started on my own now xD this is why I never do kareoke
damnit, you didn't finish the singing, I was ready to sing the entire song xD
I am actually rather scared of going too fast ahem, I shall try that next year then.. B|
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