I have yet to read chapter three because I have to get off now but I will say, I like your character interaction but I definitely suggest reading through it again as there are quite a few spelling mistakes and grammatical errors that could be fixed. I look forward to finding out hat happens next in chapter 3 (which I will comment on later) but I suggest rewriting the scene with Gerald as it feels like it's too abrupt, I suppose I feel he should have talked to the people first about his creation and his life before telling them that they are trapped but that is just my personal opinion. But very good! : D
One of my best friends is a lesbian/bi-sexual (she hasn't decided yet) and so I am for it. Even as a Christian, I believe in a benevolent God who wants what is best for us- he wants us to love each other like we love ourselves. There are parts of the bible that say "If you lie with another man then bad stuff will happen to you" and all that but I never agreed with that. I suppose the view is one of traditional procreation but is that really the main reason for relationships now- God didn't create everyone fertile so not everyone is meant to have children- plus they are likely to adopt so orphans can have homes but that goes on regardless. Why did God create these feelings if he didn't want something to become of them. I am straight but have had feelings like that in the past and I felt absolutely rotten simply because I thought I would be ostracized by my church and I hated that feeling- it destroyed me on the inside for a while. One thing I absolutely hate is Christians condemning homosexuals and saying things like "God hates you" when that isn't the message he wants sending out- it's the opposite- God loves you no matter what you are or what you do won't change that fact. We are supposed to be the ones to accept anyone no matter what (not exclusively though- there are many athiests/other religious people who agree with that) so Christians shouldn't go around saying what is right or wrong. The Bible may be the word of God but it's possible there could be misprint of the old fashioned kind or something along those lines- the role of the times was very traditional and homophobic so of course it'll be in the Bible but whether that is what God actually said is another matter all together. I'm all for it, I hope it passes fully!
Congratulations on the food baby! Baby Tootsie roll.
Ghost flying. So I am a flying ghost... hmm...
It's like people saying Baa baa black sheep was racist ;-; I never understood that. I'm very drained this week- nearly fell asleep in biology yesterday and had an hour nap today which was amazing.
Nah, can't be bothered- I don't care that much :3
Well I've been working from your finished piece so I like I should be alright, I have my idea just need to sort out how to do it properly. But...
I'm not sure how it is meant to be, it could be looked at either way I suppose but that is how I took it since it is his name.
well yes, it could be that or it could be like Thomas L. Cook for example.
This got dramatic, as we continue to rhyme Masks, both important and destructive, we carry through time If only people knew how they affected...
I have to babysit tonight, I'm sorry ;-; I'm sure there will be time soon though. How many candy canes do you have? O.o
That... *wipes away tear" that was beautiful.
Yup, all good. Thanks ^^
I wasn't sure how you actually spell it xD but I thought, ahh well. And yay! Another Rocky Horror fan :3
What's the point in having you?!
Just going to drink some Sora juice :3
I know that feeling... some GIF's that people use are so satisfying to watch over and over again :3
All the men I know in real life aren't charming... COME AT ME BRITISH CHARM!
Oh yes >:3 PREPARE FOR YOUR EXAMINATION!
Sometimes the mask becomes reality But of course this just leads to cold, hard brutality Toward yourself or maybe to others you've hurt But of...