Namine sat in a white chair in the room she knew so well and opened her handy-dandy notebook. As she drew the green crayon over the nostalgic yellow paper, she wondered what she was getting herself into. [OOC: crap. That sucked epically. Why didn't someone alert me that this was begining sooner? Whatever. Is that post okay?]
The text is the only thing that sucks about this sig. I don't like the color or font or where it's placed. Remove and you'll be fine.
No, I did not ^_^; I'll watch the game though! I like in-state rival games in the south cuz the commentators hate both teams.
Awesome! I really love this story! There are just a few spots to look over and make sure they make sense.
Sweet! I'll go read it!
The webpage cannot be found??? But, I don't think that you should just peek into people's minds. Remember our right to privacy? Of course there are times in which your right to privacy is discarded by the government... but that's a different story.
Johnny Tremain. *burns book*
Yeah, I wtched that last night! Go Cats!!!
Very nice! I read the Melencholy of Haruhi Suzumiya yesterday and I'm hooked! I'm gonna be watching this story!
Diss, just cuz your a sistah!
Wow! That's really cool! How do you do that?
It looked like a funny movie, I wanna see it.
Black. That was the only thing in the boy’s view. Any being that might exist in this world was shut out indefinitely. Not only from sight, but every other sense was numb- a hollow void in his brain being the one thing he could mentally process. He could not wrap his mind around the overwhelming sensation growing speedily and steadily, an emotion perhaps? One not even he had not experienced in his past however-many years he’d been trapped in the dark space that still surrounded his physical and mental body. He winced as he became dully aware of what the anomaly was: pain. It must have been decades since he had felt it so sharply and clearly. It filled not only his mind, but his entire being, as he screamed. For once in his life the skull shattering feeling was the single thing that made sense in the universe. The boy shrieked as he uncovered his eyes and saw what was causing him such torture. No longer could his complexly simple mind comprehend what he witnessed. 'What is this?!?!' He mentally screamed. Sora? A lisped voice called. Be careful, he still has to recover. Once he is accustomed to the light again, his memories will begin to flood back. He will be in more pain then, even compared to what he is experiencing now. Another voice stated matter-of-factly. This voice was different though; not only was it feminine and soft, but melodic and strange. "A-hyuck, is there any way we can prefent it?" Different again, this time southern sounding almost with over its use of slangs. "PREVENT, Goofy, you idiot!" As the pain drifted away, the boy chanced opening his eyes again. This time, the sky-blue colored sight organs stunned him and his head swam as he began processing the room in which he was stationed. The walls were white, as was the floor. Also on the floor were light blue patterns, symbolizing whatever they symbolized and entrancing him as he stared at them. "Sora, are you okay?" The third voice questioned. The boy looked up at the three characters standing before him. A duck… A dog… and a girl were all stood in front of him. The duck and dog were wearing clothes, oddly enough, and also held weapons. The girl could have worn the world’s ugliest pantsuit for all he cared and she would still be the most beautiful person on earth. "Who is Sora?" He asked. "And…who’re you?" "Um, Sora, we’re your friends! Don’t you remember us?" The lisped animal questioned him. "No…. should I? I’m pretty sure that I’ve never seen you before." The boy told them, confused as to why his answer should be any different. ~~~~~ So, yeah. Should I try to continue this or what?
Very Nice Mementi-san! You're a really good writer, and show your understanding of the element of fear while throwing in humor f0r a perfect mix!
*hug* I love giving huggles!
Very nice, her nick is just a tad thick.
Woah! Super good!!! I love it!
Uhhh... Hug I'm not in a very kissy mood. Plus 'i don'y know you
I love it, but in the green background I would make it a bit more solid, I guess would be the word. I would take out the little white dots and make it a bit more... I'm not sure of the word... smooth? It seems to take away from the action. Brush over the spots where the color doesn't match and it'll be perfect.
Really good man! I like how you left a few of the guidelines on the sketches!
