no, i shouldn't go around calling him a drunk. i edited everything. and as best i could i fix-ed it up. i hope it makes sense now.
ooc: don't go back and read my edits, although i did edit, i am just starting up on here. -------------------------------------------------- "so i guess your the winner" He said. "hey, bout my mom, what i really meant was she went on a secret mission, and dad was drunk with greif. everyone tells me so much bout him. how he's a monster and all. but monsters don't love, and he loves me and mum." he said. getting up he started off for the shadows, the sun going down producing them. ooc: i am SOOOOOOO srry!!!!!!!! i am actually a big fan of gaara, and i know he didn't technically like neone in the animé. i am changing it!!!!!
.....enough. i am probably not the BIGGEST fan and won't hold up in any contests, but i like his style and approach. and neways, for my character...
I AM SOOOOO SRRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i will change it immediatly!!!!!! i promise!!!!
Reserve me!!!!
"shoot, i'm almost done" working on his tenth, a little green around this gills. "besides, not everyone is Hokage-to-be" ----------------------------------------- ooc: ugh, brains shut-down mode not helping. hitting hay now
"shoot, is that your third bowl? no, i just got here like this morning." he answered, starting to shovel his ramen. someone noticed the speed pick up and placed some money on the table. "first one to 10 bowls gets the money and a free night at my inn." he said.
"mission-hunting. got bored of dune-jumping, so came here for something fun. even a little romance" he answered, emphasizing the last word through a mouthfull of Ramen.
sometimes there is honor in the dark arts. mostly just fun to call the dark stuff in games.
"um....just Gaara and some wench" he said whilst sucking up some noodles. "actually i don't know my mum, dad killed her when i was like 2...months old. he was drunk, or so they tell me. but the real story is that she went on a secret mission and didn't come back"
shoot. being 20 gives you a head-start lol
"just my parentage." he answered nonchallont
i'll get back to you on this one gots the perfect character :sly: see what you really know bout pokemon
"lucky" Kohaku said. "well.... your the Hokage son....nevermind, you'd run away screaming"
"hmmm, i haven;t met you, but i've seen you......ha! and my names Kohaku, like the river" He said. Extending his hand for a hand shake, he ordered two things of ramen. "it's on me"
u won't live that kiss down.
OOC: i know that. but my character has always existed. i just chose now to shine light on him. its all part of my scheme.... ------------------------------------------------ walking into the streets, his stomach growled loudly. "can't this wait belly?" as if to reply it growled again. "fine, we will get some ramen." the stomach growled in an approving manner. wealking into the resturant, Kohaku noticed the boy Ninja who was kissing the girl in the hospital. "well, hello" he said to the Ninja.
(ooc: ok, i......will edit my thing for sqaud three and attack someone.) ------------------------------------------------------------------- Kohaku looked down into the hospital room window, watching the extremely hilarious show going on down there with the two Ninja's kissing. laughing, he almost fell off of his tree branch. "shoot, i might be spotted" jumping down the three-story high branch, he walked off too the mission control place. ------------------------------------------------------------------- (ooc: you'll have to excuse my spying, ima little rusty in my Ninja)
went fishing.
(ooc: sweet....what squad and i'z be there in a jiffy... when i figure outs whats'a goin on. oh and you can call my character Kohaku)
