hi there ^^ how are you going?
yesh another naruto lover has come to take over the world join the forum anywho, welcome to khv-dattebayo! I'm Naruto Uzumaki, if you want to chat just leave me a message okay? Seeya around Ayaka :3
>.> <.< I like both. Simply because they both look awesome and the characters that have wielded them are awesome as well. *runs off*
these are alright. Your best one would have to be your 4th one and the first one is your worst. overall the first one it way too dark in the top right corner, you should try and lighten that area up a bit and maybe use some lighter colours. Try adding some lines in to add a flow. That's all I can think of at the moment. Keep trying~ Ciao!
I'm not that good at critiquing but this is pretty good. I think the blurring helps you focus on Catfish more but in some areas it does look a little bit too blurry. I agree, she may look innocent here but irl she is pure evil xD
omg lol xD i cant stop laughing xDDD
Valerie looked puzzled for a moment at what Advent said first but she shook the thought off and giggled. "Don't worry about it, I don't like cakes that much." ooc: i must go again, I'll try get online again in a couple of hours.
Valerie's eyes followed Advent as he paced. "It's my 18th today," she interjected into the silence. "My mother convinced me to come here today."
"My mother made me exercise for at least 1 hour a day since I was little." Valerie replied.
“I’ll try my best not to get hurt.” Valerie chuckled. Even though she didn’t want to admit it, she was actually excited about joining now. Deep down it was making her uneasy.
Valerie smiled and waved to him. "I'm Valerie Evans, I've come here to sign up." ooc: I'm basing this OC on my personality, so what she does is what I would've done in that situation irl
Valerie looked over to the Entrance door, she spotted an angry looking man walking her way.
wow, that's hot lol I never did that when I learned Italian D:
