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    ooc: your new character have telekinesis?
    hmmm... *forms an evil plan*

    bic: "Hey Advent, do you think I could move things around with my mind if I trained enough?" Valerie asked. She was morbidly curious if it was possible.

    Annaly sighed bordely, she rested her hands on her hips and stared at Nox frustratedly. "You're late."
    Post by: Bareri-San, Apr 2, 2009 in forum: Retirement Home
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    This is the first tag I've made without using any brushes AT ALL. It's purely PS effects and a couple of C4D renders. I made it last night to relieve my artist block and test out a couple of things. I made 2 versions as well.

    v1
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    v2
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    CnC?
    No ratings please and if you are only going to comment, actually explain why you like it in detail or else something horrible will befall you.
    Thread by: Bareri-San, Apr 2, 2009, 6 replies, in forum: Arts & Graphics
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    well I'm finishing off drafts i need to hand in and i am studying for exams then i got holidays for a week.
    Post by: Bareri-San, Apr 2, 2009 in forum: Forum Families
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    *is jealous*
    Post by: Bareri-San, Apr 2, 2009 in forum: Forum Families
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    i sort of know what that can be like...
    I swear my science teacher has the power to put everyone into an induced sleep.
    Post by: Bareri-San, Apr 2, 2009 in forum: Forum Families
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    Destroyed

    ooc: fine, whatever.
    Oh and btw, Technos is a huge city, not on an island. It would probably take up half of australia's room if I have to say how big.

    bic: Alexis didn't chase after Leon, he only watched him flee away as he knew how deadly he was. His arm morphed back to normal and he sat down on an old empty garbage can. He remembered back to how the disaster occured all that time ago. And who had caused the disaster too.
    Post by: Bareri-San, Apr 2, 2009 in forum: Retirement Home
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    I was on a school computer at the time so photobucket was blocked.

    Anywho.... onto the critique.

    First of all, R~M you really need to lighten up when you submit stuff. IMO I think art is meant to make you happy in a sense but all I am sensing from you is emo-ness.

    Okay, well I don't think this looks really nice. it's lacking depth, decent effects and flow. All it looks like it a picture of swirls with a headshot of Kairi pasted on top. Go to deviant art and get a tutorial and download GIMP.
    Try adding more colours because this looks really bland as B&W with pink.
    I can't really say anything else and the things I could say would make me feel guilty as hell. The number one things I suggest you to to improve is read some tutorials and download GIMP and possibly ask one of the more experienced artists in this section to help you out a bit.
    Post by: Bareri-San, Apr 2, 2009 in forum: Arts & Graphics
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    Seriously guys, give her some actual critique that will actually help her improve.
    Post by: Bareri-San, Apr 2, 2009 in forum: Arts & Graphics
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    I've got to try and finish a final copy for one essay in my art class and also hand in a draft of a second essay I have in there as well. Authority Art no fun at the moment D:
    Post by: Bareri-San, Apr 1, 2009 in forum: Forum Families
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    omg that reminds me, I have my last school day next week xD
    But unfortunately I have a heap of drafts and assignments due >____<
    Post by: Bareri-San, Apr 1, 2009 in forum: Forum Families
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    Destroyed

    "Fine, whatever." Veronica said flatly. She was still suspicious of Advent.
    Post by: Bareri-San, Apr 1, 2009 in forum: Retirement Home
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    Destroyed

    Luke had a feeling that there was no way he was going to get out of telling her so he sighed in defeat and turned to her. "I was here 40 years ago when the disaster happened. I got put into a suspended animation chamber before the actual disaster occured. I was one of the heads of the experiment that caused this bloody thing." his voice rose up and down in anger. He never knew that it would cause so much pain and chaos for everyone in the future. "I was pushed in by one of the test subjects we had. He was the main trigger of the disease spreading through the entire city."
    Post by: Bareri-San, Apr 1, 2009 in forum: Retirement Home
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