Good thing I do. Personally, one of the biggest struggles I have with writing is details. I hate having to elaborate and do all of that descriptive work, though I am getting better at forcing myself to do so. I think it is also something you should work on. I think the story was an interesting idea -- one of those 4th Wall Breaking scenarios -- but it needed more to it. The average paragraph is about seven sentences, something they tell you in grade school, and yours averaged about three. I do like that there was lots of dialogue. I prefer interactions because I feel like it conveys more emotion, but once you started to introduce the two characters, there should have been more. We found out that they were brother and sister and that the sister was into anime / manga, but that's about it. We really didn't learn much about their relationship, other than the fact that her brother was willing to help her on her essay. We didn't get to connect with the characters so the story is kind of forgettable. Over all, it's a good start. I'll be interested to watch you improve as time goes on.
Does that mean you're always asleep? [[ loljknr ]]
I used to go to sleep on one end of the bed, and wake up on the opposite end of the bed all of the time. Apparently I was super stealthy at it when I was asleep because no one ever noticed me moving around when I shared the bed with someone. They would just be all "how did you get down there?" and I was like "idk... I fell asleep in that direction."
❯ ❯ @. : tale_wind has been charged with the task to gather all of the necessary potion ingredients. It will be some time before he returns. Everyone wishes him the best of luck.
// strokes colleen // shhh shhh it's okay.[DOUBLEPOST=1403661242][/DOUBLEPOST]People still watch Degrassi?
She meant the site being down.
It's just speculation right now.
This isn't a joke. We have our suspicions that's because of everything that happened a couple weeks ago and us moving out and whatnot. We were just fortunate enough to not have them officially go out on us until we pulled into the parking lot of my work this morning. Though they were acting funny the whole way there.
Someone cut our brake lines last night ...
If it wasn't for the goddamn cooldown and its stupid 17 seconds.
