No problem, new anime obsession I see.
Hi! What's up? I commented on your poetry thread.
I correct the grammar and spelling mistakes, they are underlined. The overall message is very good, you definitely get the point across. I've never been in love so I can't say much more on the subject. I think the poem could flow a bit more. At times it seems like you just want to put another love line in the poem. But achieving flow is a skill that come with time (Trust me I had the same problem, and I think I still do) One thing I would say is PLEASE capitalize your "I"s when the they need to be.( Sorry it's a pet peeve grammar mistake of mine) Bad grammar can make even the best writing look like a piece of trash. Also check out the spelling and capitalization.( Don't worry the first person who commented in my poetry thread also commented on my grammar and capitalization. I am not very good at grammar either,but I try my best. ) Good start! If you like it, keep going! =)
Yes indeed, as much as I love to write I stink at grammar and spelling.-_- Thank you so much for taking your time to do this, you're awesome! Thank you, I'll try my best.
Although I do value knowing what I am listening to just because something is in a foreign language does not mean it's "crap". I must admit I do look up the English lyrics to the Japanese songs on my iPod. If I know what their saying I can relate to the song. There are songs in English that I understand, but the meaning and the language is so vulgar and pointless( drugs, sex, etc,) that I don't want to listen to it anymore. There are songs in Japanese, however, that have valuable meanings and beautiful lyrics. Though I might have to look on the internet to find out what their actually saying. Overall: To me quality Japanese music is better, then garbage music that is in English.
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Hello, my purple Brittannian friend! Ummm so I made this: http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=100880 I would appreciate it if you take a...
So I promised myself that after a certain amount of time I would make a poetry thread here on KH-V. Well, that time has come and here is my poetry thread. I started writing poetry "for fun" last year, I don't think I've exactly "honed my skills". But CnC is very hard to find so I've come to you KH-V! I've only recently started to share my poetry with others hence the thread title. I'll update when I can,or when I feel like it. Just for future reference, I tend to not fallow a rhyme scheme. My poems can best be put as "rhythmic streams of consciousness" Please CnC is very, very appreciated. So let's start, shall we? I wrote this poem in Geometry class. =) It's based on a short story that I am writing, but I leave the overall meaning up to you. A Pyro’s Romance Please, please come with us. We’re going to live tonight. The fire in our hearts has been burning far too bright for us to keep it inside We beg and we plead. With your hand in mine, “Come. Come out! We’re running out of time!” But they’re oblivious to our desperate cries. So come with me darling, And we’ll laugh as we say goodbye. This place is a cage. But now it’s our turn. We’ll sit here smiling. As we watch the city burn. Edit:Some of the grammar was corrected and phrasing was changed.
Don't remind me about English! I Have 100 vocabulary words and literary terms to memorize in 3 days... Oh s... *Logs off KH-V*
Happy Birthday! I give you Cactus Juice and all its wonderful properties.
Same here!
Sounds pretty cool.
Looks like you had a ton fun. I hope it was a great con! Great cosplay btw.
I personally think that this is to be expected with any animated to live action remake( these remakes imo are also the hardest to pull off. That's why they almost always get messed up.). Face it guys it will never be as good as the real thing. Just getting the characters personalities right will be amazing, but story matters too. The Percy Jackson movie was gigantic letdown because of that. Character ascetics are not important because there will always be one character that's "messed up". Always. Personally I would just stop getting picky and hope it makes it to the "decent" standard.
A Man For All Seasons is going to take me a whole season to finish! And finals, finals, finals.
Fine... And yes Poe is Epic. Now I am going to get myself some windex and become "clear" again.
If you say so, it must be true...to some extent.
Truly lovely pictures. I love Tree, Reaching, and Focus the best.
Ah memories... I personally would like a aquatic wombat-weasel,but there are indeed endless possibilities.
>:{ Messed up emoticon matches my feelings. *Runs to EMO corner* Now I'll just be here reading Poe. You just enjoy your life you twisted fruit....
