Nah ...
I guessed at his name he did something of that sort.
I used to be. No, I haven't.
And it's just a Sad picture, The final blow hit's ya, Somebody else gets what you wanted again. You know It's all the same, Another time and place, Repeating history and you're getting sick of it. Well, I believe in whatever you do, And I'll do anything, To see it though, Oh Because these thing will Change Can you feel it, now? Those walls that they put up to hold us back will fall down It's a revolution, The time will come, For us to finally win. [And we'll sing hallelujah] So we've been out numbered, Raided and now corned, Its hard to fight, When the fight ain't fair. [We're getting stronger now, from things they never found, They might be bigger, but we're faster and never scared. You can walk away say we don't need this. But there's something in Your eyes, Says we can beat this.]
Why did he find that rude?
Mmm...No reason, I guess. It just interested me...
What do you know about Star and DT fighting?
Oh yeah! Why did Star and DT argue?
Haha...Travis xD So sounds like he'd have a deep voice.
*Points to mine and Sora's convo* Lol I'm awkward.
I did gather something from the way you get girl, although. I gather that you know what your doing, And usually make the first move.Your probably...
Not much to gather from it really, why?
Hi . :P
Mhmm... Ok, sure brraahh. Until tomorrow.
Hmm..how do you talk to girls?
Haha who starts a conversation like that?!At any rate; cool xD
[I don't personally like the Doctor, Its nothing against you I just don't. But since your a good friend I read this.I just wanted to say that before posting, also I've never seen the doctor, so my Reviewing your story may seem a little harsh, But I dunno how **** went down in/on the show, So I don't have much to go by except my judgement.I'm also, As you know, a cynical *******. So expect that. I'll be keeping up with this story, assuming you'll keep writing, perhaps I'll actually get to like the show.Moving on.] I don't have much to say about this post, since its only your first and there's not much to talk about since no characters have really been seen much of, But I realize perhaps Rico may not like his life, but it seems as if though it comes to easily to him, To just leave. He also accepts the concept of the TARDIS (Is it?) quite easily, Maybe from this you can gather hes gullible and rash (as the doctor thought). This also may be due to the factor that you may just wanna get this thread/ story started as quickly as possible. Another observation, You seem to use the phrase "He said" quite a bit. You might wanna mix it up a bit. Like if you wanna amplify something, Y'know? An example is, If I was to say (Haha, get it?) be involved in an RP and have a character who was trapped in an instance and post: " Red was trapped. Brown dust and wooden walls surrounded him. His hands were tied to a post behind his back, His eyes covered with a thick black blindfold. He opened his mouth but words could not escape. His voice was hoarse as he filled the room with skepticism 'Hello? Is anybody out there?!'" Not a very good post, but I'm not the one telling a story, right? If instead I had said "He said." 1)It wouldn't make much sense putting it before, I'd have to put it after wards. 2)You wouldn't gather much at all. Saying (Lord, That is a habit.) what I did, Revealed that he didn't know where he was or what to do. Saying (Okay, This is Getting ridiculous) "He said" would mean that he either knew what was going on and was expecting something, or he didn't really care. Its okay to use "He said" ,Just not so many times in a clump, yes? I liked Cats character, also. Just to show I do like somethings. I'm not posting this because I'm trying to insult you in any way, Just because I want you to improve. Your my friend and if I were to say "Great! Good job!" You wouldn't ever improve at all. It was good for a first chapter/post, seeing as you didn't have anything to go by. The beginning is ALWAYS the hardest. I trust you will improve. Can't wait to see how you do next <3333 "All of the top achievers I know are life-long learners... Looking for new skills, insights, and ideas. If they're not learning, they're not growing... not moving toward excellence." -Denis Waitly
Hello sora .
I've never watched it. But my friend Straseeker3 has an RP on it. Jjjjjooooooiiiiinnn please?
Ah xD Do you watch zoids? Or whatever?
