Hah! *Fires "Strip Beam" point-blank at Deb's lower half, shredding her boots and socks* I've got knee guards! (And have you noticed how many guests are watching this? :blink:)
*cricks neck* Heh. Was expecting you to go for the cheap shot like every girl ends up doing. *fires Tickle Beam at Debra* Have you noticed every time you catch me in your room, a pair of your underwear ends up on my head? *removes from head and rubber band snaps it into the open drawers* I...I came to test your security system. Boy, it sucks. :nono:
*already has Debra in bearhug* Okay, 123, GO!
Um...that's a funny story... <_< >_> Wait. What's Xuan doing in here?! :wow:
*equips "Stripping Nozzle" on "Tickle Beam" and takes aim* Oh, I don't know. If you want to fight bare-handed against my weaponry, I don't mind. ;)
*Sets self-patented "Tickle Beam" to "Coma-Inducing" setting* I'm sorry, sweetheart. What was that? *pokes head out of closet with girl's underwear on head* Oh...hi Amber. :sweat:
Bring it on, "girl friend!" :sly: *finishes picking lock* Huh. I thought Amber's security was better than that... *walks in and starts digging through closet*
Ooh. Frisky! :D *Real DF comes in* *stares at evil half in shock* Didn't you learn anything from last night? Stop antagonizing Debra! Like you weren't going to do the same thing! *throws hands up in disgust* I give up. But I agree with her. I think you ARE a bit stupid. *raises an eyebrow* Not to mention perverted. *begins picking Amber's lock* Whatev. *grins at Debra* So, you wanna throwdown? :sly: *starts equipping armor and weapons*
Awww...You're so cute when you're angry. :D
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Your girly side is adorable! :glomp: Okay, I'm done. *heads toward Amber's room again*
So... ...you want our evil sides to fight it out? :sly: Either that or we could just watch the random flashes of data being seared into our eye sockets. Just don't think of yourself as an organic pain-collector racing toward oblivion. :xp:
Hey, girls. How's it happening? :wacko:
OOC: For some reason, Pika_Power's method of insistence kinda reminded me of your style, ICSP. Never budging from your stance no matter what or something like that. :p I say we do what we did, but the judge cuts us off after a certain number of points have been made. If it goes too long, he cuts the arguments off and makes his own decision regardless unless there's a NEW piece of evidence that hadn't been brought up. Because I don't think any of us want to go through another round of "ADD OR DROP" for six pages (2 if you're reading 40 pages per post). It's annoying and wastes all of our time. And NO APPEALS until AFTER Xemnas. Otherwise, our main characters might just get fed up with the whole ordeal and leave the RP.
OOC: Um...so are we waiting for Erkz to accept the charges or is Xelax or Janexna going to start their Cross-Examination? :huh:
Ask me for any other continuity errors... Well, Nodoka's personality has blossomed a bit more after the festival. She's still a bit quiet, but she's no longer nervous around Negi due to her confession during their date. Also, Yue, Chisame and Haruna have all done a Pactio around this time as well. Nodoka and Haruna know that Yue has feelings for Negi. In other words, Nodoka is still quiet, but she's comfortable with talking to Negi face-to-face now. Haruna still teases both Yue and Nodoka because of the love triangle, though. :p Well, Haruna and Chisame both like hanging out at cosplay and manga conventions. (Chisame even more ever since she got her artifact) Yeah. But don't forget that Misora also happens to do this type of stuff as well (just not as often as the twins) Her character has expanded slightly since the Mahorafest arc. She has her own artifact, but not with Negi. She's to Negima as Motoko was to Love Hina. They both come from the same school and use similar techniques. And don't forget about the whole "bird tribe" thing. She does look like an angel when she does that. :) Well, I'd do some research first, but in a whole, I don't see why not. :D
You asked for a critique, so... Hmm...not bad. Could use some touching up on the punctuation. (Paragraph break whenever switching to another person's dialogue) Also when exactly did this take place? Haruna asked if Negi kissed Nodoka (not Nodako). Nodoka already kissed Negi twice, once during the Pactio during the Kyoto arc and the second time she got the courage to do it herself when Negi and Nodoka went on their date in the Mahora Festival arc. Haruna is a manga artist, but she draws up yaoi more than anything else. I don't see her using the "panty shot" bit in her work. Why would Asuna be messing with a smoke bomb in the first place? I don't see her instigating a fight with the Class Rep like that. Ayaka and Asuna are technically close friends, but they do the whole love/hate relationship. If they run into each other, this would be in character. But to literally bring a smoke bomb up to the front door in a hit-and-run bit doesn't seem to portray Asuna correctly. The Setsuna/Konoka part looked to be in character. Good job on that. And finally, the replacement teacher for Class 3-A? Hopefully there's a good explanation for that. Negi's only a teacher because that was the assignment that he was magically bound to after he graduated from his class. Not even the head magus of his school could change that. Unless Negi failed his training or if he has to temporarily deal with other matters outside of Mahora Academy, I don't see how this'll be in canon continuity overall.
Hmm...:sideways: Is this a...good thing?
To be honest, I think he's a bit TOO serious and needs to lighten up at times. That doesn't mean I hate him. But his personality mirrors Cloud or Vincent in more ways than one. Something that I admire about him after KH1 is that he gains the ability to wield the darkness, but at the same time keep his light. Yeah, he's a lot smarter than Sora, but at the same time, he lacks the ability to follow his heart and be random. Another thing I like about him are those damn abs of his. I mean, geez. I know he's virtual and all, but they remind me a lot of GX's. Where's he find the time to do those numerous crunches that are required to have a washboard like that? :wacko: So all in all, no I don't hate him. :p
