agreed . lol. agreed . agreed . ...agreed . hey everyone.. I agree! :lolface: *leaves*
...that's lovely.
What's a 'sun'? :lolface:
Xaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaale D: You got a new name. For some reason it hurt my head when I seen it. D:
I laughed... wow.
:3 I'm willing to be offended. :lolface:
...Sweet :lolface:
(OOC: ..I'm getting seriously tired of this childish banter. I'll do my last post before we move a few days on or whatever.) Larxene shook her head, growling slightly as her kunai faded from her knuckles. How could one nobody change so damn much? And as for Cloud.. What a hypocrite. Bad mouthing the ones who, for one, were higher than him, secondly, could kill him there and then, and thirdly, were in the same organisation of which he was expression such bad taste for. All of a sudden, both him and Demyx seemed to be betraying them, but in a discreet way. They were slowly unsticking themselves from the organisation and all they stood for. Looking at Axel, They Nymph seen the portrayal of what she felt in his eyes. So she wasn't the only one thinking similar to this about the two. Responding to the Flurry's comments on what was a terrible moment for her completely, she nodded in agreement. "That will never happen again; as of tonight, I am finished with holding back for the likes of an over-emotional wreck who uses a mere ex-warrior or whatever to defend him. What a fool that man was to mess with us. Who does he think he is? Does it register in his mind that we are two of the greatest fighters of the organisation?" Shaking her head again, she leant back against the cold wall behind her. Her eyes closed, imagining such a world where none of this idiotic rubbish was to occur.
...this is insanely stupid. It seems that wherever you turn here, there is popularity dominating a certain thread or something. urgh. pisses me off. Xaale ftw.
Thankyou very much for your critique. It's all being taken onboard and I totally appreciate it. I'm going to post more momentarily, and it will be slightly smaller compared to the opening chapter :3 Haha, yeah I don't really like the whole cliche thing, but, I didn't actually intend for Wolfe to look pretty at all. hmm. I suppose that's either a positive or a negetive I must look out for in further writing. I had a vast amount of pleasure in writing about popularity. I'm glad you enjoyed it [: x Okay, on the paragraphs.. I'm unsure as to what you mean by that, but I will check back through and try to relate to the point you have made here. Thankyou for pointing it out x As for the grammar mistake(s), they were for the talk of an average teen. I wouldn't expect any of the characters involved in this, or the next chapter to have proper speech and word pronunciations. Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it! [: ...ok. o_O
I reffered to it in a past-tense D: Someone eated it, I think.
uhm.... 7/10?
It's slightly different in the sense that it is more of a social networking site, whereas twitter is more of a promotional site to pass information to the public rather than just adding them to your friends list. Also, twitter is less of a "picture, comment and private message" type of website, such as MySpace and Facebook. Until you look into detail, you are oblivious to these differences.
*hugs* thanks! :3
OKAY. ...I just realised how stereotypical one person can get in one post. :lolface: Whatever happened to individuality?
:3 thankyou! It's only the first chapter, and soon the second one will come :'D
linkety link link! :3 thanks! It's kinda long..
No ****ing way!!!!! 8D how awesome is that! I'm good. I just posted up the first chapter of my story in the creative corner section. Check it...
Larxene isn't the average girl to be in an rpg game. She wasn't the normal "Oh hi! Welcome to the castle-blahblahblahblah" She was always to the point, and wasn't one to make one's life easy when playing the game. The basic stereotype when looking at girls in games is that they are either hyper and girly or quiet and don't bother at all. Larxene is like the new breed of an rpg female. Get over it =P lol
hello there stranger :3 how're you?
