Something about how some hormone levels do drop and some do rise, just like when girls PMS there's a substantial drop in a certain hormone that causes them to have periods(I think). I mean fluctuations happen, but your body regulates it all so it can achieve homeostasis still. Well to me, sandwiches mean sandwiches. But I had lunch already so I won't visit. Tchyeah right.
-_- Why are you doing this?
......<_< You think I don't know that? Thanks for this. I would join in the bread party if there are croissants cause those things are the bomb.
Well, my biology teacher did say that guys do have hormone fluctuations like girls. And maybe I will come back, Makaze. Just try to bring me my food a bit faster. Word on the street is this place has the best sandwiches.
What? Of course not. Only white people do that. I came here for food. And if I get bad service I would just phone up all my friends and complain to them about it. (Lololololol)
Bread makes you fat. (Lolololol)
Dude I waited in line for a whole day before going somewhere else to get my food. >=( I was starving by the time I got to eat.
I can vouch for this. Well, not nearly as well as I could, but I can vouch that this is true a good 85% of the time. Lols such a spelling and grammatical nazi.
What're you talking about? You never gave me that burger and soda I ordered.
Stop clowning around. Yeah really. It's not yuri if one person is not a girl.
The highest class of that certain job.
Makaze's kind of a tricky person.
No, he'd be your incubus. -_-
Man, why do you worry me so? -_-
Makaze isn't a temptress. He's a temptor. He's an evil demon who's got a way with words and hearts. Or instead of hearts, boners. And apparently Saxima's his partner in crime. -_-
This. Is like Heaven. Why did i not find this sooner. Thank you Jayn for being a genius as you always are. Played By: Firekeyblade Name: Angel Age: 18 Gender: Female Appearance: Spoiler Bio: Angel can be fairly quiet, but if she gathers herself, she can act somewhat outgoing if she ignores the awkwardness of a situation and becomes relaxed in it. She has a fascination with music and tries to be a pretty nice and good person or at least a neutral one. She tries to be fair with people and after realizing that most of the world is pretty neutral anyway, with people not really leaning towards bad or towards good, she's trying to make a greater effort to be a good active person. Though she can seem fairly caring, in heart she can be equally apathetic about a many different things. She's still trying to deal with that. Because of this she also procrastinates a lot. It's a work in progress. She also looks up to her older brother. Cause he's cool. And she's not. She can be smart at times, but also equally clueless and naive. Also stubborn. She likes being the comedian of the group. Played By: Firekeyblade Name: Andrew Age: 22 Gender: Male Appearance: Spoiler Bio: Andrew is just about the nicest and coolest guy you'll ever meet. But he's only cool about 10% of the time. The rest of the time he's a goof and pretty clumsy too. However, despite being of age to drink, he chooses not to. He's a pretty good person and tries his best to help people out if he gets a chance to. Though he and Angel had some issues growing up, they're cool with each other now. Since starting college and finishing college, he hasn't seen much of Angel, but knows she's doing well. He's a fairly smart person and not nearly as naiive as Angel. Unlike Angel, he's mostly sincere with his heart when he cares and he tends to be more studious than Angel.
Can't get away.
Well I thought you'd get irritated with all the corrections. But yeah, I understand about typing fast and your mind filling in the gap. I suspected that's what happened a good majority of the time. It's all right man, I'm glad to help. It was even a little fun, reading back. I'm looking forward to what's in the void and what'll happen with Chi. See what kind of hero he'll be. (Lols I made a rhyme.) Anyway, I'm glad to help and looking forward to it. I may even try and read back over What's part, though I doubt there'll be much correcting there. Took me a while to finish Chapter 1 off and on. XD Also, my mind was envisioning the Plaza completely wrong. I thought it would be more....pretty and decorated? I kept thinking of Twilight Town or Traverse Town. All that empty space....XD never crossed my mind. But thanks for the visual references, What. They help a lot, believe me.
Absooool i"m so sorry i didn't realize you were here.
Sorry in advance. With beads of sweat running down my brow, I started to breathe heavily The floor was cracking and small shards of it had were already missing. Uhhh.... And then the sound of shattering came once again and the floor cracked more and an even bigger piece of it fell through but it didn’t fall through to the floor below.-Add some commas? I called out as the floor before started to fall apart under me.-Should the "before" really be there? as if they were being pulled down to the surface like iron to a magnet and gently his feet touched ground.- Maybe also add a "the" before ground too. Or not if it doesn't suit your style and flow. and as he looked at the darkness flying away He turned his head to the right behind him, but there was nobody there he walked forward and glared at the staff in amazement.-Is this the right word? Instead of power that was limited by your body like strength, waiting for the voice to call again, but there was silence-Try to put more commas before "but"s. lose his balance and fall off of the platform-Or just change "of" into "off". Either way works. quake this time, causing the boy to tumble off the tablet and onto the platform-Eh. You could try putting a comma there if you want to. [realizing that the stained glass was shattering and falling to the depths enveloped by the darkness.-No comma. Deleted comma.] I think I change my mind about this. There will be times when you have to fight by surprise, but the boy’s body Suddenly three dark spots-No "a". Deleted "a". looked like ink stains-Plural spots. Plural stains. appear on the area around the boy-"In" might work better. Taking in a deep breath, staff and the trembling began to stop attack, but before any of them hitting each of the creatures in the head started to pull him down while he struggled, trying to pull himself free.-Deleted "and".
