Gah, what is this?! D8 I'm seriously gonna miss you, you're one of the most cool and entertaining people on here. Take care, good luck with life and school. *waves Nordic flag high*
I kno, rite xP Yeah, I was a soprano in my high-school choir, and I've practiced a lot on my own too. S&C fits my range a lot better than Make a...
How about this one? It's a fairly challenging song, but it could sound amazing for a choir, especially if we get the harmonies down. Spoiler: Instrumental version
Jag vet inte varför, och jag can inte prata Spanksa min själv... Så jag ska tala Svenska, eftersom den är språkit vi måste läsa i gymnasiet på Finland.
I was wondering that if we have another romance challenge this season, if some of the couples were same sex ones? It'd be interesting to see how the contestants would handle this, whether they treated the characters the same way than in a opposite sex couple, or if they went all yaoi/yuri fan-girl/boy on us. *gets off soapbox*
Thanks so much, I'm really happy to hear that ^.^ I do actually remember you, even though we haven't really talked.
Ahahahaa, I sent the reply to myself first >.< Well yeah, some guys can, but either they're born lucky or they've trained for years to be able to...
Well yeah, some guys can, but either they're born lucky or they've trained for years to be able to do that. Haha, it is a lot of fun for me too,...
You're a guy, aren't you? Deep is good for a guy!
Oh wow, I'm really happy to hear that, it means a lot to me! You've got a great voice too, from what I can gather.
I totally did google it, and yeah, it's Kuja from Final Fantasy IX.
I'll probably notice anyways, but could you shoot me a VM when new parts open up?
*flails* This is seriously gorgeous, everyone did an amazing job. That ending was great, that was a really good idea Sforzato. And I can't get over the harmony you did in our duet Jayn, my jaw dropped when I heard it the first time. <3<3<3
I've actually lost my voice, but I'd still like to participate... If I can't sing by Wednesday I'll drop out, though ;.; I'd like these lines: This is Halloween, this is Halloween. This is Halloween, everybody make a scene. Round that corner, man hiding in the trash can Something's waiting now to pounce, and how you'll ... [KH2man13, What?] Skeleton jack might catch you in the back. [KH2ma Edit: Nevermind, some of those where taken already >.< I'll have whatever's left then xD
This might be the 37.5% of Finnishness in me talking, but personally I prefer reindeer over regular deer...
Can I be your negotiator/gunner/ninja assassin?
7/22 Damn you randomly choosing a triangle I didn't recognize, damn you!
Firekeyblade: Spoiler Content wise, this was an excellent post. I could really feel the nervousness, and the eventual relief. The forgetting to count bit was a nice touch, again it was something I could relate to. The post was fairly short (and definitely sweet), but you didn't even try to separate them into paragraphs, in stead opting to one big one. Maybe it's just my writing style, but I could've easily put that in four to six paragraphs. At the very least, start a new one whenever a new person begins to speak/think. But this was still a very pleasant post to read, nice job! P Spoiler Your prose is absolutely gorgeous, and when it's condensed into just a few paragraphs, it really suits well into the roleplaying aspects of the challenge. Again, I feel like it could have been separated a bit more, and it might be a tad too long for this challenge, but it definitely wasn't the longest one. Your characters are still wonderfully bizarre, and I'm starting to be able suspend disbelief whenever I read your posts. I was actually feeling quite sorry for KHV-tan by the end, and I was shaking my internet arm in anger towards Faust. The scenario was interesting, something you could only pull off with your characters, so you're definitely making the most of them. I'm gonna cut off my rambling now by saying that it's gonna be very interesting to see how your characters will interact with others. Maka Spoiler First of all, nice Kingdom Hearts shout out. I'm really enjoying your writing style, it works well with your character. You had a nice scenario too, and I liked the way you kinda 'lampshaded' the unreliability of the bad guys' plans. Unfortunately, I definitely felt that this was a bit too long for the challenge. You spaced the paragraphs correctly though, so props for that, even though they didn't fit into the two paragraphs that Jayn specified in the challenge rules. I guess my advise for you is to learn how you can condense and edit out even just the slightly unneeded parts. What I've found helpful is reading through my post/essay/whatever I'm working on at the moment over and over again, each time taking out things that aren't essential, until it fits whatever limit I've been given, and if I had the time, re-writing the whole thing. I dunno if that'll work for you, but it's definitely saved me at times. I still definitely liked your post, nice job. Midnight Spoiler That 'je ne sais quoi' I talked about in the last challenge? You definitely found it. This was absolutely charming, and a lovely, simple look at a very exciting moment. There was no real unnecessary, in stead the moment of panic felt natural and not tacked on. I was holding my breath at the point where her parachute didn't open. You kept it fairly short, so no real complaints in that department. It was definitely sweet, so all in all, I think you did a great job with the challenge. Keep the good work up! Marushi Spoiler You chose a very interesting scenario, and I'm actually starting to like it more and more as I've been re-reading these. Like with Maka, it was a nice twist that the character's motivations were technically against their actions (that they were forced into, of course). Your character is very sweet, and I'm starting to root for him. But again, even if this was just the last part of all that you wrote, it still felt a little bit too long for me. I suggest you go read the advise I gave to Maka about condensing posts, as I find the same situation applies to both of you. But overall, it was a good post. Fuzzeh Spoiler This too was a nice, simplistic take on the challenge. Overall, I liked your writing style, but that last paragraph had me a bit confused, it took my flu-addled brain a couple reads to understand what was going on. Your characters motivations were odd, but in a good way. There's something slightly anime/manga-esque about him, which gives him a nice flare. I'm not sure if I'd like him if I met him in real life, but reading about him was definitely interesting. Nice job! Brit Spoiler This was again a nice, simple post. And quite possibly one of the shortest ones, so congrats for sticking with the challenge. This was most definitely one of the sweetest posts. Good job with keeping a potentially melodramatic scenario subtle, yet emotional. I don't really have any critique for you D8 Your prose is lovely, and you stuck to the challenge well. Great work! Ace Spoiler The music added an absolutely wonderful flare to your post, that was a really clever idea. Your character was much easier to handle when he was alone, and I really hope you'll be able to make Ruby distinct from him. Good job with tying this to the previous challenge, and good job with slightly altering the character, while staying true to him. This too, I found was too long for this challenge though. Because I'm wired on flu medicine right now, I'm feeling too lazy to repeat what I said earlier, so also please read Maka's critique, specifically the part about condensing posts. It's great to see you improving, though, keep it up! Sorry that these are so disjointed and repetitive (and late, again ;-; ), I'm a bit sick at the moment and the meds are making me feel weird X_X Again, if you've got questions, shoot me a PM/VM!
DUUUUDE, WELCOME TO ADULTHOOD 8D It doesn't feel any different than before, apart from the occasional identity/age-crisis. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
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