Kouri turned to Nyoko, "Nyoko, have you ever heard of limits?" she asked. Genservant looked quizzicaly at her, "you think we could do a trinity type?" he asked. Malum looked at Pheonix, "we need to end this now Pheonix, if we let them get away it will take years to track them all down!"
Kouri sensed the lighting bolt, "Genservant, Nyoko!" she cried out, and made a wall of ice, it would only hold off the lightning for a second. Genservant leaped into action, flame-teleporting him, Nyoko, and Kouri out of the bolt's path. Malum was shocked, "Damit!" he said, before summoning 10 black fire dusks to aid him, "that isn't going to work Pheonix, we need to combat them directly!" he said.
Genservant grinned, "she's right, if you get her angry you might as well be fighting all of the origional Orginization XIII, at once," he said. Kouri stepped, forward, "I'm sorry for doubting you, Nyoko, but you must understand how important our mission is," she said. Malum stood up, sensing something, no, it can't be! He thought, "Pheonix! They are splitting up, this will be our last chance for years to attack all of them at once!"
Chapter Eight:Leon looked out upon the snowy hillside, hmm... Cloud's vision isn't what it used to be, I guess that is just part of getting older, he thought, then he looked closer at the hill. He noticed tiny black spot on it, “Cloud, look at that black spot, that is where the crest of the hill is,†he said. Cloud stared out at the hill, “but it's moving!†he exclaimed. Leon looked closer again, it was moving! Then three more appeared, no.. it can't be. He turned to the three armed troops in the shuttle, “men, we have heartless!†he shouted. The men instantly scrambled into action, two of them jumped out the open side door, as the third ran to the front of the shuttle to tell the pilot to take off. * * * Nazomi felt the shuttle lurch as it took off, what are they doing? She wondered to herself as the shuttle zoomed up into the sky. * * * Cloud looked after the ship, watching as it made a pass over the heartless, “Leon, why are there heartless down here? I thought that intelligence said the enemy hadn't landed yet,†he said. “I don't know, Cloud, I just don't know,†was Leon's only reply. Cloud continued to watch the shuttle. * * * Favian dropped Alan on the soft snow, “you know, you are really lucky to have a friend like me, anyone else would have left you for dead,†he said. Nakushita followed closely behind, “um... you know that he is unconscious, right?†he asked. Favian sighed, “of course I know, I was talking to myself,†he said. Nakushita just followed in silence. Super sorry for the long wait, I had computer trouble every time I got close to completing this chapter, then I would go and write a completly new version of it.
Kouri stalked out of the shack, "it is too dangerous! Only me and Genservant go!" she said. Genservant sighed, "Kouri, she is only half a nobody as well, it would be no more dangerous than it is for you or me," he said. Kouri stopped, "well that changes things."
Oh, Anime, I love it! I agree with what Night said, this story is a-maze-ing! From the Characteristics to your writing style, I loved it, I saw little to none Grammar errors, with all of those things added up, I think you rival Destiny Force as a writer. (and that is a LOT comeing from me, I practicaly worship DF's stories.)
Genservant sighed, "Nyoko, how many times do I have to tell you? Kouri is my sister, no-one is more important than you Nyoko, I want you to come, Sakura, Hades, and Cooper too," he said. Kouri called from the shack, "They can't come!"
Genservant sighed, "I know, but Kouri wouldn't have even woken up if it wasn't important, let alone come to find me, if it is as important as she says it is then I have to go, it may not have an effect on this war, but it is still extreamly important," he said saddly again.
OCC: Umm... you got that in backwards order. BIC: Genservant sighed, "I'm not shure exactaly what, all I know is that it is far outside of known space, meaning Kouri and I have to leave, and I have no idea when we'll be back, probably years," he said saddly.
Vexen contenued to work vigorusly on the machine, who knew how long it would take to complete? Xigbar just looked at Zexion, "what do you mean?" he asked.
Genservant turned to face Cooper, "yes, Kouri and I have to go on a journey, and she says we need to do it alone, that we can't have any distractions," he said, "and Nyoko, I'm sorry, I love you, but it is more important that even I can understand."
OCC: Pheonix and Malum, and Lexah are in a different place, and my other character is not about to die, unless something unforeseen comes up, XD BIC: Kouri practiced useing her element, makeing small ice crystals, then flinging them at different targets around the room, making shure to shatter them before they actualy hit anything. Genservant sighed, "you don't have to be jealous of Kouri, she is my sister, no-one would ever come before you Nyoko," he said. Malum still bowed to Pheonix.
Genservant walked over to Nyoko, "Nyoko, listen to me," he began. Malum looked expectantly up to Pheonix. Kouri sat on a chair in the shack, and waited.
Malum grinned, "I am glad to hear that sir, I wanted to know if you would give me command of a small force, the group of neutrals that we have been dealing with are begining to form an aliance with the rejects, and I want to put an end to the problems of my brother and sister once and for all." Kouri looked to Genservant, "say your good byes, I will be in that shack over there," she said, and walked into the small wooden shack. Genservant turned to Nyoko.
I have to go, sorry.
I hated Chain of memories, the card system was stupid, I'd play the best slight I could, then the blasted enemy would play a zero, it ticked me...
I know that, I have finished KH1 and KH2, and I gave up on the hand held games because I absolutly suck at those. (I didn't know if you meant the...
in makeing it?
Malum still bowed to Pheonix, "master, I know that you have surrendered to the enemy, I know why as well, but I have one favour to ask of you before you leave," he said, still bowing. Kouri stepped closer, "you know why I am here, Genservant," she said. Genservant sighed, "but does it have to be now?" he asked. Kouri looked into his eyes, "yes, I am sorry, but you must fulfill your destiny," she said.
What do you mean by what part of KH?
