...Way to make this hard for me... Hmm. I was thinking of maybe sudden closure? It's kinda like a cadence in music, and what you did was more imperfect than perfect. ...You don't play music, do you? Well, if you could make it seem a little more finished than you already have, it would be better. I'm not saying that it isn't good already - you just have to work on the ending a little bit. Hope I didn't fuck with your head too much <3
Guitar and synth ;D I play all sorts of music on my guitar. I'm gaining an A* in my Music exam this year on performance alone, so I guess I'm pretty good.
I liked this a lot; there was a lot of emotion in there, which leaves me guessing that you yourself have the dreaded block ;D What did disappoint me was the ending to this poem - it didn't really seem to close it, and left it hanging in the air, if you understand what I mean. Just a thought ;D <3~
...Were you eating some form of nuclear cheese, or is junk food in your country that bad?
;o Thanks hunny <3 The irony song. Ironic dreams on dead memories, Ah, how bittersweet irony sings its praise, And birds chirping loving melodies, With old withered faces ending warm summer days. Chapped lips moisturised from the fresh fallen snow, Young tongues tapping to words too long, A mother goose waddling with ducklings in tow, All in rhythm to the irony song. Slapdash paving lining the road, A lovely log cabin, Healthy abode, Biting wit mockery lining the streets, Taunting the pain of sourly trodden feet. Ironic dreams on dead memories, Ah, how bittersweet irony sings its praise, And birds chirping loving melodies, With old withered faces ending warm summer days.
My hair? I feckin lurv ma hair ! Do you have any idea how good it tastes? :B|:
No, you must understand, I own nothing of the valuable kind D:
...I can't see where I fit in, and I don't know whether I want to or not. ._.
One year in december for me. I've only been active since February, though. ...I'm only a child.
Avvy? What avvy? >> << aw, snaps, you found me out.
And what gave you that crazy idea? ;D
Grapes. No joke, I read them, and I linked all three names to green, seedless grapes.
top ten~ Spoiler Taking back sunday - Sink into me Owl City - Fireflies Owl City -Rainbow veins Limp Bizkit - Break Stuff Apocolyptica - I'm not jesus Just Jack - The Day I DIed Nine Inch Nails - Closer The Temper Trap - Sweet Disposition Goo Goo Dolls - Iris Nickleback - Next contestant ....How diverse.
Holy shit. ._.
It most certainly is Patrick, and thankyou ;D Haley. ... Omnomnomnomnom<3 you're gorgeous.
<3 No, he's a Maximillion Pionus. He looks just like yours, though. :/gasp: Parrots ftw.
LastquestionsLastquestionsLastquestions How are you today? Who has annoyed you the most in this thread? Do you like spongebob squarepants? You're going to a desert Island. What/who do you take? Do you have a problem with me touching your buns? My hands aren't dirty, and I'm sure you can always buy more if you want to make a sammich. ...Would you like a sammich? Did/do you ever watch... Cartoon Network? Courage The Cowardly Dog? Fosters Home for Imaginary Friends? Powerpuff girls? Loony Tunes? Doctor Who? Have you ever eaten... Pancakes with no syrup? Pickled Eggs? Pickled onions? Food of the pickled kind? A burger from Burger king? Which one? A raw Carrot? Waffles and Cream? A Krabby Patty? McDonalds FishBurger? The confines of your nasal passages? Have you ever drank... A McDonalds Milkshake? A Zumo Smoothie? A Bubbles Milkshake? A White Moccha Latte from Starbucks? A Shot of Chocolate from Thorntons? Spaggetti and Meatballs blended? Any form of Bodily Fluids? Have you ever been to... Mexico? Spain? Canada? England? Mars? Venus? Jupiter? ....Uranus? :lolface: If not, then, would you like to go to these places? I wish I could have whored this thread out more... Sorry! It's been fun, though. I might squeeze a few more in tonight, depending on whether you reply or not :< Ciao hunny ! <3
Watching Nick [spongebob of course] and wasting my life playing Oasis songs on my guitar. JOLLY GOOD.
Oh-ho-ho-ho. Pretty glasses, pretty hat, and a pretty fraction of a face. <3 You suit curly hair more than straight, Rissy. I has a shirt like that one ;O Pretty. Meh. I look kinda tired on this.. =/ Spoiler
Ohmygoodness. Thankyou ;D Didn't expect to win. No lie. I might enter this month, ....I'm just surprised right now and I might need to take a nap to recover o:
