wait minute, the story is coming to a end man and it's to good for that. may i ask when the next update is coming???? do you think that you will start a second story or do you wait and see what's happening? sorry i'm to energetic and curious for my own good, again
thanks and if you wait a few minutes you can read chapter 2 Chapter 2: the meteor “Oke, we are on the beach” Wakka said: check your stuff. “Wakka, your got all the stuff” Sora said. “Ah, you right” Wakka said with a nervous smile on his face: here. As he throw Sora stuff to sora he said: you need to keep the air bottle by you all the time don’t want you to drown. “I will be fine” Sora said: looks like I got every thing. “Good” Wakka said as he looked to Tidus: do you got every thing. “Yeah” Tidus said: but why do we need a food? “We are going down into the sea” Wakka said: you will need energy for this, so you need to eat. “Can we go” Sora said: I want to see the meteor. “Don’t be in such a hurry” Wakka said: we need to wait for the sun to hit the water for the island or you can’t see a thing. And you said a minute a go “when were on the beach check your stuff so we can go, don’t ya” Sora said a bit angry. “Ya, I said that but I thought that was 9 O’clock and it is a Quarter for 9 so wait” Wakka said. “How big do you think it is” Tidus ask to change the subject. “Big in of for you my friend” Wakka said as he looked to the water. “Looks pretty cold the water I mean” Sora said. “It’s cold Sora” Wakka said: but don’t worry as we find the meteor you will forget that. The three boys looked over the sea and saw how the sea when’d from dark blue to light blue. “It looks like it’s time to explore” Wakka said with a smile on his face. “Here we go” sora said as the boys started to run into the sea. “Wait’ Wakka yelled. The two other boy looked at wakka and ask what wrong. “We forget to say the prayer’ Wakka said as he scratch his head. “What prayer?” Sora ask: what are your talking about Wakka. “The blitz prayer that we shown you” Wakka said. “Let me think” Sora said: oh, yeah you should do the prayer for a blitzball game or swimming in the sea. “That’s right” Tidus said. The three boys did the prayer and started to diving for the meteor. Sora looked underwater for the first time and saw all sorts of fish, coral beds as far as his eyes could see and five dolphins playing around some fish. He looked for the meteor but his eyes could only see the fishes and beautiful coloured coral. This is beautiful he thought are some fish swim around him. “Wait a minute” he thought to himself: where are Wakka and Tidus? Sora swam back to the surface and looked around him. “Nice Sora’ he heard Wakka say: that were 17 minutes underwater and it looked like you can last longer. “Thanks” Sora said: but where is Tidus? “Oh, his still underwater” Wakka started: we started looking for strains fish movements and it looks like we hit gold, but I’m not sure if it is the meteor we look for, I think it is a old shipwreck but maybe I’m wrong. “So what are we waiting for” Sora said: let’s get diving. “You read my mind Sora” Wakka said with a smile. Sora and Wakka dived back down. As Tidus saw Sora and Wakka coming he seined something. The first word was big or round, but as Tidus seined the rest it was: there is a big rock that blocks a hole in the ship about 16,4 feet from them. Wakka seined to go to the rock. The three looked at the rock and saw that they can’t move it, at that point Wakka looked in his stuff and pulled something out his bag. Tidus pulled Sora along to a save distant. Wakka throw it and swum away. As the ball hit the rock it exploded and the three boys where pushed into a rock. As soon as the explosion was over Wakka and Tidus took Sora to the surface. “Sora, you oke?” Wakka asked concerned. “Yeah” Sora said carefully as he felled pain through his body: Wakka what was that? “A mini bomb” Wakka said: there for emergencies. “That was one shockwave” Sora said. “Shockwaves are must stronger in the water” Tidus said: we should have warned you, sorry Sora. “Don’t worry” Sora said: I’m still a live and in one piece. “Tell me if you ready to go to the ship” Wakka said as he looked at the sky. Sora took his time to stretch some muscles. “Oke” Sora said: I’m ready to explore the ship. “Good” Tidus said as he saw something: eh, I thing I see something. “Me to and it’s a boot” Wakka said: time to dive. The three boys quickly got underwater and into the ship. From the ship they saw that two persons jump into the water and dove to the ship. “Not now” Wakka thought as he seined to Sora and Tidus to get there weapons. The three were ready to attack the two persons when they saw it was Kairi and Selphie how were swimming to them. Wakka seined to put down there weapons and swum out side the ship to the girls he seined the girls to go the surface. “You” Selphie started as she pointed to Wakka: I know enough, I will tell you on the boot Kairi, come on. Kairi said a Quick hi to sora and went with Selphie. “What was that about?” Tidus asked with strange face: did I mist something. “She’s still angry about the blitz accident” Wakka said: I hit her with a blitzball that’s all. “One good thing about this” Sora said: they didn’t see the ship. “That’s right” Tidus said: and now for the real exploring. The three searched the ship but couldn’t find something. “Noting here” Sora thought as he saw something red, he looked out the window and saw a trail and… he couldn’t belief his eyes a gummiship. He Quickly put some sand on the window so Wakka and Tidus won’t see it. “Tonight I’m going back to see the gummi” he thought to himself. As sora turn Wakka stood behind him and seined that Tidus found something and that he need to come. As Sora and Wakka swum to Tidus, Sora needed air so as quick as he could he used he air bottle. Wakka clapped his hand and seined that he had lest 22 minutes with out breathing. Sora shaked his head and swum to Tidus and helped him with a chest. “Looks good” Sora thought: I wonder what’s inside. Wakka seined to get back to the beach. The three boy’s took the chest from the ship to the beach. that was chapter 2 hope you like it
this is my first story so I hope you like it. Background: it’s 3 months sinds sora, kairi and riku got back and started continuing there ‘normal’ lives. Sora and riku started challenging wakka and tidus. Kairi ‘s hanging out with selphie and if the 3 are together they would learn kairi how to use the keyblade. Chapter 1: Blitzball Sora started his day as any other day: stand up, almost breaks his neck to get into the shower, comes out the shower put on some clothes, eats, goes outside but goes back in side and brush his tooth. After he brushed his tooth he went to the store to buy a newspaper. “Hmm” Sora said as he read the newspaper: there is not must going on these days. The only thing that is interesting is a dog with 101 puppy’s, but no new movies, no new books and noting else to do then training, I better go to Riku maybe he knows some thing else to do. On his way to Riku Sora saw Kairi. “Hi Kairi” Sora said with a smile on his face. “Morning sleepy head” Kairi said with a smile: look like you haven’t sleep. “Not at all its to warm, so I can’t sleep” Sora said. “I will let you in a secret” Kairi said: you want to know what it is? “Yeah” Sora said: come on Kairi tell me. “It’s a fan” Kairi said: they keep you cool if you turn them on. “Hahaha Kairi” Sora said sarcastic: but you have a point, but I have to go to Riku, see ya Kairi. “Bye sleepy head” Kairi said as she walked to Selphie. ‘Gimme a break will ya’ sora said to Kairi as he runs to Riku’s house. As soon as he saw Riku’s house he stopped running, he walked to the front door and pushed the bell. He waited a few sec but nobody opened the door. “Strange Riku is always home or with me” he said as he started to think: oh, yeah that’s right Riku is by his grandma for her birthday. As Sora walked home he saw Wakka and Tidus playing blitzball. Strange I newer tried to play blitzball thought Sora and so he walked to Wakka and Tidus. “Hi” Sora said and instantly he heard Wakka and Tidus said hi back. “Wakka” Sora asked: can you teach me how to play blitzball? As soon that Wakka heard it he said “yes I can” and his eyes sparked like a 1000 stars. Sora learned to play blitzball and saw that there are some moves he could use for fighting heartless. “Man I never thought that I could hold my breath for so long” Sora said: this could be use full some time. “That was nothing” Wakka said: to be a real blitzballplayer you need to hold you breath for 1 hour. “Man that’s long I only made 10 minutes” Sora said: how long can your two hold your breath? “We can hold it for 35 minutes” Wakka said: but you did great you just go you first training and you hold your breath for 10 minutes, most hold it for 2 minutes, so you did great, but it’s getting late we better go. “Oke, see ya later and you to Tidus” Sora said. “Ya, see ya and don’t mind Tidus he lost his voice” Wakka said: don’t forget to practise your breathing. “Oke, I won’t” Sora said as he walk home: oh, now I know why I’m so hungry it’s 8 o’clock. As soon as Sora got home he made something to eat. “Maybe I should go training in the sea after I finished my meal” thought Sora. As Sora eat his meal his mom came down and told him to clean his room. “But mom” Sora started: I have to practice my breathing. “Your breathing” Sora’s mom recalled: what are you talking about. “It’s for blitzball mom” Sora tried to explain. “Blitzball???” Sora’s mom asked confused: I don’t care if the world exploded just clean up your room, I mean I can’t see the floor so clean up your room. “Yes mom” Sora said as he walked up the stare to his room . As Sora walked into his room he said: man, is this my room how can I sleep in this, mom’s right you can’t see the floor. As Sora cleaned his room he saw a box. “Hmm…” Sora said while his looking to the box: I know the box but I can’t remember what’s in it? Sora opened the box and saw that al his keychains where in the box. “Yes, I didn’t lost them” Sora said while he looked at everyone: hmm.. it’s probably a good idea to put them on the wall. When Sora was finished with the keychains, he looked up to the wall and all the memories of his adventure filled up his head. As he looked on the ground he saw something. He picked it up and said: a gummi, how did this came here, all the gummi block we got went to Donald and Goofy, hmm… strange. Sora looked at the clock and said: 12 o’clock, man now I can’t train any more. I better go to bed so I can train early. The next morning started as any other but instead going to Riku, Sora when’d to Wakka. “Morning wakka” Sora said. “Oi Sora” Wakka started: do ya heard the news? “New?” Sora asked: there is news, about what Wakka? “About a meteor” Wakka said: it crashed in to the sea near the island. “A meteor” Sora said: that is cool, so when do we go? “As soon as Tidus comes, ya” Wakka said: it will be a test for your breathing and a adventure. “Hey” Tidus said with a strange voice. “Got the stuff?” Wakka asked. “Yeah” Tidus said as he dropped the stuff. “Good we can go now” Wakka said. “Wait” Sora said: what for stuff is it? “I will have to kill you if I tell you” Wakka said: just kidding it’s Blitzball training stuff this here are weights use for swim training, a air bottle for breath training and some other things for exploring underwater. “So can we go now?” Tidus asked. “Ya lets go, to the boot’s” Wakka said: we will use the boot’s to go to the island then we make the final preparations and then we go looking for the meteor and do some exploring and blitz training, got it. At the same time Tidus and Sora said: got it. On that the three when’d to there boot’s and headed to the island. On the way to the island Sora ask: hey, Wakka do you think we can get to the meteor, I mean aren’t there all kind of people there? “Got a point there” Wakka said: but did you forgot that it’s vacation, every one goes away on vacation even the news reporters that’s why there is so little news. “Oke” Sora said: look, where almost at the island. “Good” Wakka said: when were on the beach check your stuff so we can go. “Oke” Tidus said. please comment it and if you find spelling errors plz tell so I can fix it and special thanks to ObsessedWithSora for helping
nice and long. just like i ordered it. sorrie, that i'm not so energetic i had to work 16 hours so my energie is gone
question: is it me or do only girls and i come here and read the story???????
I 'm back and i'm to late for the update :cryinganime:, but is is a good one :). I went WTF on the first part but that was a really good part. keep it up ObsessedWithSora
thanks, and don't worry i will be back saterday and if i got the energy i will sent you a message and some good news my pm workes at last
good update, but i wanna see kairi's ficht with Chaylie
don't be i'm to energetic about going on vacation i'm doing everything to get it of my mind i played KH2 3 times this day, i run to many miles rond the house and i'm soaked to the bone because it rained like hell, but gotta go kick some heartless how take my stuff * summons a keyblade and get's his stuf back * so that's done but i'm going now or my parents will take my computer and i can't stop them with a keyblade ps: can you sent a pm to me i want to know if it works if not i don't know what wrong
stil a nice chapter but as you said a not really very eventful hope that the next update will be eventful i was a little disaponted but i was expecting to must must be because i go on vacation saterday i 'm to energetic for my own good now
oke, AMAZING idea hm... sounds good so we can expect the update today or tomorrow or am i having high expections??? man, my English going bad
i know what the probleem was : - Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators this was on now i turned it off you would be able to sent a message to me and how thit your dance exam go?
i just got a idea and sent it to ya and i hope you get over the complete halt
oke and good luck with your dance exam i'm gonna go pack for my vacation Saturday
my i ask when the next update is coming????
lol, ya that was it * goes away and comes back* so fixed that
i know why you can't sent a message back you need to sent first then you see you can't sent it scroll down you will see a option: Send message to users even if they are not on your buddy list. klik on that and you can sent a message
ideas sent
hey, welcome back and how was your vacation? i will try to think on some ideas. i will sent you them as soon as i can think of some
nice chapter, and you say it a filler. it's just part of the story
