That scream must be Zexion, discovering Xigbar and Luxord has filled his room with cocoa puffs. lol Just kidding...but seriously, this is good...can't wait for you to finish this~!
Looks interesting so far...I can't wait to buy it! :) And I'm glad to see some new games for the PS3...lately I've only seen new games for the PS2...
Well, you know I'm there for you...*hugs* Reading Chaser's poem might help and if not, I'll write you a poem myself! Just know you have people who love and care for you all the time, alright? :glomp:
Nah, it doesn't suck. It can be improved, but it's not like it's really that bad. I'm just a bit of a perfectionist sometimes, which is always a bad fault of mines. XD Anyway, keep it up! :)
This is good...although 'sports' shouldn't be capitalized to match with the rest of it...great job. :) Is...everything okay though, honey...?
Wow, this is good, and very intriguing...although you accidentally misspelled 'beat,' and the grammar needs to move just a bit smoother, but anyhow, I love it...it hooks the reader and makes them wants to know what happens next...keep it up! XD Already you're sounding very Harry Potter-like! :)
No, it's definitely isn't monotone! This is awesome! I love these new style of poems Chaser...totally! :) :glomp:
Wow, Dark, this is deep...although I think you meant to say 'where you stay...' and twice, you forgot an apostrophe for the "you're" and "nowhere" is one word, and "that's" forgot an apostrophe, and "angrier," "anger," "vanishing," "disappeared," "depression," and "despair" are accidentally misspelled. Also, some of it should have more spaces so it won't seem so long... Anyway, great job. I can almost vividly imagine the land of the dead...it's awesome! :) Awesome job! ...Although I still like light of course. XP
Wow, this is good...the story is very intriguing and keeps you hooked...although don't forget that after a dialogue, if it's supposed to end with a period, it should have a comma, like: "No thanks," I said. Be sure to vary the words more, such as 'asked,' or 'demanded,' instead of 'said'. Otherwise, great job! :) I seriously love the way the story's flowing and I can't wait to see what happens next...
lol Yeah, this was like, one of my longest poems ever. XD But anyhow, I'm glad you like it! :) *hugs*
Wow, this is good...really, the grammar, spelling...awesome! :) The storyline's pretty good, unique too, although it just has a tiny bit of a problem keeping my interest...otherwise, this is pretty great, keep it up! :) Although the title does need to be a bit more catchy...just to attract more readers! :glomp:
I'm glad they do! :) Keep on writing more if it helps! :glomp:
Nope, I've never gotten detention...I was close to getting one though...for talking in class...XD
Since you know the drill...welcome and have fun here! XD Need anything, just pm me, or any of the staff! And I'm sure you'll find plenty of Naruto fans here as well (I'm a half-Naruto-fan XD)! :glomp:
OOC: That's too bad, Dark...maybe you'll be able to find it later...? Nymph heard a ringing sound and her hand flew to pick it up. However, just as she opened it, she dropped it, her 'hello' cut in half. "Oh no..." she murmured, widening her eyes.
Agreed! They're awesome! XD
Wow this is good...great job! :) And ah, the Scarlet Ibis...that was such a sad story...
Wow...this is good...awesome Chaser, this is just awesome! XD :glomp:
Hmm...could we wait just for a little longer? Just a little bit. XD
Haha, these are all so funny...great job...oh and I'm glad you had fun yesterday, I think? :glomp:
